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Opening sequence draft 2 together


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Opening sequence draft 2 together

  1. 1. Part A Opening Sequence Draft 2 Drama Ina Bayson Ramina Arlauskaite Carolle Mafuta-Nkalu Everyone- White
  2. 2. Part B Ramina’s Brainstorm • A young girl + boyfriend • Go to the same school • Other girls likes the boy, jealousy because of the boy’s girlfriend • The girl bullies/fights the girlfriend • In the end, girlfriend just lying down with blood on her mouth.
  3. 3. Part B Carolle’s Brainstorms • The girl trying to cut herself in front of a mirror crying • *flashback* • Girl and boy kissing while watching TV • Her phone rings and boy takes it off her • Tries to hit her • *flash forward* • Shows her trying to cut herself again
  4. 4. Part B Ina’s Brainstorm • Girlfriend+Boyfriend • Boy proposes to the girl after a date (in a cafe) • She accepts • Then, flash-forward: • of her stalking boyfriend with another girl (holding hands) • Unanswered calls from the boy to the girl
  5. 5. Part B Strongest Idea • Strongest Idea • Ramina’s Idea • Ina’s Idea • Not showing all story, just giving pieces of puzzle
  6. 6. Part B Final Idea • Used Ramina and Ina’s Idea together: • Girlfriend + Boyfriend • Having a date, then he proposes to her • Other girl outside of cafe watching them angrily • He putting the ring in her finger • *Flash forward* • The Girlfriend saw boyfriend and the other girl holding hands • She calls him but he didn’t pick up
  7. 7. Part C Genre: Drama Dealing with Consists of conflict in emotional themes some scenes between characters Drama Real life situations Themes Addiction Poverty Sub genre Violence Romance etc Tragedy Crime Docudrama (when a character act an event and exaggerates it a bit)
  8. 8. Part C Why did we chose this genre, example • Happens in real life o Shows that not all situations are perfect • Affects young married couples (not all) o Showing that they are still too young
  9. 9. Part C Conventions of Drama Can have violence Love Conventions Struggling (pain) Emotional scenes Deep emotions Conflict between characters
  10. 10. Part D Inspirational films My Amnesia Girl Genre: Drama, Romance, and • Director: Comedy o Cathy Garcia-Molina • Casts: o John Lloyd Cruz o Tony Gonzaga o Carlos Agassi o Etc. • Distributed by: o Star Cinema Magic • Released Date: o 24th November 2010 • Language: o Tagalog o English YM1gFI
  11. 11. Part D Inspirational Scene She and her old Boyfriend When she’s recalling her memory (must be husband) saw each when her Fiancée didn’t come to other again their wedding day She acts like she dont know him (lost her memory) Shocked that Long shot of her she doesnt Mid shot of her waiting for her heartbroken remember Groom him She told him that she didn’t lost her memory at all She told him the He is shocked that truth she lied to her
  12. 12. Part D I Love You To Death• Joey owns a pizza parlor, and is married to Rosalee, and is a major womanizer. Rosalee goes to extremes when she finds he has been cheating.Scene 3: Rosalee founds her husband cheatingLong shot of Rosalee Mid shot of her with Two shot of Rosaleeenter the library books and the librarian Time- 7:51/8:55 Mid shot of Rosalee point of view shot of her looking at shot as she see’s her husband ch?v=4Vp-books to borrow from the kissing another women Z0u4Rhs&feature=relatedlibrary
  13. 13. Part D Character RepresentationGood/happy wifeMid shot of her smiling Two shot, Serving her Two shot, they areand she seems very happy husband a drink having conversation ch?v=4Vp- Z0u4Rhs&feature=related Two shot, she loves being Two shot, kissing her next to her husband husband (protection)
  14. 14. Part D Character Representation Angry housewife Time- 00:00/00:53 ?v=sAnS9H6sLyM&feature=relat ed Rosalee hatred towards her husband because he cheated on her, she and her mother planning to kill her husband by over dose the food with sleeping pills, and different ingredient.
  15. 15. Part D Uslovia Kontrakta This film is a Russian film about two married couple, she lies to her husband she cant afford having babies because she has problems ( the truth is she lies to him because she doesnt wants to ruin her body.) A girl who gets married her sister accidently falls down on the glass table and has problems with her brainstorm. She Wants to get money to get the oppression done by her fiancé does not help her so she dumps him. Goes to another city to get a job she finds a job where she gives birth a gives away her baby to another people who cant afford them. So she decided to do it and get the money from the people who wants the baby. Afterwards the man gets into relationship with the girl and gets divorced with his wife finding out she was lying.
