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WALKING IN THE CLOUDS 
by 
Eva Deasy 
The night was fresh, lit by a spectacular multicolor stars falling over the immense 
Niagara Falls, and as background the illuminated river. 
Berta was freeze looking the fascinating scenario with the fireworks through the 
transparent wall near to their table. 
She was with her husband Mark, both in their thirties, in a luxury restaurant celebrating 
the 4th of July, and her retirement as a reporter for an important magazine about science 
and fiction. She looks great, wearing a black dress that contrasted with her blond hair. 
Mark was a black beret for many years, but he made the decision to retire to be with 
Berta after she had a diagnostic with an unknown disease. That changed their plans for 
the future and their lives. 
Mark noticed Berta tired and encouraged her to leave. The plan was to take the next day a 
flight to start a new life in Bahamas. They didn’t know that trip will change everything in 
their lives. They left with bad feeling but none said anything. 
Now in their apartment Mark went to the kitchen to make coffee. The apartment was 
empty, just a small mattress on the floor close to the fireplace. Berta sat on the mattress 
pulled her briefcase, and took from it their wedding picture that she saved there. In the 
picture they look very happy. The background was the ocean. She was like hypnotized 
looking at it. Mark lay beside her, she put back the picture in her briefcase, and fell asleep 
on Mark chest. 
The next day Berta and Mark were sitting on first class in route to the first stop at Miami. 
She was impeccable wearing a beautiful satin purple blouse with velvet black pants. The 
pilot announced that the weather was in perfect conditions and the trip will be nice and 
fast. 
She looked through the window the heavy and white clouds imagining herself walking 
and jumping on them. That will be the most wonderful experience that a human being 
could experiment in the life. Since she was a girl that was her great dream, obviously was 
just a fantasy. She felt asleep dreaming that she was floating in the air and walking on the 
clouds. 
At that moment the airplane passed through a low air pressure and began to vibrate 
strongly. She woke up, and took Mark’s hand strong, almost squeezing it. Mark looked at 
her to make her relax and confident that nothing bad will happen. 
The flight attendant offered them something to drink, and immediately something shook 
the airplane strongly. Mark and Berta looked behind them, and horrified they saw a big
hole at the end of the corridor. They didn’t know how that happened but was there. The 
air masks felt down, everything was being sucked, people, seats out from the airplane. 
Was a nightmare! Everything was happening in front of her so fast; she couldn’t even 
think what they have to do. 
The passenger behind them afraid to die opened the emergency door and the air 
immediately sucked him out from the airplane. The air began to suck them too. Mark and 
Berta were fighting for their lives, grabbing the seats in front of them. But the air was so 
strong and sucked Berta out of the airplane. Mark was in shock; she just disappeared in 
front of him. He walked zig zagging to the cockpit and found the pilots dead. He checked 
around the pilots looking for a parachute and he found one under the captain’s seat. 
He knew Berta had only three minutes before hit the ground. He put the parachute as 
quickly as possible and when he was ready to jump something hit strong his head. Mark 
ignoring it jumped in vertical position to fall faster with the hope to get Berta on time. 
Berta was falling and her mind was running fast thinking if her fantasy to walk on clouds 
will be true she will survive. She opened her arms to make the fall slower with the hope 
that a miracle could happen. She remembered that she wrote an article about airplanes 
accidents. She knew was possible to survive a high fall but the percentage was less than 
one percent. She wished to be in that one percent. 
She had less than three minutes to hit the ground. She began to feel strange and got 
unconscious, everything turned black. She got up terrified, realizing she was closer and 
closer to death. She didn’t know how long unconscious she was, but had to be less than a 
minute. 
Mark couldn’t see Berta, the clouds were dense, and finally he saw her. He was confident 
he will save their lives. He did that tons of time when he was in the army. 
Berta closed her eyes and the only thing that she could see was a fire red color changing 
to yellow. She opened her eyes and saw an incredible view of the ocean with a silver 
color, the waves hitting big rocks leaving dense and celestial white foam like clouds. 
