Here is the memo for Emily. All of the errors are in (....) or comments.

1. Dear Jason,
After interviewing several people, it seems to me that Emily Wong is the best candidate for the
position of English Teacher.
In my judgment, Emily’s strengths are as follows: (needed to change this into a proper list)
1. She has experience teaching students between the ages of five to fifteen.
2. She has a good education.
3. She has unique teaching skills like doing role plays and simulations.
4. She won “Most Valuable Teacher” award two times in five years.
On the other hand, she may have a problem with communicating with the students because she only
knows a little Mandarin.
Finally Emily is the best candidate for this teaching job, let me know if you want to hire Emily or
have further question about her.
Yours sincerely,
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