The first cut of a music video has been uploaded and reviewed, identifying areas that need improvement by adding more lip syncing footage between scenes, including shots that better capture the narrative of the group and individual members, and shots without the main character to illustrate she is not part of the group.

1. The first cut has been uploaded
Now we know what we need to
do to improve
This is what we are going to change…

2. Changes:
• Add the extra lip syncing footage with tapestry in the blank gaps
between the video
• In order to enclose and capture the narrative of the music video we
need to -
• Include footage of everyone apart of the ‘white teeth teens’ together
• Faith with the girls, with the boys and altogether
• And without Faith, to show I am not apart of the ‘white teeth teens’
which is the narrative of the story