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Jack out the box – Short film Page |1

“Jack out
the box”
Written and directed by:
Vanessa Lorriman and Ellie
Beazley

Second draft
Jack out the box – Short film Page |2

1 INT. JESSIE BEDROOM – DAY 1 2100
Alone in room, party music is playing within the background. JESSIE
is sat in front of her bedroom applying makeupcamera looking from
over her shoulder. Bedroom is matured with neutral walls (Creamy
colour) showing that she is grown up, double bed and mirror lit up
with fairy lights around the edge of it also „CHRIS <3‟ written with
lip stick upon the mirror.
PAN UPWARDS of JESSIES feet to the top of her head exposing her
outfit which will be a party dress. The dress will not be exposing
too much of her body.
CUT TO:
2 INT. INSIDE CAR – DAY 1 2101
CHRIS is sat in the car outside JESSIES house waiting for her. CHRIS
looks around him suspiciously making sure that no one is around then
we witness CHRIS pour white powder onto the dash board and then
sniff it. CHRIS then starts to rub his nose while looking around
again. JESSIE then opens the door and climbs inside smiling and
leans across kissing CHRIS on the cheek.
JESSIE
Hey, I‟m ready let‟s go
CHRIS rubs his nose again and then starts the engine and drives off.

CUT TO:
3 EXT. FOREST AREA – DAY 1 2130
Establishing shot of the forest and car driving past
CUT TO:
4 CAR INT. INSIDE CAR – DAY 1 2130
Both JESSIE and CHRIS in car (Car not yet known). CHRIS driving.
JESSIE is starting to drink so she has a can in her hand

(CONTINUED)
“Ravey” music is playing. Dancing and messing around (Hoping up and
down almost like big fish little fish actions with hands)Close up of
Jack out the box – Short film Page |3
the speed dial as we see it increase from 20PMH to 40MPH. CHRIS then
leans over and grabs a can and pops it open.
JESSIE
CHRIS you are driving you cannot drink yet, do you want to kill us?!
OPTION A:Chris looks at JESSIE and takes a massive gulp from the can
then suddenly car begins to slow down with smoke coming from beneath
the bonnet as the car comes to a halt next to the oaky forest.
OPTION B:CHRIS looks at JESSIE and takes a massive gulp from the
can. Then suddenly the car hits a bump in the road and CHRIS loses
control of the car.
5. SCREEN GOES BLACK – DAY 1 2134
6. EXT. OUTSIDE THE CAR NEXT TO WOODS DAY 1 2135
CHRIS is leaning over the bonnet of the car using a torch to see
while he is messing around with the engine.
CHRIS
For fuck sake, this is typical!
JESSIE
Calm down we will just phone someone at the party and get them to
come get us
JESSIE flips out phone however she has no reception. Puts phone in
air trying to gain reception whilst walking around the car
JESSIE
Ermm I cannot seem to find any reception
CHRIS slams the bonnet of the car in anger. He grabs the GPS out the
car and a close up of the GPS shows that the destination is not too
far.
CHRIS
Look! The party is like just through this forest, just chill out and
follow me. The car can stay here.
CHRIS walks into the forest; JESSIE then runs after him grabbing his
hand tight once she gets to CHRIS.
(CONTINUED)
CUT TO:
7 EXT IN THE FOREST – DAY 1 2200
Jack out the box – Short film Page |4
CHRIS holding JESSIE around the waist securely pulling her into him.
Walking looking around the forest slow gradual steps. JESSIE has a
very scared/worried look upon her face whereas CHRIS is calm and
relaxed. The forest goes on as far as the eye can see nothing but
trees surrounding them, hard to see what‟s in front of them it‟s
that dark. Wildlife noises coming from every direction from owls and
flutters of wings.
JESSIE
CHRIS are you sure you know where we are going? I think we are lost
CHRIS
Obviously I know where we are just another 5 minute or so walk from
here.
Then a strange childlike tune starts to play a few meters away from
where CHRIS and JESSIE are standing
JESSIE
CH-CHRIS can you hear that?
CHRIS
Yeah it sounds like its coming from over there

CHRIS shines the torch into the direction in which he can hear the
noise. CHRIS notices a small object in a clearing of the forest.
CHRIS let‟s go of JESSIES hand and cautiously walks towards it.
CHRIS bends down and picks it up brushing off all the leaves and the
mud from it to expose that it is a JACK IN THE BOX. The box is small
and damaged and had an old look to it. There are colourful pictures
on the box however have been dimmed in colour due to the damages to
it.
CHRIS
Look at this like some sort of JACK IN THE BOX have not seen one of
these since I was child, I used to love playing with this
JESSIE
CHRIS just put it down its old and dirty I just want to get out of
this forest already

