2. 1) The back ground is to dark
2) The image isn't very sharp
3) To much negative space
4) Sub headings aren't lined up and look
untidy
5) Make Afflecks palace bigger
6) Less space between each line of text
7) Make ‘tensions between the girl
gangs reaches breaking point’ bigger
and closer to ‘afflecks palace’
8) Make all text justified to the side of
the page
9) Make the more channels feature
canted to draw in the audience
10) Brighten the stars faces
11) Make strap line bigger
6. Needs a hash tag to create brand loyalty Date and time need to be bigger
Need to improve tag line it need to relate to the
trailer more subtle
Tag line needs to be bigger and remove
dots
Change back ground colour
put it on a brick background
Some characters are to
dark
Dressed to differently
You can still see some of
the green screen here
the eraser hasn't been
hard enough
7. Printscreens on how I improved my
work
Taking out the
background
Filling the
background
with a lighter
shade of grey
8. Tidying up the areas around the hair line
The finished product
9. Adding the new photo to my front
cover
Improving the position of the text
Canting the more channels box
10. Billboard improvements
One of the comments made
about my old billboard was
that it would work better on a
brick wall back ground so I
started by removing the
original background
Finding a new background that
would work with all my text
positioned on it
11. I then added lots of layers with the bricks
behind my stars
