3. Writing Plan
• Paragraph one: Who / Where
• Paragraph two: What did you see, how did
you feel
• Paragraph three: What happened
4. • Paragraph one: Who / Where
• Paragraph two: What did you see, how did
you feel
• Paragraph three: What happened
• Paragraph four: How was the problem
• solved?
5. NARRATIVE TENSES
• We ______ (feel) very nice, because the
teachers ________ (decide) to take us to a
wildlife park. Forty children and three
teachers ________(get) onto the bus.
• We _______ (find) the tour good, because
we_______ (not see) animals like zebras
before.
6. • Just after we _______ (enter) the part where the
monkeys lived, we _____ (have) a puncture.
While we ________ (wait), a group of monkeys
_________ (climb) onto the bus. We _______
(never feel) so good before, but the teachers felt
bad.
• We ____________ (wait) for 45 minutes
surrounded by monkeys, when finally the driver
_______(manage) to change the tyre and we
______ (leave) the park.
7. • We __WERE FEELING____ (feel) very nice, because the teachers __HAD
DECIDED______ (decide) to take us to a wildlife park. Forty children and
three teachers __GOT______(get) onto the bus.
• We ____FOUND___ (find) the tour good, because we _HAD NOT
SEEN____(not see) animals like zebras before.
• Just after we __HAD ENTERED_____ (enter) the part where the monkeys
lived, we ___HAD__ (have) a puncture. While we ____WERE
WAITING____ (wait), a group of monkeys _____CLIMBED____ (climb) onto
the bus.
• We ____HAD NEVER FELT___ (never feel) so good before, but the teachers
felt bad . We HAD BEEN WAITING (wait) for 45 minutes surrounded by
monkeys, when finally the driver _____MANAGED__(manage) to change
the tyre and we ___LEFT___ (leave) the park.
8. ADJECTIVES
• We WERE FEELING (feel) very nice, because the teachers __HAD
DECIDED (decide) to take us to a wildlife park. Forty children and
three teachers GOT(get) onto the bus.
• We FOUND (find) the tour good, because we HAD NOT SEEN (not
see) animals like zebras before.
• Just after we __HAD ENTERED_____ (enter) the part where the
monkeys lived, we ___HAD__ (have) a puncture. While we
____WERE WAITING____ (wait), a group of monkeys
_____CLIMBED____ (climb) onto the bus.
• We ____HAD NEVER FELT___ (never feel) so good before, but the
teachers felt bad . We had been waiting for 45 minutes surrounded
by monkeys, when finally the driver _____MANAGED__(manage) to
change the tyre and we ___LEFT___ (leave) the park.
9. ADJECTIVES
• We WERE FEELING (feel) very excited, because the teachers __HAD
DECIDED (decide) to take us to a wildlife park. Forty ________ children
and three ________ teachers GOT(get) onto the bus.
• We FOUND (find) the tour interesting, because we HAD NOT SEEN (not
see) animals like zebras before.
• Just after we __HAD ENTERED_____ (enter) the part where the monkeys
lived, we ___HAD__ (have) a puncture. While we ____WERE
WAITING____ (wait), a group of __________ monkeys
_____CLIMBED____ (climb) onto the bus. We ____HAD NEVER FELT___
(never feel) so thrilled before, but the teachers felt nervous.
• We had been waiting for 45 minutes, surrounded by monkeys, when
finally the driver _____MANAGED__(manage) to change the _________
tyre and we ___LEFT___ (leave) the __________park.
10. ADJECTIVES
• We WERE FEELING (feel) very excited, because the teachers __HAD
DECIDED (decide) to take us to a wildlife park. Forty HAPPY children and
three STRICT teachers GOT(get) onto the bus.
• We FOUND (find) the tour interesting, because we HAD NOT SEEN (not
see) animals like zebras before.
• Just after we __HAD ENTERED_____ (enter) the part where the monkeys
lived, we ___HAD__ (have) a puncture. While we ____WERE
WAITING____ (wait), a group of NAUGHTY monkeys _____CLIMBED____
(climb) onto the bus. We ____HAD NEVER FELT___ (never feel) so thrilled
before, but the teachers felt nervous.
• We HAD BEEN WAITING for 45 minutes surrounded by monkeys, when
finally the driver _____MANAGED__(manage) to change the OLD tyre and
we ___LEFT___ (leave) the FANTASTIC park.
11. • Plan
• Make it interesting
• Use: Narrative tenses (PAST SIMPLE, PAST
CONTINUOUS(while), PAST PERFECT)
• Use: ADJECTIVES!!!!