(CONTINUED)
Jack out the box – Short film Page |5
JESSIE tries to hit the box out of CHRIS‟S hands however CHRIS moves
in time holding the box away from JESSIE.
CHRIS begins to turn the handle round as it musical tune starts to
play.
JESSIE
CHRIS just put it down its really creeping me out!
CHRIS
(Just sniggers while continuing to spin the handle)
CHRIS continues to spin the handle slowly round as JESSIE continues
trying to get the box out his hands to stop him.
The JACK IN THE BOX opens CHRIS stares at it for a few seconds then
blood starts to pour out his mouth and nose. CHRIS then collapses
onto the floor dropping the box next to him which is now empty and
is also has blood pouring from it. JESSIE screams then runs into the
forest.
CUT TO:
8 EXT IN THE FOREST – DAY 1 2220
Loads of different shots of JESSIE running through the forest.
JESSIE is getting caught on the tree branches and running in out of
the trees. JESSIE then stops at a giant tree and leans on it trying
to catch her breath (Heavy breathing). JESSIE takes a few moments to
try and figure out the situation which has just happened (Confused
expression).
JESSIE can hear the crunches on the leaves from footsteps coming
from every direction. JESSIE looking around frantically trying to
figure out where this noise is coming from.
JESSIE slowly peers round the side of the tree
to see CHRIS standing there with no expression
also dressed up as the same JACK from the box.
with clown make up also outfit closely matches
box.

(non-diagetic music)
upon his face and is
CHRIS has a pale face
the JACK from the

CHIS then starts the sluggishly walk towards JESSIE. CHRIS is
humming the same tune in what the JACK IN THE BOX was creating

(CONTINUED)
Jack out the box – Short film Page |6
JESSIE freezes (Cuts back and forth between JESSIES face and CHRIS
face)JESSIE spins and runs away from CHRIS in who is continuing to
sluggishly walk behind her.
JESSIE
CHRIS if this is some kind of trick stop it, it‟s not funny anymore!
CUT TO:
9 EXT IN THE FOREST DAY 1 2230
More fast pace shots of JESSIE running through the forest heavy
breathing.
Out of nowhere CHRIS steps in front of JESSIES path (Humming tune)
JESSIE skids falling over but quickly gets back up and continues
running across the other direction
Yet again CHRIS slumps into JESSIES path (Humming tune)
JESSIE
AHHHH what‟s wrong with you?
JESSIE then spins round and runs the opposite way again this time
she sees a small cottage farm house with its lights on. JESSIE sees
the small farm house in the distance and runs towards it down a
muddy road truck leading straight to the entrance of the farm house.
10 EXT AT THE FARM HOUSE DAY 1 2243
JESSIE reaches the farm house and frantically bangs on the door
JESSIE
HELP! HELP! Please open the door!
OPTION A:The door creaks open she can see nothing but darkness
inside the farmhouse she walks inside the door slams shut.
OPTION B:The door opens and CHRIS is standing there. Cut to Jessies
face then END.
11SCREEN GOES BLACK
JESSIE screams
Then the same humming starts.
THE END

