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Scientific Writing:
An Introduction
Writing Guidelines for Students
http://writing.eng.vt.edu/
The Craft of Scientific Writing
3rd edition (Springer-Verlag, 1996)
This presentation discusses the importance of scientific
writing and introduces key principles
Importance of Scientific
Writing
Key Principles
audience
purpose
occasion
[Report, 1986]
How well you communicate affects your career
Survey (Richard M. Davis)
Successful engineers spent 25% of work
week writing
Survey (Virginia Tech)
Recruiters claim that engineers need more
work on their writing
Survey (Wisconsin)
Professional engineers found writing their
most useful subject in college
How well you communicate affects
the well-being of others
Space Shuttle Challenger
(January 28, 1986)
Explosion was caused by failure of O-rings in
the solid rocket boosters
Engineers knew of O-ring problems well
before fatal launch
Engineers failed to communicate seriousness
of problem
[Report, 1986]
Scientists and engineers are called upon
to communicate in many different situations
specific
technical
audiences
non-technical
audiences
general
technical
audiences
Reports
Articles
Proposals
Web Pages
Conferences
Lectures
Meetings
Posters
This presentation discusses the importance of scientific
writing and introduces key principles
Importance of Scientific
Writing
Key Principles
audience
purpose
occasion
[Report, 1986]
Scientific writing differs from other kinds of writing
Subject Matter Writing Constraints
audience
purpose
occasion
Purpose of Writing
To inform
To persuade
[Franklin,
1952]
Writing Style
[Peterson, 1987]
You should begin the writing process
by analyzing your constraints
Purpose
Audience
Occasion
Format
Formality
Politics and ethics
Process and deadline
Who they are
What they know
Why they will read
How they will read
To inform
To persuade
Three aspects of writing affect the way that readers
assess your documents
Content
Style
Form
Style is the way you communicate
the content to the audience
Structure
wordswordswords
wordswordswords
wordswordswords
wordswordswords
words
wordswords
wordswordswords
wordswordswordswords
Language
style
Illustration
[Peterson, 1987]
Form embodies the format and mechanics
of the writing
format
typography
layout
mechanics
grammar
usage
punctuation
spelling
We can split the writing process into stages
Writing the First DraftWriting the First DraftGetting in the MoodGetting in the Mood
Revising, Revising, RevisingRevising, Revising, Revising FinishingFinishing
An excellent way to improve your writing
is to choose good models
Maria Goeppert Mayer
AIP
Linus Pauling
Cal-Tech

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Introc

  • 1. Scientific Writing: An Introduction Writing Guidelines for Students http://writing.eng.vt.edu/ The Craft of Scientific Writing 3rd edition (Springer-Verlag, 1996)
  • 2. This presentation discusses the importance of scientific writing and introduces key principles Importance of Scientific Writing Key Principles audience purpose occasion [Report, 1986]
  • 3. How well you communicate affects your career Survey (Richard M. Davis) Successful engineers spent 25% of work week writing Survey (Virginia Tech) Recruiters claim that engineers need more work on their writing Survey (Wisconsin) Professional engineers found writing their most useful subject in college
  • 4. How well you communicate affects the well-being of others Space Shuttle Challenger (January 28, 1986) Explosion was caused by failure of O-rings in the solid rocket boosters Engineers knew of O-ring problems well before fatal launch Engineers failed to communicate seriousness of problem [Report, 1986]
  • 5. Scientists and engineers are called upon to communicate in many different situations specific technical audiences non-technical audiences general technical audiences Reports Articles Proposals Web Pages Conferences Lectures Meetings Posters
  • 6. This presentation discusses the importance of scientific writing and introduces key principles Importance of Scientific Writing Key Principles audience purpose occasion [Report, 1986]
  • 7. Scientific writing differs from other kinds of writing Subject Matter Writing Constraints audience purpose occasion Purpose of Writing To inform To persuade [Franklin, 1952] Writing Style [Peterson, 1987]
  • 8. You should begin the writing process by analyzing your constraints Purpose Audience Occasion Format Formality Politics and ethics Process and deadline Who they are What they know Why they will read How they will read To inform To persuade
  • 9. Three aspects of writing affect the way that readers assess your documents Content Style Form
  • 10. Style is the way you communicate the content to the audience Structure wordswordswords wordswordswords wordswordswords wordswordswords words wordswords wordswordswords wordswordswordswords Language style Illustration [Peterson, 1987]
  • 11. Form embodies the format and mechanics of the writing format typography layout mechanics grammar usage punctuation spelling
  • 12. We can split the writing process into stages Writing the First DraftWriting the First DraftGetting in the MoodGetting in the Mood Revising, Revising, RevisingRevising, Revising, Revising FinishingFinishing
  • 13. An excellent way to improve your writing is to choose good models Maria Goeppert Mayer AIP Linus Pauling Cal-Tech

