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INT. GOE ACADEMY RECEPTION.
ZEN
Hello, I take it that you are
Jox?
JOX
Ye-Yeah... That's me.
ZEN puts his hand on JOX's shoulder reassuringly, to which
Jox stops being so tense.
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ZEN
Don't be afraid, it's okay. My
name is Zen and I am the
principal of the Garden of Eden
Academy. We accommodate for all
young adults like you.
Zen smiles at Jox, but Jox frowns.
JOX
But I don't like to remember
that i'm not normal...
ZEN
Don't worry, youZen teleports around Jox, while Jox looks around him
trying to keep up with Zen's image
ZEN
...Are just like everyone else
here. Here you can learn to make
use of your ability that you
have learnt. Come, let me show
you around.
Zen and Jox begin to walk around the corridors of the
Garden of Eden. As they walk through the school, children
pass him, showing all types of abilities. One child holds
fire in his hand, while another creates a double of
himself and high fives himself. A girl plays with a
miniature tornado that she's conjured up. Zen and Jox
reach the basketball field.
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EXT. BASKETBALL FIELD
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ZEN
Go on then, go and play
basketball. You will have your
first lesson at noon, in a
hour's time. Don't be late!
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JOX looks nervous, looking into the distance as ZEN walks
off, back into the building. Nearby, a group of 5
basketball players watch him as JOX walks towards them.
ROCKY comes running over.
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ROCKY
You must be the new guy, welcome
dude! I'm Ricky, but the others
call me Rocky. Probably because
of my power!
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Rocky pushes up a pillar made of rock up to lean on. Jox
looks bewildered but impressed.
JOX
Hey, i'm Jox. I didn't believe
that anyone else had powers and
I especially didn't believe
there was a school for people
like me, but that's cool!
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ROCKY
Oh yeah, me too man! what's your
power?
Jox suddenly flares up and becomes a light source, light
beams off him. Rocky and the basketballers in the
background look away, 3 of them rubbing their eyes and
moaning about the flare.
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ROCKY
I admit, that's pretty cool.
Come play basketball with us!
There's me, Jordan, Daniel, Nick
and Sylvastas.
Sylvastas, Jordan, Daniel and Nick are all saying hello
simultaneously.
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SYLVASTAS
Hey.
JORDAN
What's up?
DANIEL
Hey dude.
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NICK
Hey man.
ROCKY
Guys, this is Jox. He's new
here, he's playing with us. One
rule: No powers!
JOX, ROCKY and the others all start playing basketball.
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INT. SCHOOL CLASSROOM.
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JOX takes his seat in class nervously. JAYNE walks in to
the classroom full of first time students.
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JAYNE
Good morning guys, my name is
Jayne Harboris, but you can just
call me Jayne. I'm going to be
teaching you all how to mentor
and work with your powers
throughout your time here.
As JAYNE talks, the scene cuts to children in the class
playing around with their powers. SYVLASTAS creates fire
in his hand and plays with it in his palm, while NICK
creates ice in his hand.
JAYNE
While you are here, I, as well
as many other mentors, will
watch you turn your powers into
something you can use to become
secondNICK drops his ice and it smashes onto the ground.
NICK
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JAYNE
...nature. It's okay, you'll
learn how to control that later.
Firstly though, we need a
volunteer.
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SYLVASTAS smiles at JOX.
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SYLVASTAS
You should put your hand up.
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JOX
Are-are you sure?
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SYLVASTAS puts JOX's hand up for him.
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JAYNE
Ahh, here we are? What's your
name?
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JOX
They-they call me Jox.
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JAYNE
Duh, genius! Your name is Jox!
Okay, show everyone what you
got!
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JOX shines brighter than he has shined before, as everyone
turns back after he has shone, many are moaning and
rubbing their eyes. JAYNE groans as she rubs her eyes.
JAYNE
Well... I'm dizzy, and that was
one of the best uses of powers
from a first student i've ever
seen. Well done.
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Sharmin: I like the supporting teacher
Caleb Browning 15 Nov, 2013 13:58
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Sharmin: It's quite typical of the story line.
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Moddy: Works well as it gives the spectator a bigger view of the
school.
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More description so I added more!
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Sharmin: Why doesn't he know about the collage? Edit: I changed it
all so that he knows but he didn't believe it. -C
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Added some extra in to give a better effect.
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Moddy: Nice introduction to your characters.
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