Poetry Dedication Project

        Iliana Tineo
My Mother
   This is dedicated to my mother because she’s
always been there for us. Even after everything we
went through after being taken away from her, she
  remained strong and got us back. She’s a brave
 and smart woman and my inspiration. Everything
she does is done for her four children. Everything I
do is because of her. Each breath I take is because
            of the love she has shown us.

                 I love you mom.
‘Mother o’ Mine’ by Rudyard Kipling
          If I were hanged on the highest hill,
           Mother o' mine, O mother o' mine!
       I know whose love would follow me still,
           Mother o' mine, O mother o' mine!
         If I were drowned in the deepest sea,
           Mother o' mine, O mother o' mine!
    I know whose tears would come down to me,
           Mother o' mine, O mother o' mine!
 If I were damned of body and soul, I know whose
              prayers would make me whole,
           Mother o' mine, O mother o' mine!
Mother o’ Mine Explanation
A good mother can be described as someone who goes overboard with love
and doesn’t let anything stand between her and her baby. A good mother is
someone who will always consider their child first in her life.

This might be what Kipling was trying to say when he spoke about his own
mother. Even if he was drowned in the deepest sea, she would grieve his
death until he felt it himself.

This story relates to my relationship with my mother because I have noticed
that she’s the kind of person who would give her own life to save her child.
She went through so much to get us children back after we were taken away
from her for no reason. She would pray that we come back to her and she
promised to raise us even better than before. In my eyes, my mother did the
best job in the world on raising us. We’ve never rebelled against her and what
she tells us to do.

And so, Mother o’ Mine would go to the ends of the world to be able to hold
her children one more time. And she did.
‘Parents’ by William Meredith
  What it must be like to be an angel             The effrontery, barely imaginable,
 or a squirrel, we can imagine sooner.            of having caused us. And of how.

                                                         Their lives: surely
   The last time we go to bed good,
                                                     we can do better than that.
 they are there, lying about darkness.
                                               This goes on for a long time. Everything
    They dandle us once too often,              they do is wrong, and the worst thing,
these friends who become our enemies.
                                                        they all do it, is to die,
                                                taking with them the last explanation,
    Suddenly one day, their juniors
     are as old as we yearn to be.
                                                  how we came out of the wet sea
                                                   or wherever they got us from,
  They get wrinkles where it is better
   smooth, odd coughs, and smells.                       taking the last link
                                                      of that chain with them.
     It is grotesque how they go on
                                                   Father, mother, we cry, wrinkling,
    loving us, we go on loving them
                                         to our uncomprehending children and grandchildren.
Parents Explanation
This poem shows us one of the things most of us dread
the most; parents getting old and dying. It becomes a
touchy subject but you learn from your parents, you learn
and you teach your children who then teach their own.
Good parents are a trophy many take for granted
nowadays.

My mom raised my older brother and I without a father.
Although this was hard for her, she never complained.
She re-married and although she had difficult times
throughout that marriage, she still stayed strong. She’s an
example to my entire family of how to be happy with
what you have and not sad because of what you don’t
have.
‘Sonnets Are Full of Love, and This is
   My Tome’ by Christina Rossetti
           Sonnets are full of love, and this my tome
             Has many sonnets: so here now shall be
           One sonnet more, a love sonnet, from me
         To her whose heart is my heart’s quiet home,
          To my first Love, my Mother, on whose knee
           I learnt love-lore that is not troublesome;
               Whose service is my special dignity,
            And she my loadstar while I go and come
           And so because you love me, and because
           I love you, Mother, I have woven a wreath
     Of rhymes wherewith to crown your honored name:
         In you not fourscore years can dim the flame
      Of love, whose blessed glow transcends the laws
        Of time and change and mortal life and death.
‘Sonnets Are Full of Love, and This is
       My Tome’ Explanation
When reading Christina Rossetti’s work, you come to find that she had
a tight knit relationship with her mother. This might be why she has
become one of my favorite poets. She describes her mother’s heart as
being home to her own heart. This is how I feel when I think about my
mother. She’s kept me warm and secured for so long. She gives up
things she could have for herself and, instead, gives them to us, her
children. She always carries a smile and has taught us to be grateful.
She loves me and always expresses it towards me.

