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The summary provides feedback on an animatic, noting that the narrative was somewhat hard to follow but the dialogue was engaging. No spots were identified for special effects integration. Technical quality could be improved by adjusting audio timing and smoothing out movement in the last shots.
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- 1. ANIMATIC PEER FEEDBACK DOES IT MAKE NARRATIVE SENSE? Yes, the narrative did make some sense but the story was a bit hard to follow and to know where it was going. IS IT EASY TO SEE HOW THE SPECIAL FX WILL FIT IN? No I could not really spot any areas where special FX could be inserted. IS THE DIALOGUE ENGAGING? Yes, the dialogue is engaging, and has some humour to it which makes it engaging. WHICH SHOTS DO THINK LAST TOO LONG? No all the shots have all a resonable length in the sentence. HOW COULD THE SEQUENCE BE IMPROVED? HOW COULD THE TECHNICAL QUALITY OF THE ANIMATIC BE IMPROVED? It could be improved by moving some of the voice audio closer together to make it sound a bit more realistic. The last shots movement was a bit to much over the place.