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Learning outcome Explored the significance of the march on Washington
``That on the first day of January, in the year of our Lord one thousand eight hundred and sixty-three, all persons held as slaves within any State or designated part of a State, the people whereof shall then be in rebellion against the United States, shall be then, thenceforward, and forever free; and the Executive Government of the United States, including the military and naval authority thereof, will recognize and maintain the freedom of such persons, and will do no act or acts to repress such persons, or any of them, in any efforts they may make for their actual freedom. “ Lincoln’s Emancipation proclamation 1 st January 1863
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Half-term H/W What does the march on Washington tell us about the nature of the Civil Rights movement?  Level 1 – Simple statements giving information about the march on Washington and the speech by MLK [1-6] Level 2- Developed statements giving more detail about the march and begin to explore the significance as shown by a discussion on the impact on Federal government. [7-16] Level 3-Developed explanation. Developed explanation of aspects and elements of the march on Washington. Places it in context with the Civil Rights movement before, and after, the event. Material should be detailed and relevant to the question. [17-20]