  16. 16. Chosen theme, brainstormPart E for opening • Theme: Tragic (a bit), Romance Close up Flash forwards Showing emotions Clips of after he of a character/s proposed to her Mid-shot Brainstorm He took his phone out Boyfriend + to see who called him Girlfriend POV Other girl seeing them Young and became together + proposing engaged Cheating in a relationship
  17. 17. Part F Research about our theme: Young couples • There are almost 16 million adults aged 16-24 living in the UK of which almost three in ten (4.6 million) are either married or living with their partner. • So there is a conflict in needs and readiness when it comes to relationships for those in that age bracket. Some may marry prematurely because the need for connection wins out. • Students who marry while in school may be missing out on some experiences that would enhance their life experience and maturity. • In their late teens and early twenties, people are still forming their adult identities, and are still doing a lot of growing psychologically. It is best to wait to marry until after about age 27 or so to ensure that this growth curve has begun to slow down. This reduces the chance that people will later come to realize that they didn’t really know themselves yet when they got married, as well as feel that they have grown apart from their partner.
  18. 18. Who are the Characters & who they representPart H Ramina: Nevaeh The Boyfriend’s close friend Clothes: Black clothes to show jealousy, and darkNeil: John Ina: Lily The Boyfriend/ Fiancée of his John’s Fiancéegirlfriend Clothes: Semi formal clothes while he’sClothes: Semi Smart clothes when proposing proposing to her Jeans and Hoody when going out with Jogging bottoms and Top when sheother girlfriend saw them holding hands
  19. 19. Part H Characters’ Clothes Lily’s Semi Formal Outfit - For their Date with John John’s Semi Formal Outfit - For their Date with Lily John’s Non- Formal Outfit - When he is with Nevaeh Lily’s Non- Formal Outfit - When following John to the Park with Nevaeh Nevaeh’s Casual Outfit - When she is standing outside the Café - When she is with John in the Park
  20. 20. Part H Props The necklace he will The necklace and be using when he’s earring that Lily wearing both semi would be wearing formal and non- when she’s with formal clothes John of their date The Iphone Lily’s The Iphone that going to use for the John will use for ending the ending The ring that John will give to Lily
  21. 21. Part I Location/Setting • Cafe: where John proposes to Lily, while Nevaeh is outside looking at them.
  22. 22. Part I Location/Setting • Round wood Park: When Lily saw John and Nevaeh holding hands
  23. 23. Part J How are we going to create enigma • Showing pieces of the puzzle o Not showing everything o Building suspense • Flashes of clips o There will be a flash forward
  24. 24. 5 bullet points of what is goingPart K to happen in the whole film • John and Lily got engage and move in together • Lily becomes very over protective and thinks that John is cheating on her • They always argue on simple things • John’s old friend (Nevaeh) text’s him to meet up, and Lily read it and become’s suspicious • John picks up the phone and meet up with Nevaeh. He doesn’t know that Lily is following him and Lily ended the relationship and John explains that him and Nevaeh are just friends, and everything went back to normal
  25. 25. Part K 5 bullet points of what is going to happen in the opening sequence • John proposes to Lily while they’re on a date. • Nevaeh is watching them angrily from outside the cafe. Then *Flash Forward* • Lily followed John and saw him holding hands with Nevaeh • Lily tries to call John • He declined the call
  26. 26. Part L Storyboard
  27. 27. Part L
  28. 28. Part L Shot list Shot Shot Name Description Prop/Costume Number 1 Two Shot Lily and John sitting down in Cafe, smart clothes- jeans, the cafe (having a date) polo, trainers, skirt, top, shoes, coffee 2 Over the John taking out the ring to Ring in the box Shoulder shot propose to Lily 3 Mid shot Nevaeh of her looking at Black jacket, jeans, John and Lily angrily white top, boots, make up black lipstick 4 P.O.V Nevaeh’s POV of what she is Table, chairs, coffee, seeing people, ring, clothes 5 Close up Opening of the box (ring) Box and ring 6 Mid shot Lily shocked and happy Make up 7 Close up Lily’s eyes crying of joy
  29. 29. Part L Shot Shot Name Description Props/Costume Number 8 Extreme Close Him putting the ring in her Ring up finger 9 Long shot John and Nevaeh holding Park, clothes- hands in park trousers, Hoody, trainers, jeans, jacket, hand bag 10 Mid shot Lily behind John and Tracksuit trousers, Nevaeh top, jacket, trainers, hair tied back 11 Close up Lily dialling the phone to phone call John 12 Two shot Nevaeh and John Talking Clothes, phone (Mid shot) *Phone rings* 13 Extreme close Him declining the call phone up
