1. John Valor’s Journal:
A Patriot of the American
Revolution

2. March 5th 1770
The Boston Massacre
The sketch of the Boston Massacre
made by Paul Revere
A depiction of my family during my
childhood years

3. March 5th 1770
You cursed scoundrel Lobster Backs! Demon hearted Red
Coats! You should all die in the gallows for the Boston
Massacre and for killing my younger brother! To hell with you
fools! He was only 15 years old! You wrung your demonized
bayonets through his heart without mercy! You also fired upon
my father, the commander who saved your arses from the
French and Indians in the 7 years war by giving you food and
ammo provisions! Without it, you’d have lost the war or would
have died of starvation or disease! He gave a letter to the
British Parliament yesterday notifying them this protest would
require no violence, yet those stupid British fired upon my
father. Do you have any thankfulness in your hearts at least to
not fire upon the man who saved your life! I’m now without a
family! Why in the name of God you dare fire upon unarmed
citizens during a peaceful protest? It would make sense if they
were armed!

4. Paul Revere was asked to make of eyewitness sketch of the
Boston Massacre and to post it into the colonial press. It
showed British firing upon protesting colonists, all unarmed. It
even showed the British advancing into the crowd with foot
forward, to shoot the life our of even single innocent colonist
soul. And most noticeably, they were firing in line all
together, smiling with pride. It was just a peaceful protest you
Red Coat idiots! We just wanted to complain that the Stamp
and Sugar and what do the British say in reply, “We were
defending ourselves. It was just a act of self-defense!” Wrong!
What you British did was you fricking line up, aim your
rifles, and then your commander lifts his sabre and orders “fire!”
right in front of unarmed British colonists?! You consider firing
upon unarmed colonists while smiling like a lunatic is right
before God? You minds are like a snail, sluggish and retarded!
Like Revere said, you will be brought to a judge who can’t be
bribed… But what brought this horrid event into my life along
with my fellow Bostonian colonists? Well let me explain…

5. Ok, now to end with my rage matters… It all started with the
Stamp act and Sugar act. The Stamp act taxed us on
paper, letters, and stamps, while the Sugar act taxed us on
anything sugar related. I heard it was for paying the debt of the
French-Indian war, which does makes sense since Britain is in
huge debt. But the thing is, believe or not, I would pay the tax if
one the taxes weren’t so high, especially if it weren’t only implied
on us colonists! This is truly taxation without representation! It
would at least make the slightest sense if they also taxed British
living in the mainland country and if we at least we had some
representation if we wanted to be taxed or not! No colonial
delegations were asked to voice their opinions! Are we your
slaves? We colonists are also in debt! It’s common sense to not
make the taxes so high, and to tax only you colony! What is with
those “delegations” of Parliament? I, John Valor am not your
property nor slave! Tyrant is King George III! We will get our
revenge… just wait and see…

6. July 4th 1776
The Declaration of Independence
The new paper version of the
Declaration of Independence
drafted by Thomas Jefferson
The first Continental Congress

7. July 4th 1776
After the public outrage of the Boston Massacre, the colonists, specifically
Bostonians were quite furious at the British and I bet they wanted to get
some payback, which indeed the colonists rightly deserved! During the
middle of just any old regular day, Samuel Adams started recruiting random
Bostonians like me to some secret organization that was designed as an act
of retaliation against the British, to retrieve the what was rightfully ours, it
was the Sons of Liberty. We met one night at the Boston Harbor, right in
front of a couple British merchant ships carrying tea. Still infuriated about
the Sugar and Stamp act, also the recent Tea act, taxing us on tea, we
decided aggression was needed. Dressed up as a Mohawk Indian, I with
my fellow Sons of Liberty stormed the ships like a stampede of infuriated
wildebeests with axe and club in hand, and threw otherwise “trampled” all
the British merchants guarding them overboard. I with my fellow friends
hacked open at ever single box containing on that ship and chucked them
all into the harbor waters without hesitation and we gave a roar of triumph.
Just a few minutes into the practice, the entire port was emptied of its
British contamination. Looks like this more “less peaceful” protest finally got
what we wanted. The Tea act, along with the Sugar and Stamp act, we’re
repealed and it was a huge celebration, but then the British retaliate… we

