2020 Storyboards for an original show idea by Max Paddock.

1. Mail Kid
The Water-Soaker
TV Comedy
Age 7-15

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David, riding on Mona, arrives at Lin's house.
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David, riding on Mona, arrives at Lin's house.
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David, riding on Mona, arrives at Lin's house.
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David, riding on Mona, arrives at Lin's house.
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David, riding on Mona, arrives at Lin's house.
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David, riding on Mona, arrives at Lin's house.
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David, riding on Mona, arrives at Lin's house.
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David, riding on Mona, arrives at Lin's house.
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David tip toes to the door
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David tip toes to the door
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David tip toes to the door
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David tip toes to the door
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David tip toes to the door
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David looks to Mona (off screen).
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David: Shhhhhh....
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David twirls in the air
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David twirls in the air
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David rings the doorbell
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David rings the doorbell
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David notices he still is holding the water soaker and
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David fumbles the water soaker
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David fumbles the water soaker
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David fumbles the water soaker
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David catches the water soaker
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And hides the water soaker behind his back
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Lin(Off-Camera): Comin!
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Lin: Yes?
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Lin: Hello?
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Lin: Oh no. Its you.
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David: Hey Lin!
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David: Look what I got!
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Lin: What do you-
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David blasts Lin with the water soaker
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Lin: DAVID!
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Lin: Why would you do that!
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David: Wow! haha, you're soaking.
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Lin: Yeah, and it hurts! Where did you-
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Water blast
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Lin wipes her face
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Lin wipes her face
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Lin wipes her face
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Lin: Stop that. Where did you-
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Water blast
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Lin: David,
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Lin: where-
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Water Blast
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Water Blast
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Door rumbles
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Lin takes a deep breath in.
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Lin: Phew...
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Water blasts down the door
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Water blasts down the door
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The stream from the water soaker slows down
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The stream from the water soaker slows down
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The stream from the water soaker slows down
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The stream from the water soaker slows down
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The stream from the water soaker slows down
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Mona and David: Pfft-
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David and Mona laughs
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David and Mona laughs
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David and Mona laughs
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Lin stomps in
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David and Mona laughs
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Lin stomps in
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David and Mona laughs
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Lin stomps in
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Lin: Gimme that!
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Lin grabs the water soaker
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Lin: Where'd you get this?
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David: It's the new Water-Soaker 5000.
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David: It's a special delivery.
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Lin: It's someone's special delivery?
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David: Yeah! Aren't they a lucky someone?
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Lin: David,
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Lin: You can't open someone's box without their permission.
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David: It's okay,
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David: They'll never know.
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David: Lin,
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David: I should really put it back in the box now.
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Lin: No! I need to report this.
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David: No you don't. Just give it back.
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Lin and David tug-o-war with the water soaker.
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Lin and David tug-o-war with the water soaker.
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Lin and David tug-o-war with the water soaker.
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Mona: Um, you guys should be-
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Mona: Um...
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Mona: Guys, maybe we should put it back now.
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Mona: Really, you guys should be more--
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Mona: Really, you guys should be more--
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Mona: Um, you guys should be-
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The water soaker crashes to the ground and breaks.
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Mona: Careful...
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David: Uh oh.
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Lin: Well, looks like you're trouble.
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Lin walks back into her house as David gathers the pieces of the broken water soaker.
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David gathers the pieces of the broken water soaker. Lin tries to put her door back up.
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David gathers the pieces of the broken water soaker. Lin tries to put her door back up.
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David gathers the pieces of the broken water soaker. Lin tries to put her door back up.
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David gathers the pieces of the broken water soaker.
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Mona: David?
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David slowly raises the broken pieces
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David slowly raises the broken pieces
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David slowly raises the broken pieces
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David slowly raises the broken pieces
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David: B-
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David: B-
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David: -b-
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David: -b-
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David: b-broke.
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David: b-broke.
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