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teaching   for a change “ what do you notice?”  shifting student and teacher response  from superficial judgment  to real seeing Amy Fichter,  Assistant Professor Painting/Drawing Department of Art & Design University of Wisconsin--Stout Menomonie, Wisconsin  Travis,   conté  crayon, Alex Engelmann, Life Drawing II, 2007 
[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object], the rules: Self-portrait,  graphite, Melissa Hensel, Life Drawing II, 2007
[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],Self-portrait,   conté  crayon, Charlotte Mann, Life Drawing II, 2007 
[object Object],[object Object],Figure Study,  charcoal and gesso, Charlotte Mann, Life Drawing II, 2007 
[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],Travis,   conté  crayon, Tim Bergelin,  Life Drawing II, 2007 … the direction of the lines seems to give weight to the face pulling it down …”  --Jennifer Hannum
[object Object],[object Object],Figure Study,  mixed media, Tim Bergelin,  Life Drawing II, 2007 “… the atmosphere of the drawing gives a feeling of motion in kind of a fantastical manner.” --Charlotte Mann 
Adrienne,   conté  crayon, Jennifer Hannum,  Life Drawing II, 2007 ,[object Object],[object Object],“ I notice:   … all of the lines are very organic and each line is very different from the next.  … there is not much contrast or shading.  … the nose and mouth area are exaggerating the pose.  … the nose and mouth have more planar shifts than around the eyes.  … only the lips are outlined.” --Charlotte Mann  “ I notice:   … lines used to give definition to the hand.  … curving lines are used to give definition and depth to the nose.  … the hair on the right side is drawn darker than the hair on the left side which is drawn very lightly.  … shading is shown above and below the right eye but not above and below the left eye.” --Dylan Cheek
“ Wow.  When we do this, I really have to decide what  I  think about the drawings.” --Noah Berkeland,  Life Drawing II student,  to me in the hallway  after the first “I notice” critique Self-portrait,  charcoal, Noah Berkeland, Life Drawing II, 2007 “ This critique is different because there is no judgment so you don’t know if parts are liked or disliked.” --Life Drawing II student spring 2007 
Travis,  charcoal, Molly Biebl, Life Drawing II, 2007 “ I have learned …   that my drawings have a variety of line work and value. I think most people enjoyed my  Travis  over the other two drawings, which is how I felt. Some people liked my more gestural drawings in my self portrait, but others did not. I learned that I have defined other areas over some.…” --Molly Biebl “ As an artist and student I saw improvement in descriptive vocabulary.  Ways to explain what you are seeing--improvement in the reflective process.” --Life Drawing II student spring 2007  “…  Since we couldn’t judge it was much harder, since that is what we’re used to.  Although it did help me see different things about the drawings…”   --Molly Biebl 
Portrait,  charcoal, Alan Briggs, Life Drawing II, 2007 “ I notice:   … this drawing is from a viewpoint that is from the side and looking up.   … most of the lines are gestural.  … the left side of the face is outlined in a dark thick black line.  … there are eraser marks on the outside of the left cheek, showing that he changed the placement of the cheek.  … the eyes look to be closed, and there is an outline defining the outside of the eye lid.  … there are many marks made around both of the eye brows.  … a horizontal line goes through the middle of the forehead.  On the right side of the hair line, the marks look to be shaded more than just placed on the paper.  … the style of drawing and mark-making changes from the left side of the drawing to the right side.  … the darkest area of the drawing is on the left side of the lips and chin.  … there is shading and mark-making under the bottom lip, and gestural marks showing the roundness of the chin.  … there are contour lines on the cheeks and around the brow.” --Deborah Scottberg 
How did the “I notice” method of critique affect your Life Drawing II experience this semester? ,[object Object],[object Object],Figure Study,  charcoal and pastel, Noah Berkeland, Life Drawing II, 2007 
How did this critique method seem different or the same as critiques in other classes? ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object], “ Made us take time and THINK.  It eliminated moments where no one had anything to say.  Always could make observations.” Figure Study,   conté  crayon, Deborah Scottsberg, Life Drawing II, 2007
What did you gain (as an artist and a student) from this mode of critique? ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],“ I learned to be more patient and observant .”  Figure Study,   conté  crayon, Katie Unertl, Life Drawing II, 2007

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Teaching For A Change

  • 1. teaching for a change “ what do you notice?” shifting student and teacher response from superficial judgment to real seeing Amy Fichter, Assistant Professor Painting/Drawing Department of Art & Design University of Wisconsin--Stout Menomonie, Wisconsin  Travis, conté crayon, Alex Engelmann, Life Drawing II, 2007 
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  • 8. “ Wow. When we do this, I really have to decide what I think about the drawings.” --Noah Berkeland, Life Drawing II student, to me in the hallway after the first “I notice” critique Self-portrait, charcoal, Noah Berkeland, Life Drawing II, 2007 “ This critique is different because there is no judgment so you don’t know if parts are liked or disliked.” --Life Drawing II student spring 2007 
  • 9. Travis, charcoal, Molly Biebl, Life Drawing II, 2007 “ I have learned … that my drawings have a variety of line work and value. I think most people enjoyed my Travis over the other two drawings, which is how I felt. Some people liked my more gestural drawings in my self portrait, but others did not. I learned that I have defined other areas over some.…” --Molly Biebl “ As an artist and student I saw improvement in descriptive vocabulary. Ways to explain what you are seeing--improvement in the reflective process.” --Life Drawing II student spring 2007  “… Since we couldn’t judge it was much harder, since that is what we’re used to. Although it did help me see different things about the drawings…” --Molly Biebl 
  • 10. Portrait, charcoal, Alan Briggs, Life Drawing II, 2007 “ I notice: … this drawing is from a viewpoint that is from the side and looking up. … most of the lines are gestural. … the left side of the face is outlined in a dark thick black line. … there are eraser marks on the outside of the left cheek, showing that he changed the placement of the cheek. … the eyes look to be closed, and there is an outline defining the outside of the eye lid. … there are many marks made around both of the eye brows. … a horizontal line goes through the middle of the forehead. On the right side of the hair line, the marks look to be shaded more than just placed on the paper. … the style of drawing and mark-making changes from the left side of the drawing to the right side. … the darkest area of the drawing is on the left side of the lips and chin. … there is shading and mark-making under the bottom lip, and gestural marks showing the roundness of the chin. … there are contour lines on the cheeks and around the brow.” --Deborah Scottberg 
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