She’s even shown interest in everything I do. She asks me about my
past and is always oh so concerned about what has happened when I
was in my foster home. She’s become my best friend and a very good
one at that. Not ever before have I had a friend who is so loyal, caring,
and honest at the same time. No, never will I find someone this
amazing.
‘To My Mother’ by Robert Louis
         Stevenson
 You too, my mother, read my rhymes
    For love of unforgotten times,
And you may chance to hear once more
     The little feet along the floor.
‘To My Mother’ Explanation
Stevenson made this poem very short but very much heart felt. He insists that
his mother read his poems so she can remember how much he loved her and
vice versa. He also states so she can remember unforgotten times. Perhaps
things that might seem little to some, but indeed aren’t to them.

The two lines may have different meaning to many. But in my eyes, I see it as
Stevenson wanting his mother to remember when he was just a smile child
and his feet were small; perhaps when he was just learning to walk. This takes
me back to those times when it was just me and my mother. She always
seems to make time for me and her only since I’m the only girl. We can go out
and watch a movie or two or we can just talk in the car.

Those are things many people take for granted, but I’ll always keep them in
my heart because they mean a lot to me. Even when we have small chats,
they always seem to make me feel so much more happy.
‘Mother Doesn’t Want a Dog’ by
             Judith Viorst
  Mother doesn't want a dog.         Mother doesn't want a dog.
    Mother says they smell,             Mother says they shed,
 And never sit when you say sit,    And always let the strangers in
     Or even when you yell.           And bark at friends instead,
And when you come home late at     And do disgraceful things on rugs,
              night                   And track mud on the floor,
   And there is ice and snow,       And flop upon your bed at night
You have to go back out because      And snore their doggy snore.
    The dumb dog has to go.
                                     Mother doesn't want a dog.
                                       She's making a mistake.
                                   Because, more than a dog, I think
                                     She will not want this snake.
‘Mother Doesn’t Wan a Dog’
              Explanation
This poem is a much more joyful one. It brings back so many
memories about arguments my brother and I have had about
pets with her. She says they smell and they make messes. But
what made me even more happy was the ending; Because,
more than a dog, she will not like this snake.

I’m sure she’d laugh if she read this poem knowing that I
always ask her for a snake and her answer is always typical;
no. But even small arguments like this can make one laugh
and learn to love their mother even more.

This poem shows the comical side of being a mother.
‘Caring’ Original Poem by Iliana Tineo
          Although we’ve had our laughs
           Although we’ve had our cries
    I’ll never forget the things you’ve done
             To help us from our minds

          Like stopping us from fights
      Or hugging us when we’re down
      All this you’ve done to help us up
           My father would be proud
‘Caring’ Explanation
I wrote this poem to show how much I appreciate
my mother. All the things she’s put aside for us
really makes me proud. She never chose sides when
there was an argument/non-physical fight going on
with my siblings. She always used her sweet words
to teach us that we were wrong and how we can
improve.

The last sentence shows that my deceased father
would had been very proud with everything she’s
done for us kids.
‘Momma Bird’ Original Poem by Iliana
              Tineo
                  Out of all the humans
                     You are the best
                  You’ve kept us warm
                   In your stringy nest

         Though having to move from place to place
            You always kept a smile on your face
               You taught us to be very strong
        You taught us when we were right and wrong

          From tree to tree you watched us grow
          You warmed us up when it would snow

                And so I thank you lovingly
                You taught us to fly freely
‘Momma Bird’ Explanation
In this poem I compared my mother to a bird who keeps
her babies warm until they hatch. She never leaves her
birds behind when she moves from place to place and she
never complains when she takes us from tree to tree.

