1. ANIMATIC PEER FEEDBACK
DOES IT MAKE NARRATIVE SENSE?
i think the narrative flowed really well
together and it felt like a nice film
IS IT EASY TO SEE HOW THE SPECIAL FX
WILL FIT IN?
yeah you could see in video where special effects are. for
example at the end with the two hand together electric is
made
IS THE DIALOGUE ENGAGING?
the dialogue is short and simple and keeps your attention. it
doesn't bore you
WHICH SHOTS DO THINK LAST TOO LONG?
the middle of the video where what is happening at the
school, could be shorter
HOW COULD THE SEQUENCE BE IMPROVED?
have the voices more energetic
HOW COULD THE TECHNICAL QUALITY OF
THE ANIMATIC BE IMPROVED?
have the electrical sparks sound effects