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Fahrenheit 451
Christian School
11th Grade
Combination Art/Literature class

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  1. 1. “We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out.” Ray Bradbury
  2. 2.    Clear thesis statement Coherence and Clarity  Clear purpose  Definite ideas  Points relate to thesis  Evidence/quotes support points Do the introduction/conclusion help or hurt the essay?       Are transition statements clear? Is the structure of the essay clear? Is the essay interesting? What sentences can be made stronger? Does the writer use active verbs? Does the essay flow easily from point to point?
  3. 3. Homework: Final draft of essay WITH Works Cited, Outlin e, and Peer edited rough draft, stapled together IN THAT ORDER

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