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Part II: Describing Revision
Before turning in your final version, it is important that you
work on revising your writing. Remember that this includes
proofreading and organization. After you have done that, write
a couple of paragraphs in which you describe what you did to
revise your essay. What did you change about it? How did you
try to clarify ideas? Did you spend a lot of time proofreading?
What did you find to be most valuable about the revision
process?

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