Today‘s writing topic " my role model "
1. asking question <ul><li>more clues and information </li></ul><ul><li>more inspiration </li></ul>
what is role model? why do we need one?
who  is your  role model ?
<ul><li>sorry!  </li></ul><ul><li>what if I am not  </li></ul><ul><li>sure who   is  </li></ul><ul><li>my role model? </li...
teacher female daughter Chinese  citizen
brainstorm a list of roles you play in daily life.
your role models  for each role  you play
<ul><li>my high school history teacher </li></ul><ul><li>my mom </li></ul><ul><li>Yang Liwei </li></ul><ul><li>my mom </li...
2. adding details from vague to concrete
what details to add?  <ul><li>reasons: (why is he/she your role model?)  </li></ul><ul><li>his/her personal traits:   </li...
style of the writing 3. the rest ? choice of words how to   arrange details
unique and creative
<ul><li>homework </li></ul><ul><li>write a composition about your role model, at least 50 words; </li></ul><ul><li>exchang...
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    1. 1. Today‘s writing topic &quot; my role model &quot;
    2. 2. 1. asking question <ul><li>more clues and information </li></ul><ul><li>more inspiration </li></ul>
    3. 3. what is role model? why do we need one?
    4. 4. who is your role model ?
    5. 5. <ul><li>sorry! </li></ul><ul><li>what if I am not </li></ul><ul><li>sure who is </li></ul><ul><li>my role model? </li></ul>
    6. 6. teacher female daughter Chinese citizen
    7. 7. brainstorm a list of roles you play in daily life.
    8. 8. your role models for each role you play
    9. 9. <ul><li>my high school history teacher </li></ul><ul><li>my mom </li></ul><ul><li>Yang Liwei </li></ul><ul><li>my mom </li></ul><ul><li>Hilary Clinton </li></ul>teacher female daughter Chinese citizen
    10. 10. 2. adding details from vague to concrete
    11. 11. what details to add? <ul><li>reasons: (why is he/she your role model?) </li></ul><ul><li>his/her personal traits: </li></ul><ul><li>specific example : (how does he/she influence you?) </li></ul><ul><li>your feelings : ( what you have learned from him/her) </li></ul>
    12. 12. style of the writing 3. the rest ? choice of words how to arrange details
    13. 13. unique and creative
    14. 14. <ul><li>homework </li></ul><ul><li>write a composition about your role model, at least 50 words; </li></ul><ul><li>exchange your composition with your partner, and give each other feedback. </li></ul>

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