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1. What is the primary idea of
 the content in the articles?


There are many people who use cell phone
    while driving the car. It is a very
  dangerous act. This article is written
about how to ban the use of cell phones in
    cars. Talking on a cell phone while
   driving causes impairment on par with
    drunk driving. This article is very
important for the driver of an automobile.
2. Do you think the individual sections and
headings in the document (articles) clearly
represent the idea that was communicated.
Explain the reasons behind your comments.

Yes, I do. This article has plainly written
 the procedure. For example, step 1 is
 Check local laws related to driving while
 talking on a cell phone and driving while
 texting. Use these as a baseline for
 crafting your own family or business
 policy. So this article is very
 comprehensible.
3. What details are included in
         the articles?


When say what kind of thing is written;
 about a method to prohibit that use a
 mobile telephone during driving,"According
 to a University of Utah study, talking on
 a cell phone while driving causes
 impairment on par with drunk driving."It
 is written based on a fact.In addition, I
 do that I confirm a law.
4. Was there anything that was
confusing? If so, what is it?

I did not understand it about the following
  sentences well."Check local laws related
  to driving while talking on a cell phone
  and driving while texting. Use these as a
  baseline for crafting your own family or
      business policy. According to the
  Governors Highway Safety Association, 25
     states and the District of Columbia
   currently ban any use of a cell phone,
 whether it's hands-free or not, for novice
                  drivers."
5. What is good about the
     writing? Why is it good?

This article is written about reasons for
 banning cell phone use when driving. It is
 very important. Traffic collisions,
 accidents and near misses are concerns for
 all drivers. Since a number of drivers use
 cell phones while driving, all drivers and
 passengers are potentially effected.
 Accidents reported by police officers
 suggest that driver distraction and
 inattention account for 25 percent to 50
 percent of traffic crashes
6. Are there any errors that
      need to be corrected?
No, there aren't.
Because in the first article is written
 accurately attention to
headings How To Ban the Use of Cell Phone
 in Cars.
Even the second article is written
 accurately attention to
headings Reasons for Banning Cell Phone Use
 When Driving.
Two articles meet to headings.
Therefore,this article need not be
 corrected.

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Peer Review Exercise 4

  • 1. 1. What is the primary idea of the content in the articles? There are many people who use cell phone while driving the car. It is a very dangerous act. This article is written about how to ban the use of cell phones in cars. Talking on a cell phone while driving causes impairment on par with drunk driving. This article is very important for the driver of an automobile.
  • 2. 2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. Yes, I do. This article has plainly written the procedure. For example, step 1 is Check local laws related to driving while talking on a cell phone and driving while texting. Use these as a baseline for crafting your own family or business policy. So this article is very comprehensible.
  • 3. 3. What details are included in the articles? When say what kind of thing is written; about a method to prohibit that use a mobile telephone during driving,"According to a University of Utah study, talking on a cell phone while driving causes impairment on par with drunk driving."It is written based on a fact.In addition, I do that I confirm a law.
  • 4. 4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? I did not understand it about the following sentences well."Check local laws related to driving while talking on a cell phone and driving while texting. Use these as a baseline for crafting your own family or business policy. According to the Governors Highway Safety Association, 25 states and the District of Columbia currently ban any use of a cell phone, whether it's hands-free or not, for novice drivers."
  • 5. 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? This article is written about reasons for banning cell phone use when driving. It is very important. Traffic collisions, accidents and near misses are concerns for all drivers. Since a number of drivers use cell phones while driving, all drivers and passengers are potentially effected. Accidents reported by police officers suggest that driver distraction and inattention account for 25 percent to 50 percent of traffic crashes
  • 6. 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? No, there aren't. Because in the first article is written accurately attention to headings How To Ban the Use of Cell Phone in Cars. Even the second article is written accurately attention to headings Reasons for Banning Cell Phone Use When Driving. Two articles meet to headings. Therefore,this article need not be corrected.