1. ANIMATIC PEER FEEDBACK
DOES IT MAKE NARRATIVE SENSE?
Was very difficult to understand what was going on later on in the sequence,
was quite easy to understand what going at the start but still wasn't 100%
clear though.
IS IT EASY TO SEE HOW THE SPECIAL FX
WILL FIT IN?
Wasn't clear when the special effects where suppose to be, I could of
guessed where the special effects where suppose to be but isn't very clear.
IS THE DIALOGUE ENGAGING?
The dialogue helped tell me what was going on in the story but it didn't flow
together that well.
WHICH SHOTS DO THINK LAST TOO LONG?
The shot of the close up of the eyes went on a bit too long but the shots
flowed together nicely.
HOW COULD THE SEQUENCE BE IMPROVED?
The sequence can be improved by making it more clear where the special
effects are and what they are.
HOW COULD THE TECHNICAL QUALITY OF
THE ANIMATIC BE IMPROVED?
Making it more clear when and what the special effects are and make it a
little bit longer and maybe some dramatic tense music to go over the top