Steampunk productions practice pitch feedback ig1 task 6Document Transcript
Only half the class thought our idea was communicated clearly. To improve further results we need to work on our communication skills Although the results are somewhere in the middle some of the class thought we were very unprofessional and unenthusiastic. To improve this we could use body language and Speak clearly and confidently These results show that our class were clearly not excited about or film idea but I think this is because we didn’t present the story clearly enough for people to understand. If we were to improve this we could use visual aids such as props from our filmOver half the class felt they weren’tbeing directly addressed. This could beimproved by using more eye contactwith the audience.Almost half the class thought our ideawas poor but I would put this down tonot clearly communicating the idealeaving people confused about what itactually is. To improve this we need toexplain the story in more detail andmake sure people understand fully.
Most of the class thought that weanswered questions confidently andsome thought we had an original ideaand good eye contactAlmost all of the class said that weneed more direct eye contact, moreopen and relaxed body language and tospeak more clearly. I think this can beimproved as we get more confidence asnerves contributed to the poorness ofthese aspects.