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Ever Prieto
INTS 4550
Spring 2015
2/1/15
Personal Narrative
By Ever Prieto
INTS 4550
2/1/15
Ever Prieto
INTS 4550
Spring 2015
2/1/15
Reflection
I was eating dinner with my friends a Sunday night when my cousin, who was with me
said, “Call your brother, your parents just had a car accident”. I had left my phone charging in
the car when I went inside the restaurant where I was eating at, so I was disconnected with the
outside world. My world was just shut down in an instant. I didn’t know what was going on, I
wasn’t aware of anything and out there somehow my family was in danger. I ran to my car and
got hold of my cell phone. It had thirteen missed called and 8 text messages. I called my brother
back and he just told me “come home, it’s an emergency, our parents had a car accident in
Mexico”. He didn’t want to talk more; he didn’t say anything else just to go to his house in that
very instant. A thousand questions were running through my mind but all I could do was to drive
to my brother’s house that was 120 miles away, almost a two hour drive.
My parents had gone to Mexico that weekend because my grandpa, my mom’s Dad, was
diagnosed with cancer and got sent to the hospital. He was very sick and my mom was very sad
about that. She didn’t wanted to go to Mexico because my sister was about to be due at any
moment, since she was already 9 months pregnant of a little girl, and my mom wanted to be there
for when she went to labor. I remember talking to my mom that Friday before and convincing
her to go to Mexico and see her dad. I remember telling her “everything is going to be fine; you
can go visit my grandpa, come back, and be here for when my sister goes in for labor”. I never
imagined that God had different plans for us.
I made it home in an hour. I remember speeding the whole way wondering what had
happen and how my parents and older sister were, since she had gone with them and was also in
the car accident. It was the longest trip I had even taken. I could say I can remember every single
mile of it. I was calling everywhere and no one would tell me anything. Just that my parents and
Ever Prieto
INTS 4550
Spring 2015
2/1/15
my sister were involved in a car accident and that my mom was in critical conditions. I didn’t
know what to think, or what to expect.
Once I got home all my family was there. I am the youngest of four and I’m the only one
single and with no kids. Everything was quite. No one said anything. My bother hug me and
said the words that I will never forget, “My mom didn’t make it”. No words can explain the
feelings, no emotions can explain how I felt, and no other even in my life had impacted me like
this had done so. My world was shattered, my heart broken and I felt like if my life had been
taken away. It was a moment I will never forget that gave my life a 360 degree turn. It was
something that I had never expected to happen. Everything in one instant had changed.
Education
Math has always been my favorite subject. And since I’m always wondering how thing
are made and what can I do to make them better is what took me to Electrical engineering. But
after my mom passed away everything changed for me. I left school for a year I wasn’t doing
great in school and I was out of the engineering program. Since I had so many credits and I
wanted to finish school and get back in the program they told me I could get a degree in
Integrative Studies. I already had a minor in Electrical engineering and I was short a class to get
a minor in Spanish so all I needed was the Integrative Study courses to get a Bachelors degree
and graduate from Texas Tech, something I and my mom had always wanted.
In every job there are requirements that you need to meet to be able to work for a
company. The same thing goes for Zachry, the company that I am working for and I want to
continue working after I graduate. My long term goal is to be an Electrical Engineer for Zachry.
Zachry is a well known Engineering firm around the world and does projects for many oil field
Ever Prieto
INTS 4550
Spring 2015
2/1/15
companies. Since I have worked in the oil field as a labor before, I have the physical experience
needed and I know what it takes to actually put your hands on the job. I also know what’s going
on and what it takes to work in the oilfield. But we can’t run without walking first, so before I do
that I need to graduate as an Electrical Engineer and that comes after I graduate with my
Bachelors of Science in Integrative Studies in May. My three areas of concentration are
Electrical Engineering, Spanish, and Integrative Studies. With my Electrical Engineering I will
have the background knowledge that I need to work for the company. Since one of my
concentrations is Spanish, it’s a big help to get the job. There are a lot of Spanish speaking
personal working for the company and being able to understand, speak and write Spanish is a big
help. It’s a better way to communicate with the workers who don’t know English and to make
sure they understand what is going on in the work field. That is a big plus in my resume. Also,
with integrative studies I can prove that I have the skills and knowledge for career advancement.
