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Day 2_Session II_Increasing Rigor_Writing

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Day 2_Session II_Increasing Rigor_Writing

  1. 1. Student A Outline<br /><ul><li>Introduction
  2. 2. Thesis
  3. 3. Effects
  4. 4. Conclusion</li></ul>Student B Outline<br /><ul><li>Introduction
  5. 5. Comparing Los Angeles and Washington DC
  6. 6. Similarities
  7. 7. Differences
  8. 8. Overall view of both cities: two of the best cities in the country
  9. 9. Los Angeles
  10. 10. Size
  11. 11. Los Angeles is huge
  12. 12. Made up of several towns/areas linked together
  13. 13. Is both a city and a county
  14. 14. Diversity
  15. 15. Very strong Latino presence
  16. 16. Many other ethnicities present: over 100 languages spoken.
  17. 17. People from all over the world come to Los Angeles to work and live
  18. 18. Environment
  19. 19. Physical diversity
  20. 20. Ocean
  21. 21. Mountains
  22. 22. Urban
  23. 23. Activities: you can go mountain biking and surfing all in one day.
  24. 24. Washington DC
  25. 25. Size
  26. 26. DC is very small
  27. 27. Less than 10 miles wide in any one direction; In a just a few minutes you can be in Virginia or Maryland
  28. 28. Very convenient to get things done
  29. 29. Diversity
  30. 30. Very diverse as well
  31. 31. Over 200 languages spoken
  32. 32. International feeling because of the presence of embassies
  33. 33. Black Community embraces the entire diaspora
  34. 34. African-American
  35. 35. West Indian
  36. 36. Africans
  37. 37. Environment
  38. 38. Urban
  39. 39. Beautiful landscape covered by trees, parks, and monuments
  40. 40. Changes in season
  41. 41. Conclusion
  42. 42. Recap of both cities
  43. 43. I prefer DC
  44. 44. I needed a change
  45. 45. DC provided me with the type of experience that I needed
  46. 46. Greatness of both cities.

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