It also states that she warmed us up when it would snow.
It symbolic to me because my mother has always assured
herself that we were warm and comfortable with who we
were surrounded by and where we were. She always
made sure we were happy. If we were not happy, she
wasn’t either.
‘Responsibility Rubs Off’ Original
       Poem by Iliana Tineo
              One, two, three, four,
  She watched when we first crawled the floor
             Five, six, seven, eight,
         She always asked us if we ate
           Nine, ten, eleven, twelve,
     We’re turning old, we’ll bath ourselves
      Thirteen, fourteen, fifteen, sixteen,
Now we’re old enough to use the washing machine
‘Responsibility Rubs Off’ Explanation
This poem was written to show a small piece of
what a mother is like during a couple of years. It
also was meant to show that a mother has much
responsibility, but when we reach a certain age,
that responsibility rubs off on us and now we
need to do everything our mother has done for
us. It’s meant to be comical in a loving way. I
wanted to show that parents are still supposed
to be strict, but in a loving way.
‘Rules and Jewels’ Original Poem by
            Iliana Tineo
                     No candy
                     No biting
                     No hitting
                    No fighting
           Mama gives us too may rules
          Lets go play with all her jewels
                   No scratching
                   No screaming
                   No punching
                   No dreaming
         Now that’s is just way too much
       Mama, where do you keep your blush?
‘Rules and Jewels’ Explanation
I wrote this poem to show a more comical side of being a
mother. I’m not a mother, but I have been in these kids
position. Mothers are strict and sometimes for the best of
reasons. But children, like myself, don’t understand it for a
while and just think that parents are too old to understand
what’s going on.

I tried to make this one relate to experiences I’ve had with my
mother. She tells me not to do something, when I do it, what
she says will probably be the consequence sadly turns into the
consequence. Being a girl, breaking into your mother’s room
to play with her makeup and jewelry is done often. This is just
a fun poem to show both the child’s and the mother’s point of
view.
‘I Love You’ Original Poem by Iliana
                Tineo
                There you laid
             With hardly a breath
           You looked into my eyes
          You seemed so depressed
   But there you went and got the energy
    To hug me and tell me I’m everything
You said you cared and that you’d never leave
  Every moment with you is a new memory
‘I Love You’ Explanation
This poem was written when remembering a
tough situation my family and I went through in
2011. We almost lost my mother but she found
the strength to keep living. This shows that a
parent’s love for their children never leaves.
Instead, it grows more and more with every
breath they take. Even while in a hospital bed,
my mother’s only worry was us, her children.
Bibliography
• http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMI
  D/5868
• http://www.slideshare.net/?ss
• Google Images