Every second was like a film in zoom, she was looking more and more details but she 
didn’t have a remote control to stop the picture and freeze it. 
The wind hit her face strongly. She started to think in Mark, where he was, if he survived, 
in how much she loves him. She remembered one vacation skiing in the snow that was 
so white like the clouds and the waves foam. 
What irony, she had an unknown disease with a short life expectation, and now she was 
falling straight to her death. Berta began to wish to have a heart attack so she never will 
feel the hit on the ground. She was not a coward, she only wanted to dull her pain. She 
knew water is like rock when you fall straight into it.
A bunch of birds were coming from the right side, she saw them, and worried to crash 
with them she tried to cover her face but that was impossible because the wind was very 
strong. In a less than a fraction of second the birds crashed on her. Her face had scratches, 
on her mouth feathers, blood from the birds on her body; was disgusting. 
She looked again the silver water getting closer. She remembered their wedding picture. 
The ocean as a background in the picture was incredibly beautiful, but now was 
incredibly dangerous. 
Were about five thousands feet over the ground when she felt something grabbed her 
arms pulling her up fast. She heard Mark’s voice. 
- "I'm here!" Mark said. 
He tried to grab her waist to open the parachute safely, but he couldn't. He opened his 
parachute pulling both them higher in the sky. Everything was in slow motion. Now they 
are falling down again slowly. The water was closer and closer. Berta closed her eyes 
screaming loud and nervously tried to grab Mark arms. A dusty wind blinded her eyes. 
The wind got stronger. 
- “Don’t look down” Mark said. 
Mark won’t to see Berta more scare that she already was. He was trying hard to pull her. 
Berta was panicky, she couldn’t breath. She started to fight for her life pulling 
unconsciously the belt of the parachute. 
- "Berta, don't!" 
- "We gonna die!" she said. 
Mark was holding her arms but her satin blouse slipped through his arms. He could not 
get a good grip. Every second he was loosing her, slipped. If he lost her he knew she 
never will survive the fall. 
Berta was horrified and Mark distressed. He was losing her; he tried to grabs her hands. 
He was anguished thinking they had only a minute. She was swaying and Mark was 
helplessly. Both were looking the vast ocean getting closer. The silver color began to 
change to dark blue, and she was screaming but the wind carried her voice. 
He was sweating and his hands got wet when he lost her and horrified saw Berta falling, 
and falling, and falling! He knew she had only twenty seconds to hit the rocks and she 
was going straight to them. Only a strong wind could help her and change her fall to the 
water, to the hard water. 
For Berta the ocean started to change the color to light blue, and she could see corals reef, 
a big ray. Everything stopped for seconds when she felt her strong crash on the water.
Mark saw her splashed when she hit the ocean leaving foam and waves around her. He 
was really scary for the first time in his life. 
She wasn’t feeling her body, an absolute dark covered her. The sun hit her eyes and she 
opened it. She was alive! She desperate started looking for Mark. 
As that moment she saw a boat coming that stopped close to her. In the boat was a couple 
who saw the fall. Berta didn’t give to the young man the opportunity to help her to get in 
the boat; she did by herself screaming that they had to find her husband. 
The young woman was screaming. They were looking a body, floating on the water. 
Berta tears ran fast thinking the worse. She is trying to see if was Mark’s body, when she 
felt a hand on her shoulder, she turned and was Mark! Alive! She looked his warm eyes, 
and began to cry. He hugged her strongly protecting her. 
Berta was confused, still thinking about the body on the water. Probably was another 
body from the airplane crash. She walked to the edge of the boat side and saw the body 
that the couple rescued but she couldn't recognize who was. She walked to get closer to 
see the dead body, but she found was her own body, dead! 
Berta was in shock. 
Mark took her hand, and kissed her. She closed her eyes slowly and opened again to 
know if that was true or just a nightmare and all will come back to normal. Everything 
turned quiet, cold. Light clouds started to cover all around them. Mark holds her cold 
hands. 
Mark told her - “Come with me, now we can walk together on the clouds like you always 
dream”. 
Suddenly Mark woke her up. 
Mark at Berta - “Hey, Berta wake up, we are already in Miami.” 
