The cover letter is too long and repetitive of the resume. It should be shortened to 3-4 concise paragraphs that highlight the applicant's relevant qualifications and interest in the position, and request an interview. The letter reads more like an overview of the resume rather than a targeted cover letter. Contact information provided includes the applicant's work number, which employers do not want. The tone could also be strengthened by using more confident language.

1. Practical Writing Cover Letter

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