2. CONCEPT
• The concept is an eye-catching short action/scifi film. My USP‟s are that it‟s got both
action and some more sensitive parts as well as a massive twist to end. This combination
makes the audience go threw multiple emotions and keeps their attention.

3. NARRATIVE OUTLINE
• Alphalite is about 2 people (Abi and Levi) who escape the city and head into the woods
away from the advancing intruders. These intruders are looking for the Alphalite rocks that
are under the earths surface but will destroy anything that gets in their way. They have
destroyed whole towns and cities whilst trying to find the rocks. The intruders need the
rocks in order to prolong their lives. Levi the lead character gets bitten by one of the
intruders and it changes his life forever.

4. INTERTEXTS

5. SHOT LIST
• Alphalite – Plot/Story line
• Key= *Sound*
• Scene 1
• Flashes of characters running through trees – Levi leading Abby (Maybe crossing the line) Wide, Mid, Close
• Characters catching breath/stopped behind a tree crouched. Wide, Mid.
• Conversation (General speaking) Singles/close ups, Pull out to wide.
• Levi pears round from side of the tree. Mid from behind Levi. Close up of Levi‟s face looking screen left to right .
• Cut to low mid shot of Intruders boots/shoes.
• Close up Levi‟s reaction – Tells the woman to be quite.
• Mid/Wide of both characters behind tree – Levi signalling to be quite towards the woman – puts hand over woman‟s mouth
• Close up/Single of woman with hand over her mouth.
• Insert of Intruders feet walking – *Twigs Snap*
• Cut back to 2 shot of characters – Woman mumbles (Try‟s to scream)
• Cut back to Intruders feet walking – feet stop due to woman‟s noise.
• Two shot of characters looking at each other. – Awkward moments – takes hand off of her mouth.
• Close up of Radio/Walky talky going off. – Intruders feet stop (Insert)

6. • Mid/Close up of Intruder rolling grenade
• Mid/close up of Levi and woman behind the tree
• Right third of shot – grenade rolls into shot.
• Levi looks down at the grenade
• Close up of Levi‟s reaction to the grenade
• Cut to wide of the woods from the field.
• Explosion occurs from in the woods (camera shakes)
• Scene 2
• Cuts to low/ground level wide/close up of the two characters on the floor with dirt landing on top/over them .
• Pan/glide back from head to feet of characters
• Intruder‟s feet enter shot from screen left.
• Point of view shot from the perspective of the Intruder looking down at the characters (red colour grading )
• Side/close up of characters on the ground looking up at the invaders – Gun enters from top left corner and is
pointed in the characters faces.
• Cut to black.

7. • Scene 3
• Cut to close up/Mid of Intruders mask *Gun shot is fired*
• Continuous shot - Pans to the right to reveal man stood behind with a gun pointed at the Intruders head –
Intruder falls to the ground (Dead).
• Wide shot of the three characters
• Mega wide. Everything.
• Low wide/Intruder on foreground with legs and ankles in mid ground. (Focus Pull when Intruder
bits/Scratches leg).
• Levi Kicks intruder, levis Vision starting to blur (Holding head and rubbing eyes) Mid shot .
• Levi‟s Perspective/ blurred out of focus(looks at hands to focus up)/ falls to the ground.
• Falls to floor. Mid.
• Cut to black.
• Levi‟s perspective/opens eyes to find two characters looking over him asking if he‟s alright .
• Extreme close up on Levi‟s eyes – Eyes open and are red/bloody
• Cuts to black.
• End Credits