8. Then came the Intolerable acts. Just as the name says, it was intolerable. Those
idiots took taxation without representation to a whole new level. They re-enabled all
those taxes such as the Sugar, Stamp, and Tea act, along with a brand new
armada of unreasonable taxes and forced us to pay them! Some people who
refused to pay were even killed! So now, the British parliament and King George III
are now even murdering the colonists for not paying their so called “reasonable”
taxes!
Soon after, the Continental Congress has considered for independence! The
Continental Congress composed of delegations from different countries. In this
case, delegates from all colonies except Georgia met to address on how we
colonists should address the problem we had at hand. Many distinguished people
such as Benjamin Franklin, Paul Revere, John Hancock, Thomas Jefferson, John
Adams, and many others came all together at the Pennsylvania for the creation of
the Declaration of Independence. However, the Congress was divided. Some
delegates didn’t want to vote for independence at all such as John Dickinson along
with a few southern colonist delegates voted against because they weren’t “directly
affected” by the Intolerable Acts. You idiots! Do you not care about the lives lost in
the Boston Massacre?! But finally on July 2nd 1776, votes were made, and the
declaration was passed. However, it wasn’t drafted yet.
Thomas Jefferson, usually quiet, but a very renowned writer drafted the
Declaration of Independence. The Declaration of Independence not only insisted on
independence from Britain, it also demanded for a new government. One clause of
the declaration stated, “We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are
created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable
Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness.” The British
monarchy system refused these rights, the rights that all men deserve! All of man
are born equal! And for that exact reason, the colonies shall be our own rightful

9. Oct. 30 1777
Battle of Lexington-
Saratoga
Where General Burgoyne
surrendered to our army.
My first day in the Continental
Army…

10. Oct 30th 1777
So much life has been shed and lost during the year of 1776-1777. The Battle of
Bunker and Breeds Hill, Battle at Lexington and Concord, and now the Battle of
Saratoga. I’ve been promoted to lieutenant commander. My fellow colonists have
been murdered, killed… those blood covered Lobster Backs and Hessians, both of
them, demons assigned from Hell! What a coward King George is, he needs
mercenaries from Germany to do his work!
Saratoga was our key victory, one after so many lost battles because
before, everything wasn’t going to plan. During Lexington, we Patriots were stock-
pilling a trainload of weapons in Concord. Soon after, spies received word that
General Gage, a plans to attack with his full army on the stockpile, and to
“confiscate” all our weaponry. Revere, Dawes, and Prescott soon went warning the
militia of the assault. Gage sent patrols to stop them, but soon messenger spread
to messenger, all franticly hollering “THE BRITISH ARE COMING!” Revere was
intercepted by a patrol, however the rest of the messengers escaped. My
minutemen marched forward, being heavily outnumbered, retreated into the woods.
After they got into Concord, Colonel Barrett commanded our units cut them off once
more reinforcement militia arrived. The British knew of the plan and hurried back.
Using guerrilla warfare, we ambushed day and night, however General Percy
came to their aid, broke our lines, and got the British troops to safety with most of
our stockpile…
Bunker Hill was just pure Hell. After setting up forts on Bunker and Breeds hill
under the command of Major General Putnam, that damned British warship HMS
Lively spotted us and fired its cannons giving our position. The rest of the British
battleship armada cut off reinforcements, and soon British and Hessians came
charging forward towards our forts. We put up a good fight, and the British earned

11. Saratoga like I said was the key victory to the war, our first and most
important victory in months. I then was under command of General
Schuyler. We heard the British were trying to capture Fort Ticonderoga.
Well, they did, however it was Schuyler plan do give up to fort after the
siege… so during the cover of night we retreated. For that Schuyler was
deported of command. Now under orders from General Gates we
retreated to the fort at Bemis heights. Burgoyne decided to attack the
fort with a very useless tactic. Marching his troops straightforward into
our fortifications? One dies another replaces the fallen solder’s place on
the front line? You're troops were flushed out like sand in a sieve! Poor,
Morgan and Learned and I all joined troops soon overpowered and
outnumbered the Red Coats. However, Arnold with no official command
rushed forward into battle, and broke the British line. Heroic, but
reckless like playing chicken on train tracks… The British then made a
last-resort retreat. We surrounded them before they got far though.
Burgoyne finally surrendered.
There was a huge cost for our victory. Dozens of Patriot solders lied on
the floor in crimson red blood, dead… There was air so thick with death
I could cut thought it with my sabre! May their souls rest in peace…
We soon won French assistance. France lost to the British in the
French-Indian war to the British, therefore we had a common enemy!
The enemy of my enemy is my friend! But what held them back? They
thought British were invincible. Heck! Nothing is invincible!.. I must stop

12. Sep. 5th 1783
The Surrender of Yorktown/Treaty
of Paris
Where Treaty of Paris
negotiations took place
The British Surrender at
Yorktown

13. September 5th 1783
Leave our country now or have your shells ripped off you Lobster Backs! The 13
colonies of Britain, now the 13 States of America! I’m so lucky to have lived through
war, now with a family, 2 children. Around 7200 fellow Americans, graciously laid down
their lives for the independence of our people. I’ve finally heard news of the Treaty of
Paris, the agreement between Britain and America that the 13 colonies are now
independent from Britain. We are now “officially independent” from Britain! No more
taxation-without-representation, death, Red Coats… Drawbacks are, Congress has to
make a new country. This isn’t going to be easy, but to first give a plotline summary of
what brought the war to this treaty.
24 hours after the Battle of Saratoga, the French finally came to our aid.
Lafayette, along with Rochambeau, both distinguished army commander came along
with a couple of French military units. They gave us food, ammo, and military training.
Without their help, my minutemen would have been killed by now due to the winter
cold, starvation, or lack of training! I give them my greatest thanks.
The Battle of Yorktown, the final battle. The fake scheme of the Patriots and French
attacking New York succeeded! We got more than have the British troops away from the
British fort! Their Southern Campaign plan is compromised! During the meeting on
how to attack British held Yorktown and we knew the British didn’t have endurance. So
then, we decided to exploit their weakness.