Editor's Notes

  1. Mapping slide for this introductory presentation on scientific writing. This presentation has two divisions: (1) a discussion of the importance of scientific writing, and (2) a discussion of key principles. These principles include analyzing the situation, distinguishing between style and form, and making the process efficient. Reference for picture: Report to the President on the Space Shuttle Challenger Accident, vol. 1 (Washington, D.C.: Presidential Commission, 6 June 1986), p. 33.
  2. With this background slide, I try to convince students of the importance of scientific writing. This slide presents three surveys that show different points about the importance of writing for engineers. The first survey was performed by Richard M. Davis of the Air Force who surveyed 245 distinguished engineers. This survey not only found the result presented on this slide (25% of work week spent on writing), but also found that those surveyed attributed their success in part to their ability to communicate. Source: Richard M. Davis, Technical Writing: Its Importance in the Engineering Profession and Its Place in the Engineering Curriculum, AFIT TR 75-5 (Wright-Patterson AFB, Ohio: Wright-Patterson Air Force Base, 1975). The second survey was performed by Dean John Bollinger from the College of Engineering at the University of Wisconsin who contacted 9000 engineers who had graduated. The slide shows an important result of that survey (that the engineers found writing to be their most useful subject). Interestingly, the second most useful skill cited was the ability to speak. Source: Dean John G. Bollinger, “Alumni Survey Results,” Perspective (Madison: College of Engineering, University of Wisconsin, Summer 1994), p. 2. The third survey was performed by the College of Engineering at Virginia Tech. Here, recruiters to Virginia Tech were polled. The purpose of the survey was to determine what skills that engineering graduates needed most improvement upon. Source: Virginia Tech, College of Engineering, “Summary Report of Employer Focus Group” (October 2000).
  3. This slide makes the point that engineers and scientists have to communicate in many different situations. Not only are they called upon to write different types of documents and speak in different occasions, but they also face several different audiences. Given this variety, coming up with a set of rules to handle every situation is difficult, not impossible. Engineers and scientists therefore have to learn to analyze each situation and decide upon the best way to communicate in that situation. This news is hard for many engineering and science students to accept. (Pages 2-3)
  4. Repeat of mapping slide for this presentation on scientific writing. This slide introduces the second part of the presentation: a discussion of key principles. These principles include analyzing the situation, distinguishing between style and form, and making the process efficient. Reference for picture: Report to the President on the Space Shuttle Challenger Accident, vol. 1 (Washington, D.C.: Presidential Commission, 6 June 1986), p. 33.
  5. One problem that many students have is that they don’t have a sense of hierarchy about aspects of writing. These students might equate a small aspect of form such as using a contraction with a serious mistake in content such as leaving out important information, or style, such as not emphasizing the most important result. With this slide, I try to distinguish these three terms. While there certainly is overlap among these terms, their definitions are distinct. Content is the message given, style is the way that message is presented (structure, language, and illustration), and form is the appearance of the message (grammar, punctuation, usage, spelling, and format). (Chapter 1)
  6. If the constraints are what the engineer or scientist does not control in the writing process, then style is what the engineer or scientist does control. Style comprises three perspectives: structure, language, and illustration (all three are defined in Chapter 1). Students should note that unlike most terms in engineering and science, most terms in writing do not have universal definitions. For that reason, you and your students should agree upon a few definitions so that your discussions about writing make sense. So often, I have seen discussions about writing become unproductive because people invoke terms that others either do not understand or have different definitions for. Terms often used in discussions of writing, but not often understood by students, are format, style, structure, language, illustration, tone, active voice, passive voice, past tense, and the major parts of speech. These are defined in the textbook’s glossary. Reference for parachute photo: Peterson, C.W., and D.W. Johnson, Advanced Parachute Design, SAND86-8006 (Albuquerque: Sandia National Laboratories, 1986).
  7. Information about the format of scientific writing can be found on pages 6-7 and in Chapter 16. Information about the mechanics of scientific writing can be found in Appendices A and B (and in The Craft of Editing (Springer-Verlag, 2000). Both of these subjects are discussed in separate presentations.
  8. Discussion of making the process of writing more efficient to perform can be found in Chapter 17. When I first started teaching, I discussed the process of writing towards the end of the course. Recently, I have begun incorporating discussions of it throughout the course, particularly just before assignments are due.
  9. Conclusion slide to this presentation. One of the best ways to improve one’s writing is to select strong models. Conversely, a reason that so many engineers and scientists write so poorly is that they select poor models. Two excellent models of scientific writing are Maria Goeppert Mayer, who won the Nobel prize in Physics for her work on the structure of the nucleus and Linus Pauling, who won a Nobel Prize in Chemistry for his work on covalent bonds. Both were excellent communicators of their work.