  30. 30. Part M Script 1. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Two shot, of Lily and John sitting down in the cafe shop, drinking tea. 2. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Over the shoulder shot, John taking out the ring to propose to Lily. 3. EXT. THE CAFE SHOP WINDOW Mid-shot, Nevaeh looking at John and Lily angrily. Wearing a black jacket, jeans, white top, boots, and black lipstick. 4. EXT. THE CAFE SHOP WINDOW Point of view shot, Nevaeh point of view of what she is seeing. 5. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Close up shot, John’s hand opening the ring box
  31. 31. Part M 6. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Mid-shot, Lily shocked and happy, she put her hands over her mouth speechless. 7. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Close up, Lily’s face crying as John propose to her. 8. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Extreme Close up, John putting the ring on Lily’s finger. 9. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Long shot, John and Nevaeh holding hands, walking in the park. John’s wearing gray trousers, red hoody, and trainers whilst Nevaeh wearing jeans, black jacket, and hand bag. 10. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Mid-shot of Lily behind John and Nevaeh, wearing tracksuit, top, jacket, trainers, and hair tied back.
  32. 32. Part M 11. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Close up shot, Lily dialling her phone to call John, she press the button hard as she cannot believe what she’s seeing. 12. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Two shot and Mid shot, Nevaeh and John talking, laughing, the phone rings. 13. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Extreme Close up shot, John’s hand and the phone. He declines the call. BLACKOUT
  33. 33. Part N Applying theories of Todorov • Opening Sequence o Everything started good- him proposing o Then, becomes complicated- she sees John with someone else, suspicion o New equilibrium- for the audience to watch and find out more • Whole Story o He proposes to Lily, she moved in with John and started to be over protective o Lily saw Nevaeh’s text to John and followed him and saw Nevaeh with him o They broke up because Lily thinks that he’s cheating o But went back together knowing that Nevaeh is only his close friend
  34. 34. Part O Applying theories of Propp • Villain- Nevaeh- wearing black, emo looking, Lily thinks that she is John’s girlfriend • Main Character- John- story revolves around him • Second Character- Lily- John’s girlfriend
  35. 35. Part P Applying theories of Strauss • We didn’t use his theory of Binary Opposition, because there are no characters that are evil in our Opening Sequence • There are no good and bad • All of the characters are equal (no one is stronger than the other)
  36. 36. Part Q Target Audience • Age: 15-25 • Gender: Both • Social Class: Working class • Hobbies: exploring, going out, • Lifestyle: Teenagers, young adults • Location: London
  37. 37. Part Q Interviews Results 3.5 3 2.5 15-18 years old 2 19-21 years old 1.5 1 0.5 0
  38. 38. Part R Film Distributor and why • One of the six major movie studios • One of the oldest American movie studios • Industry: Film • In the film industry since • Founded: 30th April, 1912 1912 o Its products are motion pictures • Headquarters: California, US • They also distribute drama • Products: Motion Pictures films • Founder: Carl Laemmle o The Phantom of the Opera (1925) o The Hunchback of Notre Dame (1923)
  39. 39. Part S Age rate of the film BBFC standard • ‘15’ for a film must have an appropriate language and behaviour for the audiences. • There are no strong language • There are no sexual activity or nudity (no strong detail) • There can be violence, but not focus on pain and injury
  40. 40. Part T Evidence- Title and credits (fonts) • As a group we decided to use font Time new roman o It will be helpful for our opening sequence title easy to read and eye catching o To express a range of voices and emotions . o Versatile and comfortable to work with, this title are like a favourite pair for our group opening sequence Draft 2. This is an example of what Font we will be using for our Opening Sequence.
  41. 41. Part U Music/Sound This sound is when Lily is standing behind John and Nevaeh, looking at them shocked and heartbroken To show that she may be thinking something bad This can be on the scene when Nevaeh is standing outside the cafe looking at John and Lily angrily This will be used when John proposes to Lily. To show happiness and joy