It’s not only about getting the job you want, but to start from there and make it better as you
work your way up. Every company wants to see an advancement and wants their workers to
make the job better not only for themselves but for the company. They want the employee to
answer questions, solve problems, and address contemporary social issues from multiple
perspectives. With the concentration of Integrative Studies, it will help me to do exactly that. I
can provide the company with necessary career management skills for work place success and
the ability to work with others to solve any problem necessary. With these concentrations and
with my bachelors in Electrical Engineering, that I am planning on getting after I graduate in
may, I will be set to work for Zachry and reach my long term goal.
Ever Prieto
INTS 4550
Spring 2015
2/1/15
Aplication
Achieving everything like you plan does not always happen. That’s why is necessary to
stop, think, and see how are you doing in everything that you had planned. It’s necessary to see
what you are doing right and what you are doing wrong. If something is not coming out like you
had planned then some things need to change. Everyone makes mistakes and that’s part of life.
If something doesn’t comes out like you wanted you can always rearrange and make changes to
your life if something is not going the right way. That’s what life is all about, to learn from your
mistakes. When things don’t come out like you wanted, then you try again, and even harder.
That’s why I’m not going to give up until I have reached both my all of my goals.
School has been a big help. It has helped me with my resume, cover letter and a lot of
information on how to interview, what to do during interviews, during meetings, and a lot of
other informational stuff. It has also helped me to go more in detail and to make sure I research
good a company before even applying or trying to work for them. It has helped me go beyond
my knowledge and take a step further in to achieving what I want. Every Integrative Study class
that I’ve taken was of big help and everything that we did was just focused on our own personal
growth rather than anything else. Not only that but it gave me information that helped me find a
job and do something that I like doing.
When I went to interview for Zachry, the company am working for, I already knew what
to do for almost everything. I started by researching the company in detail to know everything I
could about it. I went and took my resume, cover letter and reference list to see if they had any
positions available for me. Later when they called me to go interview for them, I already knew
what to do and what not do before, during, and after the interview. I had already practice the
Ever Prieto
INTS 4550
Spring 2015
2/1/15
questions they were going to ask me, my elevator speech, and I felt pretty confident about
myself. Now that I’m working for them I thank the Integrative classes I took because everything
that I did was because I had learned it in class. Now that I’m working there I don’t only apply
my integrative study classes’ skills but also my Electrical Engineering skills. I read the
engineers schematics and thanks to my previous classes I have experience and knowledge on
that. I also use Spanish when necessary and it’s always good to be bilingual. I am not an
Electrical Engineer for them yet, but I’m on my process. Now I just need to keep on working in
achieving my school goals and that way, whenever I graduate, I will even have experience
working for Zachry as a student and it will be easy to reach my long term goal. That is to come
back to tech finish my Electrical Engineering degree and be an Electrical Engineer for Zachry
Industrial.
Connections
Nothing comes easy in life. You need to sacrifice something to obtain something better.
But sometimes life does not take you where you wanted or where you thought you would go in
the future. There are many different patterns we can take and so many routes. Things come up
that we had never expected and things happen that change your life forever. The way we address
each event and how we continue in life depends on us. There will never be an easy rout and we
have to do the best possible to accomplish our goals.
Different events have happen in my life that is a tuning position. When my mom passed
away everything went downhill. Not only did I have an irreplaceable pain in my heart but also I
tore my ACL and I needed surgery. With this I had no place for school. I needed to work and
afford my surgery and there was nothing else I could do. But I did not give up. I took all this as
Ever Prieto
INTS 4550
Spring 2015
2/1/15
a learning experience and here I am fighting to finish my career and graduate from school like
my mom always wanted me to. I find my mom’s death as a motivation as every day when I
wake up I think of her.
