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Lawson Palomar College Week 3 Day 1

  1. 1. ESL 102 <ul><li>Week 3 Day 1 </li></ul><ul><li>Mr. Lawson </li></ul>
  2. 2. Freewrite <ul><li>Please write for ten minutes about anything you would like. The point of this task is to write continuously for ten minutes. Do not stop writing. </li></ul>
  3. 3. Quiz #2 You may not have anything on your desk. You may not discuss answers with anyone. Break those two rules, and you will receive a “zero” on the quiz. You have 10 minutes to complete this quiz. Please complete the quiz using your Scantron. Write your name on your Scantron. Please do not write on the quiz. Hand in the quiz and your Scantron when you are finished. Read FWD Entries 21-23 when done.
  4. 4. WoTD <ul><li>crucial (adj.) – extremely important or necessary Example: “Her work has been crucial to the project's success.” Example: “It is crucial that we ban every book we can find.” Related Words: crucially </li></ul>
  5. 5. You Wrote ‘Em <ul><li>I could not felt &quot;love&quot; from parents, so I always felt frustration at that time. </li></ul><ul><li>I started to realize that my dad would always worked hard. </li></ul><ul><li>As we got older she grew to understand that she does not need a father. </li></ul>
  6. 6. Essays <ul><li>Essays [Adapted from B.o.B’s Airplanes] </li></ul><ul><li>Can we pretend that airplanes in the night sky are like shooting stars? I could really use a wish right now. </li></ul>
  7. 7. <ul><li>You could use a hook & and thesis & a wish </li></ul><ul><li>To come up with a theme more excitin’ than this </li></ul><ul><li>Cuz after all the restarts & false starts & trashin’ </li></ul><ul><li>And the edits & the quotes & the passion </li></ul><ul><li>And all the intros & the “endtros” & the madness </li></ul><ul><li>There comes a time when you fade to the blackness </li></ul>
  8. 8. <ul><li>When you’re starin’ at that paper in your hand </li></ul><ul><li>And you’re hopin’ but those ideas just won’t come back </li></ul><ul><li>But that’s just how an essay unfolds </li></ul><ul><li>You get another chance soon after you fold </li></ul><ul><li>And when your plans unravel </li></ul><ul><li>When it all falls apart in your hands </li></ul>
  9. 9. <ul><li>Close your eyes and say </li></ul><ul><li>Essay, essay here I come </li></ul><ul><li>I’m on my way, gonna get you done </li></ul><ul><li>I see the prize; I’m ready to fight </li></ul><ul><li>And I’m gonna get you done by the end of the night </li></ul>
  10. 10. <ul><li>Can we pretend that airplanes in the night sky are like shooting stars? I could really use a wish right now. </li></ul>
  11. 11. <ul><li>Someone take me back to the days </li></ul><ul><li>Before this was a job, before I got paid </li></ul><ul><li>Before I even graded my first essay </li></ul><ul><li>Yeah back when I was trying to get a job at C. Crane </li></ul><ul><li>Back when I was writing for the hell of it </li></ul><ul><li>But now you’ve got to write to stay relevant </li></ul>
  12. 12. <ul><li>I’m guessing that if we can make some voices outta essays </li></ul><ul><li>Then maybe yo maybe you’ll get up to the place </li></ul><ul><li>The place to where your words touch someone </li></ul><ul><li>See, essays are a window into the way you think </li></ul><ul><li>And the way you think gets uncovered by your ink </li></ul>
  13. 13. <ul><li>But this is for your future, your kids, their kids </li></ul><ul><li>So can I get a pledge to step it up for them </li></ul><ul><li>Your future is their history, so make it burn </li></ul><ul><li>Tell us your thoughts, make sure they’re heard </li></ul><ul><li>Success isn’t waiting, it’s ready to be earned </li></ul>
  14. 14. Color Coded Essay What the heck is this?
  15. 15. Essays, Essays <ul><li>How does this example essay follow the format we’ve just looked at? </li></ul>
  16. 16. Essay #1 <ul><li>In a well-written, coherent five-paragraph essay, please answer the following question: Do schools have the right to ban books? Why or why not? In your essay, you must select two quotes from The Freedom Writers Diary that support your argument. Properly integrate all quotations into your essay. All quotations must be given appropriate, MLA citations. Submit via BlackBoard. I will not accept printed or emailed essays. </li></ul>
  17. 17. Brainstorm Essay #1 <ul><li>Do schools have the right to ban books? Why or why not? </li></ul>
  18. 18. 10 Minute ¶ <ul><li>Is the freedom of speech important to you? Why or why not? </li></ul>
  19. 19. Homework <ul><li>Begin Essay #1. </li></ul><ul><li>Bring a rough draft to class on Thursday. </li></ul>