The document presents feedback from target audience members on the final draft of the trailer 'Destiny's End.' Reviewers expressed positive sentiments about improvements such as added dialogue, jump scares, and enhanced music, indicating increased interest in the movie. The creator reflects confidence in the trailer's uniqueness and enhancement compared to the first draft and other horror films.

1. Target Audience Feedback:
Trailer Final Draft
Bridget Cardenas Pazmiño

2. In the following slides I will show what my
target audience said about my final draft of my
trailer ‘Destiny’s End’.
I have used the same people that reviewed my
draft 1 of my trailer.

3. So much better now
that there is
speaking at the end
and even in the
middle of the trailer
were Ashley is
talking to her friend
Max.
Chloe, Age 18
Target Audience Feedback: 1

4. Love the jump
scare at the end, it
made me scream
so loud. I love it so
much now, this
made the trailer so
much better.
Teresa, Age 18
Target Audience Feedback: 2

5. I loved it now that
the music was fixed
at the end this
makes me more
faithful that the
movie will be more
interesting and not
boring.
Sonia, Age 17
Target Audience Feedback: 3

6. It was fascinating,
the montage style
that was used helped
create the tension in
the trailer and build
the public with
enigmas. It makes
me go want to see
the movie.
Jessica, Age 23
Target Audience Feedback: 4

7. Reflection on Target Audience
Feedback
After seeing the feedback of my target audience I
am confident that my trailer has improved a lot
from the first draft and that its different from
other horror movies, since my genre is a
Supernatural psychological horror film and has a
different storyline to any other horror film.

8. Link to final draft
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hbCECBecQ7w