Written Wednesday, August 26, 2026
I improved the script of The Death Of Lourdes Leal Part 1 And Part 2.
I improved the dialogue of the script of The Death Of Lourdes Leal Part 1 And Part 2.
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I made a mistake. I wrote:
"Two mentally mutant girls are eating their poo. The girl, on the left is a Northern Hairy-nosed Wombat-human hybrid. The girl, on the right is a hairy frog-human hybrid; has hair frog Wolverine-like claws.
Dido: In my other story, the girl, on the left is a Northern Hairy-nosed Wombat-human hybrid. Her name is Sarah Smith. Sarah Smith is from one of the boring states in the United States of America, Idaho. The girl, on the right, is a hairy frog-human hybrid; has hair frog Wolverine-like claws."
I should've wrote:
"Two mentally ill mutant girls are eating their poo. The girl, on the left, is a Northern Hairy-nosed Wombat-human hybrid. The girl, on the right is a hairy frog-human hybrid; has hairy frog Wolverine-like claws.
Dido: In my other story, the girl, on the left, is a Northern Hairy-nosed Wombat-human hybrid. Her name is Sarah Smith. Sarah Smith is from one of the boring states in the United States of America, Idaho. The girl, on the right, is a hairy frog-human hybrid; has hairy frog Wolverine-like claws."
I made another mistake in the other document. I wrote:
"The national animal of the Russian Federation/Russia is a Kamatchka brown bear.
Personification of the Russian Federation/Russia. The personification of the Russian Federation/Russia is a brown bear humanoid."
I should've wrote:
"The national animal of the Russian Federation/Russia is a brown bear.
Personification of the Russian Federation/Russia. The personification of the Russian Federation/Russia is a Kamatchka brown bear humanoid."
I made another mistake in the other document. I wrote:
"Pablo Bernardo: Maybe... the all the Equity Gods saved my life. I believe that God/Yahweh/Allah is real. I believe God/Yahweh/Allah saved my life. Thank you God/Yahweh/Allah. But the other Equity Gods could’ve saved my life too. If you other Equity Gods are real, thank you too. "
I should've wrote:
"Pablo Bernardo: Maybe... the all the Equity Masters saved my life. I believe that God/Yahweh/Allah is real. I believe God/Yahweh/Allah saved my life. Thank you God/Yahweh/Allah. But the other Equity Masterscould’vesavedmylifetoo.IfyouotherEquityMastersarereal,thankyoutoo."Imadeanothermistakeintheotherdocument.Ishould'vewrote:"PabloBernardo:Wow!I’msurprisedyoumemorizedthescientificnamesofallthoseplants!You’rereallysmart."Ishould'vealsowrite"Buddhagotathirdeye."