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Pre writing

  1. 1. Thesis statement: Young people have little leisure time and deal with pressure in studies as they face tough competition from other students and are constantly pressured by their parents which later leads to antisocial beings among them. Body paragraph 1 Topic sentence: Youths are not granted much leisure time and are continuously piled with pressure when it comes to their studies as they are forced to face tough competition among their friends SD1: Strong desire to be the best SD2: Reputation matters Body paragraph 2 Topic sentence: Another cause to the problem is the nature of parents constantly filling their cup with pressure SD1: Parents force children to study study and study SD2: Parents feel embarrassed when child fails Body paragraph 3 (Effect) Topic sentence: Students become antisocial SD1: No friends or companions SD2: Lack of social skills to deal with society Conclusion: Students should loosen up a bit and not spend most of their leisure time dealing with only studies but other beneficial self-development programmes

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