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Pitching a story idea
Laura Ruel

November 24, 2009
With concepts from Theresa Lina Stevens
and Dale Carnegie & Associates, Inc.
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from Theresa Lina Stevens

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u6eKwv2x44w
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http://ecorner.stanford.edu/authorMaterialInfo.html?mid=85
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http://www.ted.com/index.php/talks/larry_lessig_says_the_law_is_strangl
ing_creativity.html
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hFSPHfZQpIQ
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http://www.ted.com/index.php/talks/jill_bolte_taylor_s_powerful_stroke_of_insig
ht.html
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Selling Your Ideas
Dale Carnegie & Associates, Inc.

TIP

For additional advice see
Dale Carnegie Training®
Presentation Guidelines

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Opening: Give Evidence...
The challenge is to get your listeners
not only to agree with you in principle,
but also to take action.
The Dale Carnegie Training® Evidence
- Action - Benefit formula provides a
successful process for delivering a
motivational, action-oriented
presentation.
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Opening: Give Evidence...
• Relate an incident that clearly
illustrates your main point.
• Keep an incident focused.
• Edit for clarity and relevance.

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Bridge
• Convey a clear, logical transition from
your first evidence/incident into
action.

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Action
• State the action you recommend.
• Be specific: “I recommend…”

TIP

State your points clearly
and with confidence.
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Benefits
• State the benefits to your audience for
taking this action:
– Benefit #1
– Benefit #2
– Benefit #3

TIP

State the benefits in terms
that relate to your
audience’s interests, needs,
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and preferences.
Benefits Review
• Make the actions and benefits
credible by using reliable, verifiable
evidence. Evidence may take the
form of statistics, demonstrations,
testimonials, incidents, or exhibits.
• Benefit #1
– Evidence

• Benefit #2
– Evidence

• Benefit #3
– Evidence

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Close
• Restate the specific action you
recommend and the key benefits.
State the benefits last.

TIP

Remember, your sense of
conviction and your involvement
with the content of the
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presentation are critical
to its success.

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