When I found out that I could not get back in the engineering program I also felt
devastated. I felt like everything I had worked for was gone, since I’ve always wanted to
graduate from Texas Tech. But it’s all about not giving up. I found out that I could do
Integrative studies, get a bachelors degree on that and have the possibility of going back into the
Engineering program. I only need three more semesters to finish my Electrical Engineering
Bachelors and after all the work I’ve done I don’t see it as much and that’s what I want to do.
Right now I graduate in May with a Bachelors of Science in integrative studies with
concentration in Electrical Engineering, Spanish and Integrative Studies. After I finish that I
want to come back to tech and finish my Electrical Engineering bachelors. With this I want to be
an engineer for Zachry, the company I am currently working for.
Every event in my life has led me to where I am right now and I’m happy for it. I know I
can accomplish all my goals and be someone important in life how I’ve always dreamed before.
I’m going to be the first one in my family to graduate from college and I want to make all my
family proud. I don’t take failure as something bad; it’s more like a learning experience and
something that can make you stronger and better for the future.
Ever Prieto
INTS 4550
Spring 2015
2/1/15
Personal Narrative Grading Rubric
Criteria
Points
Possible
Points
Earned
General
Paper adheres to APA formatting (title page, citations, references
page, etc.). This rubric pasted at the end of the assignment.
10
Writing is clear with appropriate grammar, spelling, and
punctuation. Headings are appropriately labeled
10
Reflection (500 words)
Summarizes and discusses a few key decisions/choices/experiences
in life.
10
Relates personal stories, in first person. 10
Education (500 words)
Discusses education journey, including degree program, 3 areas of
concentration and connections.
20
Application (500 words)
Identifies thread(s) that run through life experiences, 10
Utilizes metaphor to discuss “continuity within discontinuity” 10
Connection (500 words)
Discusses future plans/next steps. 10
Provides a convincing connection between previous sections and
future plans.
10
Total 100

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  • 1. Ever Prieto INTS 4550 Spring 2015 2/1/15 Personal Narrative By Ever Prieto INTS 4550 2/1/15
  • 2. Ever Prieto INTS 4550 Spring 2015 2/1/15 Reflection I was eating dinner with my friends a Sunday night when my cousin, who was with me said, “Call your brother, your parents just had a car accident”. I had left my phone charging in the car when I went inside the restaurant where I was eating at, so I was disconnected with the outside world. My world was just shut down in an instant. I didn’t know what was going on, I wasn’t aware of anything and out there somehow my family was in danger. I ran to my car and got hold of my cell phone. It had thirteen missed called and 8 text messages. I called my brother back and he just told me “come home, it’s an emergency, our parents had a car accident in Mexico”. He didn’t want to talk more; he didn’t say anything else just to go to his house in that very instant. A thousand questions were running through my mind but all I could do was to drive to my brother’s house that was 120 miles away, almost a two hour drive. My parents had gone to Mexico that weekend because my grandpa, my mom’s Dad, was diagnosed with cancer and got sent to the hospital. He was very sick and my mom was very sad about that. She didn’t wanted to go to Mexico because my sister was about to be due at any moment, since she was already 9 months pregnant of a little girl, and my mom wanted to be there for when she went to labor. I remember talking to my mom that Friday before and convincing her to go to Mexico and see her dad. I remember telling her “everything is going to be fine; you can go visit my grandpa, come back, and be here for when my sister goes in for labor”. I never imagined that God had different plans for us. I made it home in an hour. I remember speeding the whole way wondering what had happen and how my parents and older sister were, since she had gone with them and was also in the car accident. It was the longest trip I had even taken. I could say I can remember every single mile of it. I was calling everywhere and no one would tell me anything. Just that my parents and
