This document discusses feedback received on three mock-up contents pages for a publication. The focus group preferred the last mock-up contents page design as it had a simple yet unique layout compared to the other two more common designs. Based on this feedback, the last mock-up contents page will be used for the publication.

1. CONTENTS PAGE
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IMAGE
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CONTENTS
EDITORS/WELCOME NOTE COVER LINE

2. CONTENTS PAGE
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IMAGE
CONTENTS
EDITORS/WELCOME NOTE
CONTENTS
IMAGE

3. CONTENTS PAGE
CONTENTS
EDITORS/WEL
COME NOTE
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ANCHORAGE TEXT

4. Feedback for Contents Page
• The contents page that I have decided to use
is the last mock up. This was due to the
feedback I received from my focus group. This
was their favourite as the layout is simple yet
unique.
• They felt the other two mock ups were too
common which is why they preferred the last
one.