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Write Like A Pro: Kentucky Reading Conference 2014
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5. Quick Write
The most important thing about writing
is______.
It_____________________________.
It is _____________________ and
___________.
But the most important thing about
writing
is_______________________________.
6. “Writing helps students get more actively
engaged in subject matter, understand
information and concepts more deeply,
make connections and raise questions
more fluently, remember ideas longer, and
apply learning in new situations” (Daniels,
Zemelman & Steineke, 2007).
14. Mentor Texts
•Short pieces work best
•Use the text numerous times for
different purposes
•Teaching Writer’s Craft not the book
15. Writing Standard 1
•Write arguments to support
claims in an analysis of
substantive topics or texts,
using valid reasoning and
relevant and sufficient
evidence.
19. Quick Write: Things I Want to
Change
Does Ike have a good argument?
List some of his supporting evidence
and with a friend decide if it is strong
or weak support.
20. Things I want to Change
Changes Support/ So What?
•More recess Increased exercise, less fidgety
in class
Fresh Air, think more clearly,
concentrate
Get my own room
Get my ears pierced
Stay up later
No more uniforms
21. Hey, Little Ant
by Phillip and Hannah Hoose
Illustrated by Debbie Tilley
22. To squish or not to squish!
Who has the strongest argument?
Boy Ant
Opinion
*Supporting Details
Opinion
*Supporting Details
HO
28. What are the facts?
http://www.collier.k12.fl.us/weblessons/webquest/heylittleant/index.htm
Nonfiction books:
• Are You an Ant? by Judy Allen
• Time For Kids: Ants!
• The Life and Times of the
Ant by Charles Micucci
• Inside an Ant Colony by Allan Fowler
• National Geographic Readers: Ants
by Melissa Stewart
29. Hey, Little
Ant
http://www.cmnonl
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31. Writing Anchor Std. 2
•Write
informative/explanatory
texts to examine and
convey complex ideas
and information clearly
and accurately through
the effective selection,
organization, and
analysis of content.
32. Elements of Informational Texts
•Author’s purpose
•Major ideas
•Supporting details
•Visual support
•Vocabulary
33. What are you wondering?
•Start with what you
don’t know.
•What questions do you
have?
•Let questions drive the
research.
48. Writing Anchor Std. 3
•Write narratives to
develop real or imagined
experiences or events
using effective technique,
well-chosen details, and
well-structured
sequences.
Make writing journal with folding paper in half and tearing edges ½ inch in on fold to make journal
Handout standards placemats to each table.
If needed go over basic structure. What sections of the standards address writing?
When talking about writing you need to look at foundational skills, language, and writing sections
Types of Writing:
Opinion/Argument
Narrative
Informative
What genre might you put under each of the Three main types of writing? Table activity May record on chart paper
Examples: Narrative: personal narrative, fiction, historical fiction, fantasy, narrative memoir, narrative nonfiction
Opinion/Argument: persuasive letter, review, personal essay, persuasive essay literary essay, petition, editorial
Informational: fact sheet, news article, feature article, blog, website, report, research report, recipe, lab report, nonfiction book
Standard 5 addresses the writing process which students will use with standards 1-3
Standard 10 means to make writing a habit
Calkins, “Pathways to the Common Core’’ p 103
Standard L1-L2 and Foundational Skills
Participants can look at the grade level progressions for these two standards on the progression charts either from Bullitt or Jefferson County.
Most of us write to communicate, clarify thinking and learn new concepts and information
Students need practice to be able to use writing effectively to meet these goals
Why do you write
Label to learn, to demonstrate or publish
How do you use childrens’ literature in you classroom?’
A piece of writing that can be used to teach a writer about some aspect of writer’s craft
Mention appendix B uses here
May want to have Mentor Texts on tables
Ann Marie Johnson “ Mentor Texts: Using Children’s Literature and Modeling to Improve Student Writing”
Corbettharrison.com/mentortext
Building student’s skills from elementary to secondary, it is important that teachers consider the progression of learning in the standards and what differentiates argument from opinion is the use of textual evidence.
Handout sentence frames……..
Put teams in two groups and have them quickly debate the issue. Procon.org
Supporting detail
Read entire book.
Then reread excerpts and decide what is strong evidence.
What would you change: Quick Write a list.
Pick one thing and write one piece of evidence to support
Read aloud
Chart on t-chart the strong argument - leave room to add supporting details – (use a different color marker later for supporting details)
Discuss validity of argument – example – the peer pressure argument presented by the boy is weak, ”Doing something because your friend likes it is never a good idea.”
A strong argument, changing roles “if you could put yourself in the ant’s place, would you still think it was a good idea to quish ants for fun?”
Add supporting details with different color marker - Should see that the ants argument is stronger, but not supported with details
To help with supporting details -Leads into incorporating the nonfiction books as the next step
http://www.collier.k12.fl.us/weblessons/webquest/heylittleant/index.htm
Gradual Release – Read and chart facts
Read aloud – whole group
Read in pairs
Read individually
Add the relevant details to the ant argument on the strong argument whole group poster
Here I need picture of organizer.
Tables do the sorting
Exit Slips with Fact and Opinion
Support your opinion Quick Writes
Sentence frames
Voting and defending your position
Animals, Kentucky, The Beach
ABC List in notebook
Discuss progressions—Anchor standards are the College and Career Ready statement.
Look at Informational Progression.
Author’s purpose. The reasons why the author is writing the text, whether it is to provide information, persuade or convince the reader of a particular point of view, or entertain.
Major ideas. The major concepts, convictions, or thoughts expressed by the author
Supporting details, Information that verifies or further illustrates the main ideas in the text
Visual support. Graphic representations that offer helpful information including charts, drawing, photographs, and tables.
Vocabulary. Words that are pertinent for understanding and writing about the text.
May be general or focused on content
Inquiry station
Pinterest thinking prompts
Also show grossology here
Participant take a fact and make it a question or generate questions.
Show B is for Bluegrass
Kentucky Group Brainstorm in notebook
How could you use in content
IN notebook……special people/ what I do with them or what they do for me
Or use an anchor chart for K-1
Read from The Relatives Came…….
I come from…..
Look at Narrative Progression and talk about prioritizing—use progression for pre-assessments. Prioritize what is introduced at your grade level.
Use progression and placemat to make checklist for grade level you teach.
Ask question about poetry. Discuss and show example from Poetry Pairings.
** Refer to copy of reading standards: Reading Standard for poetry: Std 2—finding theme of a poem; Std 4—how words and phrases supply rhythm & meaning to a poem; Std 5—differences between poems and other genres, how stanzas fit into the overall structure of the poem; Std 7—one of the diverse formats of text; Std 10—grade level text
Talk about the role of narrative in high school—to strengthen and enhance an informative or argumentative piece by embedding narrative. Use example from David and Goliath (two families with murdered children), when strict rules can backfire
Read excerpt from “the relatives came”
Speech bubbles: Use small post-its to add dialogue to the picture in your packet. Share with a neighbor
Practice with a painting: Use speech bubbles or write an interview
Dialogue Tags (words to use instead of “said”)
Use Mentor Text to see what professional authors do
Use speech bubbles
Practice with a painting
Practice with a picture book
Script a comic strip
Filling in a story
Dialogue Tags
Dissect the lead with a partner, share out
How do you use childrens’ literature in you classroom?’
A piece of writing that can be used to teach a writer about some aspect of writer’s craft
Mention appendix B uses here
Book Pass at each Table of Mentor text, record and make notes on recording sheet…..15 minutes