2. Example One
• Need to Intergrade
the texts and
images more.
• Good use of colour
• Master Heading,
seems realistic and
creative.
• Personal images
which are
appropriate to the
text.
• The borders would
be more effective if
all the same colour.
• Good use of
transparent text.
• Appropriate use of
IT
• Accurate use of
language and
register
LEVEL 3, PROFICIENT (7 MARKS)
3. Example Two
• No integration of
images and texts.
• Good Subheading
and change of font
“F” and the
beginning of the
text.
• Interesting and
engaging image.
• Appropriate use of
IT.
• Awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text
size.
• Manipulating
photographs.
• Good use of “Pull
out quote”
LEVEL FOUR, EXCELLENT (9 MARKS
4. Example Three
• Good and well
thought out mise-
en-scene.
• Relevant image
as well as being
her own material.
• Questions in
brown and
answers in black,
makes it an easy
read and clear to
the reader that it
is an interview.
• Quotes from
review.
• Suitable “Pull out
quotes” in brown
speech bubbles,
suits the theme
of the spread,
however I think it
may be too much
as it draws away
the attention
LEVEL THREE, PROFICENT (8 MARKS) from the texts
and images.
