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Error correction 3 friday group

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  2. 2. It means that you can share information you have or get with whoever you want. As a result we are part of a connected world whose links are based on new technology that is up-and-coming in this 21st century. There are a big variety of articles that the people could enjoy themselves There is a big variety of articles that people could enjoy. Why am I doing this? Is the constant need of connection affecting my life? And if so, is it for good or for bad? Why am I doing this? Is the constant need for connection affecting my life? And if so, is it for good or for bad / for good or for ill / for better or for worse? We have to be thankful due to the technology and its advances in medicine as an example. Nowadays, some mortal illness have a cure or have appear medicines which helps to prevent these desease like pancreatic cancer. We have to be thankful to technology and its advances for example in medicine. Nowadays / these days, some mortal illnesses have a cure or some drugs have appeared which help to prevent diseases like pancreatic cancer. The high grows of vegetables will help to rise quantity of oxygen in earth. It will also produce animals have more access to their food. The increased production of vegetables will help raise the quantity of oxygen on earth. It will also improve the animals’ access to food. Synonyms for: to cause: To prompt / to trigger / to unleash / to spark The future is on technology because it will bring us solutions for our lives, the comfort and a better way of living is what technology guarantee us. The future lies in technology because it will bring us solutions for our lives, comfort and a better way of living is what technology guarantees us. During the civil war he was joined in a left party called “izquierda republicana” During the civil war he joined a left-wing / left-leaning party called “izquierda republicana” I’m interesting in present one person I think is one of the most important in our history
  3. 3. I’m interested in presenting someone who, in my humble opinion, is one of the most important characters in our history. How he says is very important take in considered pupils like an habitant for the present not only for the future. As he says, it is very important to consider pupils as inhabitants of the present and not only of the future. You should know his story. I’m sure you’ll be ashamed for how education can change with respect, creative and passion. You should know his story. I’m sure you’ll be amazed (by) how education can change with respect, creativity and passion. While I was surfing on the websites, I accept the cookies politics of the website without giving my permission and 3 days later I received a calling from a wine company that offer me selling their wines directly without any dealer While I was surfing on / browsing the websites, I unwittingly / unconsciously accepted the cookie(s) policy of the website and 3 days later I received a phone-call from a wine company that offered to sell me their wines directly without any dealer / middleman / intermediary

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