1. RELENTLESS
Scene 1 - Training
Location: The Pavillion
Cast: Jake, Coach
Props: Rugby ball, tyre
Lines Shots, sounds, actions,
editing, mis-en-scene
Pan from right to left (PAN
R/L) rugby pitch, Medium
Close Up (MCU) of Jake’s
legs running on the spot,
Medium Shot (MS) of Jake
catching a ball.
Coach: (shouts) Jake you need to work harder! I know you
can work harder.
Long Shot (LS) Jake
unsuccessfully flipping tyres
Close Up (CU) of Jake’s face
struggling to flip tyre. Tyre
drops once flipped.
Medium Shot (MS) of Jake’s
chest breathing then Pan
Down
Long Shot (LS) ½ pan of Jake
running on to the pitch
Coach: (shouts) Jake come over here, Let me talk to you
for a second!
Over the shoulder shot (OTS)
of the coach looking at Jake
in the distance then starts to
run over to the coach.
Coach: I saw you today flipping the tyres and you did a
good job. I could see that from my little motivational
sentence you increased the amount of effort you put into
flipping the tyres. Well Done.
Over the Shoulder shot (OTS)
from Jake looking at the
coach.
Jake: Thanks Coach Over the Shoulder shot (OTS)
from Coach looking at Jake
smiling.
Coach: I really do have hope in you Jake. I really think that
you could be ready to be a professional Rugby player. If
you continue to perform like this you just might get an
offer from one of the managers tomorrow.
Over the shoulder shot
Jake: Really? You think so? Over the shoulder shot
Coach: If I didn’t I wouldn’t be having this conversation
with you will I? Now go and have a shower and I will see
you on Match Day tomorrow
Over the Shoulder shot (OTS)
from the Coach
2. Jake: Yeah true, see you tomorrow Coach. Long shot (LS) of Jake leaving
the scene.
Scene 2 – “Going Home”
Location: Street
Cast: Jake
Props: Phone, keys
Lines Shots, sounds, actions,
editing, mis-en-scene
Match on Action Shot (MAS)
of Jake texting on his phone.
Text says ‘Call me when you
get a sec’.
Long Shot (LS) panning of
Jake walking/skipping
ecstatically
Extreme Close Up (ECU) of
Jake’s phone ringing.
Jake: I’ve got something to tell you! And don’t forget our
anniversary dinner at 7”
Medium Close Up (MCU) of
Jake answering his phone.
Audio of Naomi talking on
the other side of the phone.
Close Up (CU) of Jake putting
his phone to his pocket and
taking his keys out
Long Shot (LS) of Jake
opening the door and
walking in
Scene 3 - “Anniversary dinner – disaster”
Location: House
Cast: Jake, Naomi
Props: Candles, keys, dinner plates, rugby ball
Lines Shots, sounds, actions,
editing, mis-en-scene
Close up (CU) of the candle
3. Close up (CU) of Josh putting
down his keys and rugby ball
Long shot (LS)/Establishing
Shot of dinner table. Apply
180°c rule
Mid shot (MS) of Naomi
looking over her shoulder
and turning around
Jake: Happy Anniver…. Long shot (LS) of Jake almost
hugging Naomi and then
puts her hand up to stop
him.
Naomi: Eww, take a shower first… Happy Anniversary to
you too
Mid shot (MS) of Jake and
Naomi
Jake: (laughs) Close Up (CU) of Jake turning
round and leaving the scene
with a smile on his face.
Jake: Sooo… How was your day? Long Shot (LS) of Jake sitting
at the dining table and
Naomi at the stove, cooking.
Naomi turns around and sits
down at the table too
Naomi: (sighs) Well my day was very long. I’ve been in the
library finishing off an essay and handing it in. Then I had a
couple meetings. You know how uni life is.
Mid shot of Naomi sitting at
the table.
Jake: Yeah I know how it is…. Mid shot of Jake sitting at
the table
Naomi: Anyways enough about me, how was your day, in
fact what was the good news you wanted to tell me?
Long shot (LS) of Jake and
Naomi at the table.
Jake: Oh yeah, well Coach Will told me today that he can
see that there is potential in me to become a professional
Rugby player and that I may just get an offer tomorrow at
the match.
Mid shot of Jake sitting at
the table.
