1. Audience Feedback for Mock Ups
The feedback that I got for my DPS shows that ‘DPS 2’ was the most popular. This was because DPS 1
was said to have too much space between the features on the page which was not too popular
amongst the focus group. There was also a criticism that the layout of the page may come across as
too formal for the rock genre and demographic for which I am creating the magazine for. DPS 2
Looked busier but still maintained a level of simplicity, making for an easier read for the audience.
Out of my three contents page mock ups CP 1 was chosen by the focus group as the best. The reason
given for this was that it was more exciting to look at than the others. The