14. We snuck up upon the British fort at night while their troops were still recovering
from battle fatigue and were fast asleep. General Washington, head general of
the Continental army, today decided to join the battlefield. He ordered us to
build trenches surrounding the fort at a safe distance. These trenches proved
very effective! When we had to reload, we just needed to crouch down in the
cover, unlike when we had to reload right in front of our enemies’ faces, and to
have no fear of getting shot during the process! The tactic was named trench
warfare. Soon after, Boom… Boom… Boom! French fired their 24 bore
cannons at the Lobster Backs, shelling it till the fort was literally “shell shocked"
in fear. We dug trenches closer and closer and eventually at night we got so
close to the fort I could see the shrapnel lodged into the fort redoubt. We took
the opportunity, and got ready to fire, though Washington then gave the
order, “Use your bayonets, only!”. I understood. This attack must be in silence
in order to not attract any attention from the main fort. I snatched my
bayonet, and attached it to my rifle muzzle. I charged in with my fellow colonists
and thrust my bayonet into every Red Coat in reach in the fort redoubt. Lord
Cornwallis, British General in charge of the Yorktown fort gave a retreat sign
and we pursed. The French Navy came to our assistance and cut off access to
the sea for the British. We soon surrounded them The entire British army
surrender once and for all.
I must now attend the funeral of my fellow allies who lost their lives in this
war, and to award all those patriots who charged into the fort redoubts with just
bayonets, the Purple Heart. May all you fallen patriots be remembered as the
best and true men of America. I also later have to meet with fellow Continental

15. March 4th, 1789
A black and white painting of
our beloved leader, Father of
America, George Washington
A sketch of Shay’s rebellion
from the colonial newspaper,
closing down a courthouse,
before gunfire exchanged.

16. March 4th 1789
The Articles of Confederation, useless! What was John Dickinson thinking while he was creating this
crap! Is he trying to bring us into the ground? Only after six years since that Treaty of Paris America has a
government system appreciated by the people, the United States Constitution. I delegation of Boston from
Congress shall give a short story of what happened during these six dreaded years…
After the Treaty of Paris, the Continental Congress hosted a convention on creating the new
government, which the result was the Articles. The Articles were like an apple with a worm in it, looks good
to eat until the unacceptable flaw pops out. There was only one branch of government at the time, which
was Congress. The Congress could make laws, but had no power to enforce them in the states, therefore
rendering it useless. All of its decisions depended on the cooperation of the 13 states. Another worm to
add to the apple is that the Congress couldn’t control tax. Every state could make its own rules on taxes
so taxes would vary state to state.
Tensions got high, and soon there was act of treason against the Articles of Confederation, Shays’
rebellion. Farmer from Massachusetts, served in the Continental Army for our independence against
Britain, a great friend, however I’ve never seen him angry like this. He explained to me soon after by letter.
He told that the Massachusetts government was in extreme debt and needed money, and I couldn’t
believe what they resorted too, the exact same thing the British did to us, taxation without representation.
Soon everyone, specifically farmers like him were in extreme debt from the unreasonable amount of
taxes, and soon like they did with the Sugar and Stamp acts, rebellion. Shays recruited around 3000
solders from the Continental Army, and stormed into the Courthouses, demanding their taxes be lifted or
shortened. I joined Shays by sending letters to Congress that the government has to be abolished and a
new one should be made in its place and by secretly giving Shays rifles and ammo just in case a fight
would break out, and it did. The rebels closed down a court, however, loyal Continental Army men fired
upon them, just like what happened during the Boston Massacre, however gunfire exchanged from both
sides. An act of treason yes, but for a good cause! The government finally decided to create a new
government in the Article’s place, the rebellion was put down, and many went to prison.

17. James Madison soon came up with a solution at Constitution
Convention. Combining all the advantages of many different
governments from past to present, he combined them all to create
the perfect system of government, the US Constitution.
Now, there were three branches of government:
Judicial, Legislative, and Executive. The Judicial branch is the
Supreme Court consisting of judges who judges the laws, the
Legislative Branch consisting of representatives from the states
makes laws otherwise know as congress, and the Executive
Branch, consisting of the President and his Cabinet makes sure
the laws are executed. Making sure one branch of the three
doesn’t have complete power over the other branches, checks
and balances were created. The President can veto laws made
by the Congress and appoint judges, however Congress can
override by two-thirds majority and can impeach the President.
The Court judges the law if it goes against the rights of the
Constitution, however Congress can impeach the Judges.
I now must attend George Washington’s presidential ceremony...
Hope I’ll have more journal entries to write soon after, hope the
skirmish of slavery doesn’t go bad… May God bless America!

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