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  • Common errors midterm writing engl 101

    1. 1. 15 COMMON ERRORS MIDTERM WRITING EXAM English 101 A09
    2. 2. Correct error # 1
    3. 3. Correct error # 1First of all, women complain that theirlives are more difficult than the menones.
    4. 4. Correct error # 1First of all, women complain that theirlives are more difficult than the menones.Correction: First of all, women complainthat they have more difficult lives thanmen.
    5. 5. Correct the error # 2
    6. 6. Correct the error # 2I am in disagree with that statementbecause...
    7. 7. Correct the error # 2I am in disagree with that statementbecause...Correction: I disagree with that satementbecause...
    8. 8. Correct error # 3
    9. 9. Correct error # 3First of all, the brain is not completelydevelopped like mentionned in the video.
    10. 10. Correct error # 3First of all, the brain is not completelydevelopped like mentionned in the video.Correction: First of all, the brain is notcompletely developed, as mentioned inthe video.
    11. 11. ! Correct error # 4
    12. 12. ! Correct error # 4The amend is in Australia twenty dollars,and if you don’t pay it, you go to thetribunal and you get another amend.
    13. 13. ! Correct error # 4The amend is in Australia twenty dollars,and if you don’t pay it, you go to thetribunal and you get another amend.Correction: The fine in Australia is twentydollars, and if you don’t pay it, you willhave to go to Court and you will getanother fine.
    14. 14. Correct error # 5
    15. 15. Correct error # 5I was watching television when I saw ainterview. The interview informed usabout the untrue and obligated elections.
    16. 16. Correct error # 5I was watching television when I saw ainterview. The interview informed usabout the untrue and obligated elections.Correction: I saw an interview ontelevision where they explained that theelections were compulsory.
    17. 17. Correct error # 5 Untrue??I was watching television when I saw ainterview. The interview informed usabout the untrue and obligated elections.Correction: I saw an interview ontelevision where they explained that theelections were compulsory.
    18. 18. Correct error # 6
    19. 19. Correct error # 6An other possible option is to change ourvoting laws, to convert the right ofvoting in a duty.
    20. 20. Correct error # 6An other possible option is to change ourvoting laws, to convert the right ofvoting in a duty.Correction: Another possible option is tochange our voting laws, in order to makethem, not only a right, but also a duty.
    21. 21. Correct error # 6An other possible option is to change ourvoting laws, to convert the right ofvoting in a duty.Correction: Another possible option is tochange our voting laws, in order to makethem, not only a right, but also a duty.
    22. 22. Correct error # 7
    23. 23. Correct error # 7In fact, women are advantaged becausewomen are more structured and theyhave the ability to managed manythings.
    24. 24. Correct error # 7In fact, women are advantaged becausewomen are more structured and theyhave the ability to managed manythings.Correction: In fact, women areadvantaged because they are morestructured and they have the ability tomanage many things.
    25. 25. Correct error # 7In fact, women are advantaged becausewomen are more structured and theyhave the ability to managed manythings.Correction: In fact, women areadvantaged because they are morestructured and they have the ability tomanage many things.
    26. 26. Correct error # 8
    27. 27. Correct error # 8Since many years, in many countriesvoting is not a duty.
    28. 28. Correct error # 8Since many years, in many countriesvoting is not a duty.Correction: In many countries, votinghas long ceased being a duty.
    29. 29. Correct error # 9
    30. 30. Correct error # 9To support my point, I will tell you....
    31. 31. Correct error # 9To support my point, I will tell you....Correction: To support my statement Iwill describe (refer to / cite....)
    32. 32. Correct error # 10
    33. 33. Correct error # 10Since many years women fight for theirrights.
    34. 34. Correct error # 10Since many years women fight for theirrights.Correction: For many years, women havebeen fighting for their rights.
    35. 35. Correct error # 11
    36. 36. Correct error # 11In today society, women have animportant role.
    37. 37. Correct error # 11In today society, women have animportant role.Correction: In today’s society, womenhave an important role.
    38. 38. Correct error # 12
    39. 39. Correct error # 12Furthermore, if the government obligedcitizens to vote, an awful lot of problemswill occur.
    40. 40. Correct error # 12Furthermore, if the government obligedcitizens to vote, an awful lot of problemswill occur.Correction: Furthermore, if thegovernment forced citizens to vote, anawful lot of problems would occur.
    41. 41. Correct error # 12Furthermore, if the government obligedcitizens to vote, an awful lot of problemswill occur.Correction: Furthermore, if thegovernment forced citizens to vote, anawful lot of problems would occur.
    42. 42. Correct error # 13
    43. 43. Correct error # 13 For exemple, here in Canada the percentage of teenagers who are voting, are really smaller...
    44. 44. Correct error # 13 For exemple, here in Canada the percentage of teenagers who are voting, are really smaller... Correction: For example, here in Canada the percentage of teenagers who are voting, is really smaller...
    45. 45. Correct error # 13 For exemple, here in Canada the percentage of teenagers who are voting, are really smaller... Correction: For example, here in Canada the percentage of teenagers who are voting, is really smaller...
    46. 46. Correct error # 14
    47. 47. Correct error # 14For example, when a woman car stop onthe road, she have more chances to gethelped by another car.
    48. 48. Correct error # 14For example, when a woman car stop onthe road, she have more chances to gethelped by another car.Correction: For example, when a woman’scar stops on the road, she has morechances to be helped by another driver.
    49. 49. Correct error # 14For example, when a woman car stop onthe road, she have more chances to gethelped by another car.Correction: For example, when a woman’scar stops on the road, she has morechances to be helped by another driver.
    50. 50. Correct error # 15
    51. 51. Correct error # 15Their is something that thousand, evenmillions have fighting for, over the time.
    52. 52. Correct error # 15Their is something that thousand, evenmillions have fighting for, over the time.
    53. 53. Correct error # 15Their is something that thousand, evenmillions have fighting for, over the time.
    54. 54. Correct error # 15 Their is something that thousand, even millions have fighting for, over the time.There is something that thousands, even,millions of people have been fighting for, forages.

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