Close Up of Naomi’s face,
her face shows that she isn’t
particularly impressed.
Jake: Are you going to say something? Long shot of both characters
sitting at the table.
Naomi: Yeah of course I am happy for you but I’m just
thinking about the long term outcome.
Long shot (LS)
Jake: Here we go again… Long shot (LS)
Naomi: I’m serious, what if you get an injury or
something? You wouldn’t be able to play anymore and
even when you get to a certain age. I really don’t think you
should make Rugby your main goal. I understand that you
are passionate about it but why don’t you…
Over the shoulder shot
4. Extreme Close Up (ECU) of
Jake’s fist slamming table
Jake: Why can’t you be happy for me? Pan upwards to Jake’s face.
Mid shot of Jake’s face.
Naomi: I am happy but… Mid shot (MS) Jake leaves
table and walks towards the
exit
Jake: You know what don’t bother answering that
question. I know what your answer is going to be anyway
Over the shoulder shot of
Jake standing at the door
way looking behind him.
Background is blurred until
Jake leaves the scene
Long shot (LS) of Jake leaving
the scene
Scene 4 - Bromance
Location: Street, Rugby Pitch (Pavillion)
Cast: Jake and Max
Props: Rugby Ball, Tyre
Lines Shots, sounds, actions,
editing, mis-en-scene
Mid Shot (MS) of Jake
walking down the street with
ball in his hand and looking
frustrated.
Long shot (LS) of Jake
walking onto the pitch. He
stops and throws ball up in
the air
Camera tilted upwards to
see the ball in the sky and
until it falls and cuts straight
to a Close Up of the ball
landing in Max’s hands.
Pan upwards to reveal Max’s
face to audience.
Max: Blowing off some steamare we?
Jake: Yeahhhh… Mid Shot Jake walking
towards Max
The handshake commences.
Long shot of Jake and Max
doing the handshake, Close
up of their hands in motion
5. return to Long Shot of the
handshake concluding.
Mid Shot of Jake and Max
walking towards the tyres
Max: So tell me what’s on your mind J. Long shot (LS)
Jake: I’m just stressed about the match tomorrow and uni Long shot (LS)
Max: I’ve known you for a while, you can’t lie to me. Its
Naomi isn’t it?
Over the shoulder shot
Long shot (LS) Jake looks
down at his feet.
Jake: (sighs) I just don’t know anymore. Mid shot (MS)
Max: Don’t let her get to you. You know she’s always the
practical one. I think she needs something adventurous in
her life … I could help in that department
Mid shot (MS) Max has smirk
on his face and starts
laughing. Jake pushes him.
Jake: Can you be serious for once in your life? Close Up (CU)
Max: I’m joking, you know I am … Or am I? Close Up (CU)
Mid Shot (MS) Jake is about
to push Max again until Max
stops him
Max: Alright alright alright (laughs) but seriously though
don’t let her get to you. I mean I know this is what you
wanted to do since you were a kid. If anything happened
you to then so what? You were able to so much effort into
what you do that you became a professional. Let that
motivate you and le that tell you that you are able to
achieve any dream that you put your mind to.
Over the shoulder
Jake: I hear what you are saying and you are right but
quick question, since when did you become Martin Luther
King?
Long Shot (LS) Jake and Max
both laugh and fades to
black.
Scene 5 – The Big Day
Location: Gym, Pavillion
Cast: Jake, Naomi, extras
Props: Gym equipment, Rugby Ball
Lines Shots, sounds, actions,
editing, mis-en-scene
Mid Shot (MS) of Jake lifting
weights.
Long shot (LS) of Jake using
skipping rope
Pan R/L of Jake running onto
the pitch.
6. Establishing shot of Pavilion
as Josh enters the scene.
Mid shot of Max and Jake
and Max taps Jake on the
shoulder and indicated him
to look round. Jake turns
round sees Naomi on the
side lines.
Long shot of Jake running to
Naomi.
Jake: I didn’t think you were going to come. Mid shot
Naomi: I thought about what I said last night and I’m
sorry. I should have been more happy for you and support
you in your dreams. Forgive me?
Mid shot
Jake: Yeah I forgive and I’m actually glad that you came. Long shot
Naomi: So am I. Mid shot of Jake and Naomi
embracing zooms and fades
to black.