  • 3. Ever Prieto INTS 4550 Spring 2015 2/1/15 my sister were involved in a car accident and that my mom was in critical conditions. I didn’t know what to think, or what to expect. Once I got home all my family was there. I am the youngest of four and I’m the only one single and with no kids. Everything was quite. No one said anything. My bother hug me and said the words that I will never forget, “My mom didn’t make it”. No words can explain the feelings, no emotions can explain how I felt, and no other even in my life had impacted me like this had done so. My world was shattered, my heart broken and I felt like if my life had been taken away. It was a moment I will never forget that gave my life a 360 degree turn. It was something that I had never expected to happen. Everything in one instant had changed. Education Math has always been my favorite subject. And since I’m always wondering how thing are made and what can I do to make them better is what took me to Electrical engineering. But after my mom passed away everything changed for me. I left school for a year I wasn’t doing great in school and I was out of the engineering program. Since I had so many credits and I wanted to finish school and get back in the program they told me I could get a degree in Integrative Studies. I already had a minor in Electrical engineering and I was short a class to get a minor in Spanish so all I needed was the Integrative Study courses to get a Bachelors degree and graduate from Texas Tech, something I and my mom had always wanted. In every job there are requirements that you need to meet to be able to work for a company. The same thing goes for Zachry, the company that I am working for and I want to continue working after I graduate. My long term goal is to be an Electrical Engineer for Zachry. Zachry is a well known Engineering firm around the world and does projects for many oil field
  • 4. Ever Prieto INTS 4550 Spring 2015 2/1/15 companies. Since I have worked in the oil field as a labor before, I have the physical experience needed and I know what it takes to actually put your hands on the job. I also know what’s going on and what it takes to work in the oilfield. But we can’t run without walking first, so before I do that I need to graduate as an Electrical Engineer and that comes after I graduate with my Bachelors of Science in Integrative Studies in May. My three areas of concentration are Electrical Engineering, Spanish, and Integrative Studies. With my Electrical Engineering I will have the background knowledge that I need to work for the company. Since one of my concentrations is Spanish, it’s a big help to get the job. There are a lot of Spanish speaking personal working for the company and being able to understand, speak and write Spanish is a big help. It’s a better way to communicate with the workers who don’t know English and to make sure they understand what is going on in the work field. That is a big plus in my resume. Also, with integrative studies I can prove that I have the skills and knowledge for career advancement. It’s not only about getting the job you want, but to start from there and make it better as you work your way up. Every company wants to see an advancement and wants their workers to make the job better not only for themselves but for the company. They want the employee to answer questions, solve problems, and address contemporary social issues from multiple perspectives. With the concentration of Integrative Studies, it will help me to do exactly that. I can provide the company with necessary career management skills for work place success and the ability to work with others to solve any problem necessary. With these concentrations and with my bachelors in Electrical Engineering, that I am planning on getting after I graduate in may, I will be set to work for Zachry and reach my long term goal.
