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Ban boring sentences!
There are a few ways to stop your sentences putting everyone to sleep.
[object Object],The mouse ate cheese. The  greedy   mouse  quickly  ate the  hard  cheese.
[object Object],The man got in the car. The  serious  man  carefully  got   in the  sporty  car.
[object Object],The man got in the car. The  gentleman   climbed  into the  Ferrari .
[object Object],The monkey ate some fruit. King Kong   gobbled   plenty of   bananas.
So to improve your sentences you need to… ,[object Object],[object Object],Go on give it a try, I bet you CAN do it!

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