Written Wednesday, August 26, 2026
I improved the script of The Death Of Lourdes Leal Part 1 And Part 2.
I improved the dialogue of the script of The Death Of Lourdes Leal Part 1 And Part 2.
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I made a mistake. I wrote:
"Buddha got a third form."
I should've wrote:
"Buddha got a third eye. Also, Buddha has a first form. Additionally, Buddha has a second form. More to come, Buddha has a third form."
Also, I should've wrote:
"Also, I support worker councils."
I made a mistake. I wrote:
Two mentally ill mutant girls are eating their poo. The girl, on the left, is a Northern Hairy-nosed Wombat-human hybrid. Her name is Sarah Smith. Sarah Smith is eighteen years old. Sarah Smith is from Idaho.
The girl, on the right, is a hairy frog-human hybrid; has hairy frog Wolverine-like claws. Her name is Molly Johnson. Molly Johnson is also eighteen years old. Molly Johnson is also from Idaho.
Dido: In my other story, the girl, on the left, is a Northern Hairy-nosed Wombat-human hybrid. Her name is Sarah Smith. Sarah Smith is eighteen years old. Sarah Smith is from one of the boring states in the United States of America, Idaho.
The girl, on the right, is a hairy frog-human hybrid; has hairy frog Wolverine-like claws. Her name is Molly Johnson. Molly Johnson is also eighteen years old. Molly Johnson is also from one of of the boring states in the United States of America, Idaho.
I should've wrote:
"Two mentally ill mutant girls are eating their poo. The girl, on the left, is a Northern Hairy-nosed Wombat-human hybrid. Her name is Sarah Smith. Sarah Smith is white girl. Sarah Smith is eighteen years old. Sarah Smith used to be a black haired girl. Sarah Smith is from Idaho.
The girl, on the right, is a hairy frog-human hybrid; has hairy frog Wolverine-like claws. Her name is Molly Johnson. Molly Johnson is also a white girl. Molly Johnson is also eighteen years old. Molly Johnson used to be a blonde girl. Molly Johnson is also from Idaho.
Dido: In my other story, the girl, on the left, is a Northern Hairy-nosed Wombat-human hybrid. Her name is Sarah Smith. Sarah Smith is a white girl. Sarah Smith is eighteen years old. Sarah Smith used to be a black haired girl. Sarah Smith is from one of the boring states in the United States of America, Idaho.
The girl, on the right, is a hairy frog-human hybrid; has hairy frog Wolverine-like claws. Her name is Molly Johnson. Molly Johnson is also eighteen years old. Molly Johnson used to be blonde girl. Molly Johnson is also from one of the boring states in the United States of America, Idaho."