8. SCRIPT
• Alphalite script.
• Voice over:
• “It‟s been 3 years after the discovery of alphalite and 4 months since the arrival of the intruders. Whole towns and cities
destroyed for one rock, a rock that holds the key to the revolution of the intruders.”
• Int. Woods
• Levi : ( out of breath ) “ stay here”
• Levi leans out from behind a tree.
• Abby: (Out of breath)
• Levi: “I think we‟ve lost them”
• Abby: (sigh of relief) “What are they?”
• Levi: “No one knows what they are and where they came from all we do know is they are after the alphalite”
• Abby: “Alphalite? But why?”
• Levi: “ The crystal shards inside the alphalite rock act as a sort of solid case in which energy can be stored, add that to their
body structure and they can live for years on one rock”
• Abby: “So they need it to survive?” “ So why don‟t we just destroy all the alphalite?”
• Levi pears round from behind the tree and instantly leans back in and puts his hand on Abby’s mouth.
• Levi: “Ssshhh”
• Abby: (muffled screams)
• Levi slowly takes his hand of Abby’s mouth. Abby is still in shock.
• Levi: “Don‟t move a muscle”
• Abby: (silent/ quietly crying)
• Levi’s radio go off
• Levi: “No.”, “Dam it”
• Abby: “Turn it off”

9. • Levi: “I‟m trying”
• Levi Turns off the radio
• Levi + Abby: (Sigh of relief)
• Abby: “We‟re going to die, aren‟t we?”
• Levi Puts his hands on Abby’s face
• Levi: “ Look at me, I‟m gunna get us out of here alive I promise”
• sLevi turns to see a grenade roll next to him
• Levi: “Run!”
• Levi and Abby are both lead on the ground covered in dirt. Levi rolls over towards Abby.
• Levi: “Are you ok?”
• Abby: (no response)
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• Levi rolls Abby over and she starts breathing and gasps for air
• Levi: “You had me scared for a minute then”
• Abby: (stares forward)
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• Levi slowly rolls over to see and intruder pointing a gun at him. Abby is frozen with shock.
• Levi: “I‟m sorry Abby, I never meant to get you into this mess but I hoped I‟d get you out of it, and I‟ve failed”
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10. • Abby closes her eyes. A gun shot is fired. Abby re-opens her eyes.
• Adam: “Just thought I pop down and help you two out, looked like you had yourselves in a bit of tricky situation”, “ My names
Adam by the way, I‟ve been looking after these woods for years, it‟s kind of become my home ”
• Abby gets up and hugs Adam
• Adam: “steady on”.
• Levi walks over to the Intruders body
• Levi: “ I‟ve never seen anything like it”
• Adam: “ These woods are full of them, I think there must be tones of alphalite in the rocks below us that they are after”
• Abby: “Is it dead?”
• Adam: “Yep, one shot to the central lobe of the brain usually does it”
• The intruder reaches out and scratches Levi’s leg.
• Levi: “I thought you said it was dead”
• Adam looks down through the woods
• Adam: “ you better go there will be more coming soon, just remember to stay out of sight”
• Abby starts walking off.
• Abby: “Levi, come on”
• Levi’s vision and hearing is blurred and he can’t walk properly. He collapses to the ground.
• Abby: (muffled words) “Levi, can you hear me”
• Adam: (muffled words) “Stay with us buddy”
• Abby: (muffled words) “ Come on Levi, don‟t give up know, you promised me”
• Levi closes his eyes. He then re-opens them and they are red.

11. CASTING/ COSTUME/ MAKE UP
The cast for the short film included:
• Lawrence Purnell – Levi
• Hannah Gooding – Abi
• Elliot Jones – Adam
• Ed Collis – Intruder
Costumes:
• Intruder wore a black jacket, Black trousers, large boots, a gas mask with a balaclava on
underneath and he carried a submachine gun and 2 grenades.
• Adam, Levi and Abi wore normal clothing.

12. Make up:
• Abi had a cut over her left eye and on the left side of her cheek and Levi had a cut on his
right cheek. Both characters also had make up added to make them look a bit dirty and
tired. When Levi get scratched there is a large cut on his leg which is bleeding. All the
make up was done by Ellie Hogg.

13. LOCATIONS
• The short film short in the woods at the top of keynsham.

14. FINISHED SHORT FILM:

15. FEEDBACK
I entered „Alphalite‟ into the Yobi.tv film competition and it has got through to the finals. It
is in the final 20 short films and voting for the winner starts in November. I have also had
over 300 views on YouTube in less than a month.