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The full stop story

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The full stop story

  1. 1. Derek’s full. Stop. A Story
  2. 2. Derek woke up, wentdownstairs and ate hiscat
  3. 3. Derek woke up, wentdownstairs and ate.His cat was playing inhis cereal bowl
  4. 4. His cat was playing. Inhis cereal bowl Derekhad his favourite nan
  5. 5. In his cereal bowlDerek had hisfavourite. Nan hadbought it him.
  6. 6. On the radio Derekcould hear hisfavourite pop singer -his mum
  7. 7. On the radio Derekcould hear hisfavourite pop singer.His mum was hooveringup his dad
  8. 8. His mum was hooveringup. His dad wassmoking the frontdoor
  9. 9. His mum was hooveringup. His dad wassmoking the frontdoor
  10. 10. His dad was smoking.The front door bellwent outside
  11. 11. The front door bellwent. Outside Derekcould hear talking. Itwas his sisters coat
  12. 12. It was his sisters."Coat please Mum,"said Tina. Mum said,"Put the cups away outin the garden."
  13. 13. Mum said, "Put thecups away.“Out in the garden itwas raining people.
  14. 14. Out in the garden itwas raining.People stood out in thestreet waiting for thearrival of the busstop.
  15. 15. People stood out in thestreet waiting for thearrival of the bus."Stop dawdling Derek,"said Mum, "or youll belate yesterday."
  16. 16. "Stop dawdlingDerek," said Mum, "oryoull be late."Yesterday Derek hadbeen off school with acold dad.
  17. 17. Yesterday Derek hadbeen off school. Dadsaid his teacher cried.
  18. 18. Dad said his teachercried out to him at theschool gate thatDerek had missed animportant lesson onwriting.
  19. 19. Derek’s full. Stop. The End

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