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Critise
1. Critic
Gaizka and Xabier
I think that the presentation is very simple because they are not colours
and they are not photographs. I think that the paragraphs are very short
but the information is enough.The information you gave is not very
varied.
I would like to add few opinions, feelings and comments in the paragraphs
and in the information. It would be better with your point of view. On the
one hand you have to organise better your information using difference
tittles and colours. On the other hand it is well because are not spelling
and grammar mistakes.
Let me end up by saying that you did it properly but you can improved the
presentation. I’m sure that you will progress for the next time.