Josiah Spence Typo Words

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  • BUILD: Like it, strong idea. I would, however, have the letters touching slightly because right now, they are all levitating slightly above the letters below.
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  • DISTANCE: I believe that both kerning out each word AND putting more distance between the two instances of the word would help.
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  • RUN: I would also like to see the 'u' and the 'n' underneath the legs of the 'R'
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  • Run- Concept is great, but the design needs more movement.
    Build- This idea works really well, but for some reason I wish it didn't look so shaky.
    Distance- I really like this solution. I think it works because it looks like a perspective drawing.
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  • Run:
    I have a hard time reading this one as well. As for improvement, I like Gail's idea of using an italicized type to convey motion.
    Distance:
    The two words don't bother me here. I would maybe move them further apart or to opposite corners? Maybe play with size differences as well.
    Build:
    I read this fine, but I normally go left to right. I love the idea and think this is a success.
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Josiah Spence Typo Words

  1. 1. R u n
  2. 2. D I S TA N CE DIS TAN CE
  3. 3. I UL BD

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