  • 5. Ever Prieto INTS 4550 Spring 2015 2/1/15 Aplication Achieving everything like you plan does not always happen. That’s why is necessary to stop, think, and see how are you doing in everything that you had planned. It’s necessary to see what you are doing right and what you are doing wrong. If something is not coming out like you had planned then some things need to change. Everyone makes mistakes and that’s part of life. If something doesn’t comes out like you wanted you can always rearrange and make changes to your life if something is not going the right way. That’s what life is all about, to learn from your mistakes. When things don’t come out like you wanted, then you try again, and even harder. That’s why I’m not going to give up until I have reached both my all of my goals. School has been a big help. It has helped me with my resume, cover letter and a lot of information on how to interview, what to do during interviews, during meetings, and a lot of other informational stuff. It has also helped me to go more in detail and to make sure I research good a company before even applying or trying to work for them. It has helped me go beyond my knowledge and take a step further in to achieving what I want. Every Integrative Study class that I’ve taken was of big help and everything that we did was just focused on our own personal growth rather than anything else. Not only that but it gave me information that helped me find a job and do something that I like doing. When I went to interview for Zachry, the company am working for, I already knew what to do for almost everything. I started by researching the company in detail to know everything I could about it. I went and took my resume, cover letter and reference list to see if they had any positions available for me. Later when they called me to go interview for them, I already knew what to do and what not do before, during, and after the interview. I had already practice the
  • 6. Ever Prieto INTS 4550 Spring 2015 2/1/15 questions they were going to ask me, my elevator speech, and I felt pretty confident about myself. Now that I’m working for them I thank the Integrative classes I took because everything that I did was because I had learned it in class. Now that I’m working there I don’t only apply my integrative study classes’ skills but also my Electrical Engineering skills. I read the engineers schematics and thanks to my previous classes I have experience and knowledge on that. I also use Spanish when necessary and it’s always good to be bilingual. I am not an Electrical Engineer for them yet, but I’m on my process. Now I just need to keep on working in achieving my school goals and that way, whenever I graduate, I will even have experience working for Zachry as a student and it will be easy to reach my long term goal. That is to come back to tech finish my Electrical Engineering degree and be an Electrical Engineer for Zachry Industrial. Connections Nothing comes easy in life. You need to sacrifice something to obtain something better. But sometimes life does not take you where you wanted or where you thought you would go in the future. There are many different patterns we can take and so many routes. Things come up that we had never expected and things happen that change your life forever. The way we address each event and how we continue in life depends on us. There will never be an easy rout and we have to do the best possible to accomplish our goals. Different events have happen in my life that is a tuning position. When my mom passed away everything went downhill. Not only did I have an irreplaceable pain in my heart but also I tore my ACL and I needed surgery. With this I had no place for school. I needed to work and afford my surgery and there was nothing else I could do. But I did not give up. I took all this as
  • 7. Ever Prieto INTS 4550 Spring 2015 2/1/15 a learning experience and here I am fighting to finish my career and graduate from school like my mom always wanted me to. I find my mom’s death as a motivation as every day when I wake up I think of her. When I found out that I could not get back in the engineering program I also felt devastated. I felt like everything I had worked for was gone, since I’ve always wanted to graduate from Texas Tech. But it’s all about not giving up. I found out that I could do Integrative studies, get a bachelors degree on that and have the possibility of going back into the Engineering program. I only need three more semesters to finish my Electrical Engineering Bachelors and after all the work I’ve done I don’t see it as much and that’s what I want to do. Right now I graduate in May with a Bachelors of Science in integrative studies with concentration in Electrical Engineering, Spanish and Integrative Studies. After I finish that I want to come back to tech and finish my Electrical Engineering bachelors. With this I want to be an engineer for Zachry, the company I am currently working for. Every event in my life has led me to where I am right now and I’m happy for it. I know I can accomplish all my goals and be someone important in life how I’ve always dreamed before. I’m going to be the first one in my family to graduate from college and I want to make all my family proud. I don’t take failure as something bad; it’s more like a learning experience and something that can make you stronger and better for the future.
  • 8. Ever Prieto INTS 4550 Spring 2015 2/1/15 Personal Narrative Grading Rubric Criteria Points Possible Points Earned General Paper adheres to APA formatting (title page, citations, references page, etc.). This rubric pasted at the end of the assignment. 10 Writing is clear with appropriate grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Headings are appropriately labeled 10 Reflection (500 words) Summarizes and discusses a few key decisions/choices/experiences in life. 10 Relates personal stories, in first person. 10 Education (500 words) Discusses education journey, including degree program, 3 areas of concentration and connections. 20 Application (500 words) Identifies thread(s) that run through life experiences, 10 Utilizes metaphor to discuss “continuity within discontinuity” 10 Connection (500 words) Discusses future plans/next steps. 10 Provides a convincing connection between previous sections and future plans. 10 Total 100