Poetry dedication project

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    My Mother This is dedicated to my mother because she’s always been there for us. Even after everything we went through after being taken away from her, she remained strong and got us back. She’s a brave and smart woman and my inspiration. Everything she does is done for her four children. Everything I do is because of her. Each breath I take is because of the love she has shown us. I love you mom.
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    ‘Mother o’ Mine’by Rudyard Kipling If I were hanged on the highest hill, Mother o' mine, O mother o' mine! I know whose love would follow me still, Mother o' mine, O mother o' mine! If I were drowned in the deepest sea, Mother o' mine, O mother o' mine! I know whose tears would come down to me, Mother o' mine, O mother o' mine! If I were damned of body and soul, I know whose prayers would make me whole, Mother o' mine, O mother o' mine!
  • 4.
    Mother o’ MineExplanation A good mother can be described as someone who goes overboard with love and doesn’t let anything stand between her and her baby. A good mother is someone who will always consider their child first in her life. This might be what Kipling was trying to say when he spoke about his own mother. Even if he was drowned in the deepest sea, she would grieve his death until he felt it himself. This story relates to my relationship with my mother because I have noticed that she’s the kind of person who would give her own life to save her child. She went through so much to get us children back after we were taken away from her for no reason. She would pray that we come back to her and she promised to raise us even better than before. In my eyes, my mother did the best job in the world on raising us. We’ve never rebelled against her and what she tells us to do. And so, Mother o’ Mine would go to the ends of the world to be able to hold her children one more time. And she did.
  • 5.
    ‘Parents’ by WilliamMeredith What it must be like to be an angel The effrontery, barely imaginable, or a squirrel, we can imagine sooner. of having caused us. And of how. Their lives: surely The last time we go to bed good, we can do better than that. they are there, lying about darkness. This goes on for a long time. Everything They dandle us once too often, they do is wrong, and the worst thing, these friends who become our enemies. they all do it, is to die, taking with them the last explanation, Suddenly one day, their juniors are as old as we yearn to be. how we came out of the wet sea or wherever they got us from, They get wrinkles where it is better smooth, odd coughs, and smells. taking the last link of that chain with them. It is grotesque how they go on Father, mother, we cry, wrinkling, loving us, we go on loving them to our uncomprehending children and grandchildren.
  • 6.
    Parents Explanation This poemshows us one of the things most of us dread the most; parents getting old and dying. It becomes a touchy subject but you learn from your parents, you learn and you teach your children who then teach their own. Good parents are a trophy many take for granted nowadays. My mom raised my older brother and I without a father. Although this was hard for her, she never complained. She re-married and although she had difficult times throughout that marriage, she still stayed strong. She’s an example to my entire family of how to be happy with what you have and not sad because of what you don’t have.
  • 7.
    ‘Sonnets Are Fullof Love, and This is My Tome’ by Christina Rossetti Sonnets are full of love, and this my tome Has many sonnets: so here now shall be One sonnet more, a love sonnet, from me To her whose heart is my heart’s quiet home, To my first Love, my Mother, on whose knee I learnt love-lore that is not troublesome; Whose service is my special dignity, And she my loadstar while I go and come And so because you love me, and because I love you, Mother, I have woven a wreath Of rhymes wherewith to crown your honored name: In you not fourscore years can dim the flame Of love, whose blessed glow transcends the laws Of time and change and mortal life and death.
  • 8.
    ‘Sonnets Are Fullof Love, and This is My Tome’ Explanation When reading Christina Rossetti’s work, you come to find that she had a tight knit relationship with her mother. This might be why she has become one of my favorite poets. She describes her mother’s heart as being home to her own heart. This is how I feel when I think about my mother. She’s kept me warm and secured for so long. She gives up things she could have for herself and, instead, gives them to us, her children. She always carries a smile and has taught us to be grateful. She loves me and always expresses it towards me. She’s even shown interest in everything I do. She asks me about my past and is always oh so concerned about what has happened when I was in my foster home. She’s become my best friend and a very good one at that. Not ever before have I had a friend who is so loyal, caring, and honest at the same time. No, never will I find someone this amazing.
  • 9.
    ‘To My Mother’by Robert Louis Stevenson You too, my mother, read my rhymes For love of unforgotten times, And you may chance to hear once more The little feet along the floor.
  • 10.
    ‘To My Mother’Explanation Stevenson made this poem very short but very much heart felt. He insists that his mother read his poems so she can remember how much he loved her and vice versa. He also states so she can remember unforgotten times. Perhaps things that might seem little to some, but indeed aren’t to them. The two lines may have different meaning to many. But in my eyes, I see it as Stevenson wanting his mother to remember when he was just a smile child and his feet were small; perhaps when he was just learning to walk. This takes me back to those times when it was just me and my mother. She always seems to make time for me and her only since I’m the only girl. We can go out and watch a movie or two or we can just talk in the car. Those are things many people take for granted, but I’ll always keep them in my heart because they mean a lot to me. Even when we have small chats, they always seem to make me feel so much more happy.
