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My other Drafts  Melissa chin
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Changes  I made the issue number and price line smaller so that it would not overlap the ‘K’
Changes  I made sure that I fully aligned the selling line with my Masthead.
Changes  I moved the R&B to the top line because it is an important aspect of the cover line.
Changes  I removed the underline on the main cover line, which makes it look much more presentable.
Changes  I corrected my grammatical mistake and added an apostrophe  I moved the barcode down a bit and so it looks more realistic.
Changes  I removed the extra spacing that was in between the letters of Hip Hop.

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My Other Drafts Powerpoint

  • 1. My other Drafts Melissa chin
  • 4. Changes I made the issue number and price line smaller so that it would not overlap the ‘K’
  • 5. Changes I made sure that I fully aligned the selling line with my Masthead.
  • 6. Changes I moved the R&B to the top line because it is an important aspect of the cover line.
  • 7. Changes I removed the underline on the main cover line, which makes it look much more presentable.
  • 8. Changes I corrected my grammatical mistake and added an apostrophe I moved the barcode down a bit and so it looks more realistic.
  • 9. Changes I removed the extra spacing that was in between the letters of Hip Hop.