She woke up desperate, sweating, but happy since everything was just a nightmare. 
One hour later finally they were in the airplane flying to Bahamas. 
From a TV on the screen a reporter: “Braking news, an airplane crash flying between 
Miami and the Bahamas, nobody survived”

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Walking in the clouds

  • 1. WALKING IN THE CLOUDS by Eva Deasy The night was fresh, lit by a spectacular multicolor stars falling over the immense Niagara Falls, and as background the illuminated river. Berta was freeze looking the fascinating scenario with the fireworks through the transparent wall near to their table. She was with her husband Mark, both in their thirties, in a luxury restaurant celebrating the 4th of July, and her retirement as a reporter for an important magazine about science and fiction. She looks great, wearing a black dress that contrasted with her blond hair. Mark was a black beret for many years, but he made the decision to retire to be with Berta after she had a diagnostic with an unknown disease. That changed their plans for the future and their lives. Mark noticed Berta tired and encouraged her to leave. The plan was to take the next day a flight to start a new life in Bahamas. They didn’t know that trip will change everything in their lives. They left with bad feeling but none said anything. Now in their apartment Mark went to the kitchen to make coffee. The apartment was empty, just a small mattress on the floor close to the fireplace. Berta sat on the mattress pulled her briefcase, and took from it their wedding picture that she saved there. In the picture they look very happy. The background was the ocean. She was like hypnotized looking at it. Mark lay beside her, she put back the picture in her briefcase, and fell asleep on Mark chest. The next day Berta and Mark were sitting on first class in route to the first stop at Miami. She was impeccable wearing a beautiful satin purple blouse with velvet black pants. The pilot announced that the weather was in perfect conditions and the trip will be nice and fast. She looked through the window the heavy and white clouds imagining herself walking and jumping on them. That will be the most wonderful experience that a human being could experiment in the life. Since she was a girl that was her great dream, obviously was just a fantasy. She felt asleep dreaming that she was floating in the air and walking on the clouds. At that moment the airplane passed through a low air pressure and began to vibrate strongly. She woke up, and took Mark’s hand strong, almost squeezing it. Mark looked at her to make her relax and confident that nothing bad will happen. The flight attendant offered them something to drink, and immediately something shook the airplane strongly. Mark and Berta looked behind them, and horrified they saw a big
  • 2. hole at the end of the corridor. They didn’t know how that happened but was there. The air masks felt down, everything was being sucked, people, seats out from the airplane. Was a nightmare! Everything was happening in front of her so fast; she couldn’t even think what they have to do. The passenger behind them afraid to die opened the emergency door and the air immediately sucked him out from the airplane. The air began to suck them too. Mark and Berta were fighting for their lives, grabbing the seats in front of them. But the air was so strong and sucked Berta out of the airplane. Mark was in shock; she just disappeared in front of him. He walked zig zagging to the cockpit and found the pilots dead. He checked around the pilots looking for a parachute and he found one under the captain’s seat. He knew Berta had only three minutes before hit the ground. He put the parachute as quickly as possible and when he was ready to jump something hit strong his head. Mark ignoring it jumped in vertical position to fall faster with the hope to get Berta on time. Berta was falling and her mind was running fast thinking if her fantasy to walk on clouds will be true she will survive. She opened her arms to make the fall slower with the hope that a miracle could happen. She remembered that she wrote an article about airplanes accidents. She knew was possible to survive a high fall but the percentage was less than one percent. She wished to be in that one percent. She had less than three minutes to hit the ground. She began to feel strange and got unconscious, everything turned black. She got up terrified, realizing she was closer and closer to death. She didn’t know how long unconscious she was, but had to be less than a minute. Mark couldn’t see Berta, the clouds were dense, and finally he saw her. He was confident he will save their lives. He did that tons of time when he was in the army. Berta closed her eyes and the only thing that she could see was a fire red color changing to yellow. She opened her eyes and saw an incredible view of the ocean with a silver color, the waves hitting big rocks leaving dense and celestial white foam like clouds. Every second was like a film in zoom, she was looking more and more details but she didn’t have a remote control to stop the picture and freeze it. The wind hit her face strongly. She started to think in Mark, where he was, if he survived, in how much she loves him. She remembered one vacation skiing in the snow that was so white like the clouds and the waves foam. What irony, she had an unknown disease with a short life expectation, and now she was falling straight to her death. Berta began to wish to have a heart attack so she never will feel the hit on the ground. She was not a coward, she only wanted to dull her pain. She knew water is like rock when you fall straight into it.