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    ‘Mother Doesn’t Wanta Dog’ by Judith Viorst Mother doesn't want a dog. Mother doesn't want a dog. Mother says they smell, Mother says they shed, And never sit when you say sit, And always let the strangers in Or even when you yell. And bark at friends instead, And when you come home late at And do disgraceful things on rugs, night And track mud on the floor, And there is ice and snow, And flop upon your bed at night You have to go back out because And snore their doggy snore. The dumb dog has to go. Mother doesn't want a dog. She's making a mistake. Because, more than a dog, I think She will not want this snake.
  • 12.
    ‘Mother Doesn’t Wana Dog’ Explanation This poem is a much more joyful one. It brings back so many memories about arguments my brother and I have had about pets with her. She says they smell and they make messes. But what made me even more happy was the ending; Because, more than a dog, she will not like this snake. I’m sure she’d laugh if she read this poem knowing that I always ask her for a snake and her answer is always typical; no. But even small arguments like this can make one laugh and learn to love their mother even more. This poem shows the comical side of being a mother.
  • 13.
    ‘Caring’ Original Poemby Iliana Tineo Although we’ve had our laughs Although we’ve had our cries I’ll never forget the things you’ve done To help us from our minds Like stopping us from fights Or hugging us when we’re down All this you’ve done to help us up My father would be proud
  • 14.
    ‘Caring’ Explanation I wrotethis poem to show how much I appreciate my mother. All the things she’s put aside for us really makes me proud. She never chose sides when there was an argument/non-physical fight going on with my siblings. She always used her sweet words to teach us that we were wrong and how we can improve. The last sentence shows that my deceased father would had been very proud with everything she’s done for us kids.
  • 15.
    ‘Momma Bird’ OriginalPoem by Iliana Tineo Out of all the humans You are the best You’ve kept us warm In your stringy nest Though having to move from place to place You always kept a smile on your face You taught us to be very strong You taught us when we were right and wrong From tree to tree you watched us grow You warmed us up when it would snow And so I thank you lovingly You taught us to fly freely
  • 16.
    ‘Momma Bird’ Explanation Inthis poem I compared my mother to a bird who keeps her babies warm until they hatch. She never leaves her birds behind when she moves from place to place and she never complains when she takes us from tree to tree. It also states that she warmed us up when it would snow. It symbolic to me because my mother has always assured herself that we were warm and comfortable with who we were surrounded by and where we were. She always made sure we were happy. If we were not happy, she wasn’t either.
  • 17.
    ‘Responsibility Rubs Off’Original Poem by Iliana Tineo One, two, three, four, She watched when we first crawled the floor Five, six, seven, eight, She always asked us if we ate Nine, ten, eleven, twelve, We’re turning old, we’ll bath ourselves Thirteen, fourteen, fifteen, sixteen, Now we’re old enough to use the washing machine
  • 18.
    ‘Responsibility Rubs Off’Explanation This poem was written to show a small piece of what a mother is like during a couple of years. It also was meant to show that a mother has much responsibility, but when we reach a certain age, that responsibility rubs off on us and now we need to do everything our mother has done for us. It’s meant to be comical in a loving way. I wanted to show that parents are still supposed to be strict, but in a loving way.
  • 19.
    ‘Rules and Jewels’Original Poem by Iliana Tineo No candy No biting No hitting No fighting Mama gives us too may rules Lets go play with all her jewels No scratching No screaming No punching No dreaming Now that’s is just way too much Mama, where do you keep your blush?
  • 20.
    ‘Rules and Jewels’Explanation I wrote this poem to show a more comical side of being a mother. I’m not a mother, but I have been in these kids position. Mothers are strict and sometimes for the best of reasons. But children, like myself, don’t understand it for a while and just think that parents are too old to understand what’s going on. I tried to make this one relate to experiences I’ve had with my mother. She tells me not to do something, when I do it, what she says will probably be the consequence sadly turns into the consequence. Being a girl, breaking into your mother’s room to play with her makeup and jewelry is done often. This is just a fun poem to show both the child’s and the mother’s point of view.
  • 21.
    ‘I Love You’Original Poem by Iliana Tineo There you laid With hardly a breath You looked into my eyes You seemed so depressed But there you went and got the energy To hug me and tell me I’m everything You said you cared and that you’d never leave Every moment with you is a new memory
  • 22.
    ‘I Love You’Explanation This poem was written when remembering a tough situation my family and I went through in 2011. We almost lost my mother but she found the strength to keep living. This shows that a parent’s love for their children never leaves. Instead, it grows more and more with every breath they take. Even while in a hospital bed, my mother’s only worry was us, her children.
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    Bibliography • http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMI D/5868 • http://www.slideshare.net/?ss • Google Images