The document provides guidance on building sentences to describe information. It walks through constructing a sentence about the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad increasing from 5 million to 15 million between 1985 and 1995. The sentence is improved by making the numbers and time frame more precise, adding adverbs, and rephrasing elements as nouns. The final constructed sentence states that there was a dramatic increase in the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad from just under 5 million to over 15 million between 1985 and 1995, representing a rise of more than 10 million over 10 years.