  • 3. A bunch of birds were coming from the right side, she saw them, and worried to crash with them she tried to cover her face but that was impossible because the wind was very strong. In a less than a fraction of second the birds crashed on her. Her face had scratches, on her mouth feathers, blood from the birds on her body; was disgusting. She looked again the silver water getting closer. She remembered their wedding picture. The ocean as a background in the picture was incredibly beautiful, but now was incredibly dangerous. Were about five thousands feet over the ground when she felt something grabbed her arms pulling her up fast. She heard Mark’s voice. - "I'm here!" Mark said. He tried to grab her waist to open the parachute safely, but he couldn't. He opened his parachute pulling both them higher in the sky. Everything was in slow motion. Now they are falling down again slowly. The water was closer and closer. Berta closed her eyes screaming loud and nervously tried to grab Mark arms. A dusty wind blinded her eyes. The wind got stronger. - “Don’t look down” Mark said. Mark won’t to see Berta more scare that she already was. He was trying hard to pull her. Berta was panicky, she couldn’t breath. She started to fight for her life pulling unconsciously the belt of the parachute. - "Berta, don't!" - "We gonna die!" she said. Mark was holding her arms but her satin blouse slipped through his arms. He could not get a good grip. Every second he was loosing her, slipped. If he lost her he knew she never will survive the fall. Berta was horrified and Mark distressed. He was losing her; he tried to grabs her hands. He was anguished thinking they had only a minute. She was swaying and Mark was helplessly. Both were looking the vast ocean getting closer. The silver color began to change to dark blue, and she was screaming but the wind carried her voice. He was sweating and his hands got wet when he lost her and horrified saw Berta falling, and falling, and falling! He knew she had only twenty seconds to hit the rocks and she was going straight to them. Only a strong wind could help her and change her fall to the water, to the hard water. For Berta the ocean started to change the color to light blue, and she could see corals reef, a big ray. Everything stopped for seconds when she felt her strong crash on the water.
  • 4. Mark saw her splashed when she hit the ocean leaving foam and waves around her. He was really scary for the first time in his life. She wasn’t feeling her body, an absolute dark covered her. The sun hit her eyes and she opened it. She was alive! She desperate started looking for Mark. As that moment she saw a boat coming that stopped close to her. In the boat was a couple who saw the fall. Berta didn’t give to the young man the opportunity to help her to get in the boat; she did by herself screaming that they had to find her husband. The young woman was screaming. They were looking a body, floating on the water. Berta tears ran fast thinking the worse. She is trying to see if was Mark’s body, when she felt a hand on her shoulder, she turned and was Mark! Alive! She looked his warm eyes, and began to cry. He hugged her strongly protecting her. Berta was confused, still thinking about the body on the water. Probably was another body from the airplane crash. She walked to the edge of the boat side and saw the body that the couple rescued but she couldn't recognize who was. She walked to get closer to see the dead body, but she found was her own body, dead! Berta was in shock. Mark took her hand, and kissed her. She closed her eyes slowly and opened again to know if that was true or just a nightmare and all will come back to normal. Everything turned quiet, cold. Light clouds started to cover all around them. Mark holds her cold hands. Mark told her - “Come with me, now we can walk together on the clouds like you always dream”. Suddenly Mark woke her up. Mark at Berta - “Hey, Berta wake up, we are already in Miami.” She woke up desperate, sweating, but happy since everything was just a nightmare. One hour later finally they were in the airplane flying to Bahamas. From a TV on the screen a reporter: “Braking news, an airplane crash flying between Miami and the Bahamas, nobody survived”