1. Extended Step-Outline Sheet
Scene No
3
Page No
3
Slugline
Outdoors
Endpoint of last scene
Dropping phone and retreating from pond in panic
Characters in scene
James
Point of scene
Park and Street and Kebab Shop
Conflict
Phone lost, annoyed
Ending / central
question
Scene description (without dialogue) focusing on key micro aspects (mise-en-scène,
camera, sound, editing, etc)
This scene will start of him standing back up from the pond and turning around in anger and
he will have an eyeline shot of the kebab shop. He will be crossing the street and the driver of
this car ( Kerim ) will nearly collide with him, James, at first, reacts, and asks what he's doing
and the driver will ask if he needs a lift. After furthur conversation, James gets in the car and
they take off from the scene.