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Peer Review Exercise 4
1. 1. What is the primary idea of
the content in the articles?
There are many people who use cell phone
while driving the car. It is a very
dangerous act. This article is written
about how to ban the use of cell phones in
cars. Talking on a cell phone while
driving causes impairment on par with
drunk driving. This article is very
important for the driver of an automobile.
2. 2. Do you think the individual sections and
headings in the document (articles) clearly
represent the idea that was communicated.
Explain the reasons behind your comments.
Yes, I do. This article has plainly written
the procedure. For example, step 1 is
Check local laws related to driving while
talking on a cell phone and driving while
texting. Use these as a baseline for
crafting your own family or business
policy. So this article is very
comprehensible.
3. 3. What details are included in
the articles?
When say what kind of thing is written;
about a method to prohibit that use a
mobile telephone during driving,"According
to a University of Utah study, talking on
a cell phone while driving causes
impairment on par with drunk driving."It
is written based on a fact.In addition, I
do that I confirm a law.
4. 4. Was there anything that was
confusing? If so, what is it?
I did not understand it about the following
sentences well."Check local laws related
to driving while talking on a cell phone
and driving while texting. Use these as a
baseline for crafting your own family or
business policy. According to the
Governors Highway Safety Association, 25
states and the District of Columbia
currently ban any use of a cell phone,
whether it's hands-free or not, for novice
drivers."
5. 5. What is good about the
writing? Why is it good?
This article is written about reasons for
banning cell phone use when driving. It is
very important. Traffic collisions,
accidents and near misses are concerns for
all drivers. Since a number of drivers use
cell phones while driving, all drivers and
passengers are potentially effected.
Accidents reported by police officers
suggest that driver distraction and
inattention account for 25 percent to 50
percent of traffic crashes
6. 6. Are there any errors that
need to be corrected?
No, there aren't.
Because in the first article is written
accurately attention to
headings How To Ban the Use of Cell Phone
in Cars.
Even the second article is written
accurately attention to
headings Reasons for Banning Cell Phone Use
When Driving.
Two articles meet to headings.
Therefore,this article need not be
corrected.