1. My First Love
By Elysia Polin
Elysia Polin
own story idea and Video called Apricot
Elysia Polin

2. 1. EXT.PARK.DAY
A blurred shot of the bench with the sound of a park in the
background
2. EXT. PARK.DAY
The camera zooms in on A girl and a guy is sitting on the
edge of a bench in a darkish corner of a park. The park is
deserted. The guy is called Chris and the Girl is called
Jennifer.
CHRIS
Did you have any boyfriends in high
school
JENNIFER
Yes
CHRIS
Who
JENNIFER
laughs He was a basketball
player
CHRIS
A basketball player?
JENNIFER
Yes
CHRIS
Tall ?
JENNIFER
He was average height
CHRIS
Then he was not very good
JENNIFER
He was good but he was never going
make the league
Both laugh at this and there is a shot reverse shot
JENNIFER
What about you ? who was your first
girl friend (laughing)
(CONTINUED)

3. CONTINUED: 2.
CHRIS
I don’t remember
CHRIS
so you only had one boyfriend at
high school
JENNIFER
there was no one really of
significance. I was a little
sand offish
CHRIS
Really
They Both laugh
CHRIS
so tell me about your first love
JENNIFER
No you tell me first
CHRIS
I I don’t remember
JENNIFER
You don’t remember ?
CHRIS
Nah
JENNIFER
Right so you can sit across from me
after conversing for more than
three hours and ask me about mine
and not tell me anything
CHRIS
well we had a nice time
JENNIFER
Yes (nodding her head)
CHRIS
so are you going tell me or not
Jennifer sits thinking for a bit
JENNIFER
I remember.... I remember the
feeling, I remember there was no
fear in my heart of something going
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)

4. CONTINUED: 3.
JENNIFER (cont’d)
wrong, because to me fairy tales
could happen and to me that was the
case and it would be forever. I
remember that I felt like I could
conquer the world with him by my
side
3.EXT- FIELD - DAY FLASH BACK
zoom in at a building and washing line
Boy staring up at the sky
4. EXT- PARK - DAY BACK TO PRESENT
JENNIFER
he always seemed to look up
CHRIS
why was that
JENNIFER
I don’t know but he could stare at
the sun longer than anyone like he
was part of his surroundings .
she pauses for a bit
JENNIFER
He lived with his aunt. His parents
had died in a car crash a few years
back
the camera is on his hand writing on a piece of
paper whilst you hear her talking
5. EXT- GARDEN- AFTERNOOM
Two girls are playing in the the garden of a house. A boy is
watching them from over the gate. one of the girls is called
Jennifer the other is called Chrissy
6. EXT.PARK.AFTERNOON
back to present day
(CONTINUED)

5. CONTINUED: 4.
JENNIFER
He lived next door to me and I
could always see him staring at me
over the gate whilst I was in the
garden. I sometimes looked back
JENNIFER
You almost did not realize he was
there. He was so carm and quite and
never said a word to me. He just
stared
camera zooms up on him looking out at the scenery
music starts quietly and then goes a bit higher as the
seconds tick past
7. EXT-PARK-DAY
young Chris and Jennifer are walking through a field hand in
hand.
8. EXT- PARK- DAY
Young Chris and Jennifer sit down in the field
JENNIFER
What do you think we will be like
in a few years
CHRIS
I don’t really know but I hope we
will still be friends
9. EXT.PARK.DAY
Jennifer and Chris have moved to sitting on two swings It is
pretty much dead.
JENNIFER
Well Maybe this is the wrong thing
to be discussing with you.
CHRIS
You have explained everything to me
and I haven’t even told you
anything about my first love. I
wish I could but I remember nothing
(CONTINUED)

6. CONTINUED: 5.
JENNIFER
well do you not even remember what
she looked like.
CHRIS
No I don’t even remember that. It
was a long time ago. Do you
remember what your first love was
called ?
JENNIFER
Yes I remember what his name is. it
was Christoph Brennerique
Chris Pulls out his I’d out of his left hand pocket and
drops it on Jennifer’s lap. She picks it up and stares at
it. She holds it up to near the side of Chris’ face to see
if it is actually him. She starts to laugh
JENNIFER
NO this can’t be right you look
nothing like my first love. I would
know my first love from when I saw
him. I can’t understand how you
have his name