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  • 1. Jack out the box – Short film Page |1 “Jack out the box” Written and directed by: Vanessa Lorriman and Ellie Beazley Second draft
  • 2. Jack out the box – Short film Page |2 1 INT. JESSIE BEDROOM – DAY 1 2100 Alone in room, party music is playing within the background. JESSIE is sat in front of her bedroom applying makeupcamera looking from over her shoulder. Bedroom is matured with neutral walls (Creamy colour) showing that she is grown up, double bed and mirror lit up with fairy lights around the edge of it also „CHRIS <3‟ written with lip stick upon the mirror. PAN UPWARDS of JESSIES feet to the top of her head exposing her outfit which will be a party dress. The dress will not be exposing too much of her body. CUT TO: 2 INT. INSIDE CAR – DAY 1 2101 CHRIS is sat in the car outside JESSIES house waiting for her. CHRIS looks around him suspiciously making sure that no one is around then we witness CHRIS pour white powder onto the dash board and then sniff it. CHRIS then starts to rub his nose while looking around again. JESSIE then opens the door and climbs inside smiling and leans across kissing CHRIS on the cheek. JESSIE Hey, I‟m ready let‟s go CHRIS rubs his nose again and then starts the engine and drives off. CUT TO: 3 EXT. FOREST AREA – DAY 1 2130 Establishing shot of the forest and car driving past CUT TO: 4 CAR INT. INSIDE CAR – DAY 1 2130 Both JESSIE and CHRIS in car (Car not yet known). CHRIS driving. JESSIE is starting to drink so she has a can in her hand (CONTINUED) “Ravey” music is playing. Dancing and messing around (Hoping up and down almost like big fish little fish actions with hands)Close up of
  • 3. Jack out the box – Short film Page |3 the speed dial as we see it increase from 20PMH to 40MPH. CHRIS then leans over and grabs a can and pops it open. JESSIE CHRIS you are driving you cannot drink yet, do you want to kill us?! OPTION A:Chris looks at JESSIE and takes a massive gulp from the can then suddenly car begins to slow down with smoke coming from beneath the bonnet as the car comes to a halt next to the oaky forest. OPTION B:CHRIS looks at JESSIE and takes a massive gulp from the can. Then suddenly the car hits a bump in the road and CHRIS loses control of the car. 5. SCREEN GOES BLACK – DAY 1 2134 6. EXT. OUTSIDE THE CAR NEXT TO WOODS DAY 1 2135 CHRIS is leaning over the bonnet of the car using a torch to see while he is messing around with the engine. CHRIS For fuck sake, this is typical! JESSIE Calm down we will just phone someone at the party and get them to come get us JESSIE flips out phone however she has no reception. Puts phone in air trying to gain reception whilst walking around the car JESSIE Ermm I cannot seem to find any reception CHRIS slams the bonnet of the car in anger. He grabs the GPS out the car and a close up of the GPS shows that the destination is not too far. CHRIS Look! The party is like just through this forest, just chill out and follow me. The car can stay here. CHRIS walks into the forest; JESSIE then runs after him grabbing his hand tight once she gets to CHRIS. (CONTINUED) CUT TO: 7 EXT IN THE FOREST – DAY 1 2200
  • 4. Jack out the box – Short film Page |4 CHRIS holding JESSIE around the waist securely pulling her into him. Walking looking around the forest slow gradual steps. JESSIE has a very scared/worried look upon her face whereas CHRIS is calm and relaxed. The forest goes on as far as the eye can see nothing but trees surrounding them, hard to see what‟s in front of them it‟s that dark. Wildlife noises coming from every direction from owls and flutters of wings. JESSIE CHRIS are you sure you know where we are going? I think we are lost CHRIS Obviously I know where we are just another 5 minute or so walk from here. Then a strange childlike tune starts to play a few meters away from where CHRIS and JESSIE are standing JESSIE CH-CHRIS can you hear that? CHRIS Yeah it sounds like its coming from over there CHRIS shines the torch into the direction in which he can hear the noise. CHRIS notices a small object in a clearing of the forest. CHRIS let‟s go of JESSIES hand and cautiously walks towards it. CHRIS bends down and picks it up brushing off all the leaves and the mud from it to expose that it is a JACK IN THE BOX. The box is small and damaged and had an old look to it. There are colourful pictures on the box however have been dimmed in colour due to the damages to it. CHRIS Look at this like some sort of JACK IN THE BOX have not seen one of these since I was child, I used to love playing with this JESSIE CHRIS just put it down its old and dirty I just want to get out of this forest already (CONTINUED)
  • 5. Jack out the box – Short film Page |5 JESSIE tries to hit the box out of CHRIS‟S hands however CHRIS moves in time holding the box away from JESSIE. CHRIS begins to turn the handle round as it musical tune starts to play. JESSIE CHRIS just put it down its really creeping me out! CHRIS (Just sniggers while continuing to spin the handle) CHRIS continues to spin the handle slowly round as JESSIE continues trying to get the box out his hands to stop him. The JACK IN THE BOX opens CHRIS stares at it for a few seconds then blood starts to pour out his mouth and nose. CHRIS then collapses onto the floor dropping the box next to him which is now empty and is also has blood pouring from it. JESSIE screams then runs into the forest. CUT TO: 8 EXT IN THE FOREST – DAY 1 2220 Loads of different shots of JESSIE running through the forest. JESSIE is getting caught on the tree branches and running in out of the trees. JESSIE then stops at a giant tree and leans on it trying to catch her breath (Heavy breathing). JESSIE takes a few moments to try and figure out the situation which has just happened (Confused expression). JESSIE can hear the crunches on the leaves from footsteps coming from every direction. JESSIE looking around frantically trying to figure out where this noise is coming from. JESSIE slowly peers round the side of the tree to see CHRIS standing there with no expression also dressed up as the same JACK from the box. with clown make up also outfit closely matches box. (non-diagetic music) upon his face and is CHRIS has a pale face the JACK from the CHIS then starts the sluggishly walk towards JESSIE. CHRIS is humming the same tune in what the JACK IN THE BOX was creating (CONTINUED)
  • 6. Jack out the box – Short film Page |6 JESSIE freezes (Cuts back and forth between JESSIES face and CHRIS face)JESSIE spins and runs away from CHRIS in who is continuing to sluggishly walk behind her. JESSIE CHRIS if this is some kind of trick stop it, it‟s not funny anymore! CUT TO: 9 EXT IN THE FOREST DAY 1 2230 More fast pace shots of JESSIE running through the forest heavy breathing. Out of nowhere CHRIS steps in front of JESSIES path (Humming tune) JESSIE skids falling over but quickly gets back up and continues running across the other direction Yet again CHRIS slumps into JESSIES path (Humming tune) JESSIE AHHHH what‟s wrong with you? JESSIE then spins round and runs the opposite way again this time she sees a small cottage farm house with its lights on. JESSIE sees the small farm house in the distance and runs towards it down a muddy road truck leading straight to the entrance of the farm house. 10 EXT AT THE FARM HOUSE DAY 1 2243 JESSIE reaches the farm house and frantically bangs on the door JESSIE HELP! HELP! Please open the door! OPTION A:The door creaks open she can see nothing but darkness inside the farmhouse she walks inside the door slams shut. OPTION B:The door opens and CHRIS is standing there. Cut to Jessies face then END. 11SCREEN GOES BLACK JESSIE screams Then the same humming starts. THE END