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Proposals music video

  1. 1. Click here for starter WRITING PROPOSALS
  2. 2. WHAT DID WE LOOK AT LAST LESSON?
  3. 3. WHAT IDEAS DID YOU COME UP WITH?
  4. 4. But how can you communicate your idea for the video without talking directly to the client? BEING ABLE TO PITCH YOUR IDEA TO AN AUDIENCE IS A GREAT SKILL
  5. 5. We will look at how to get our music video idea across in a written document called a proposal. THIS LESSON
  6. 6. MUST be able to explain a creative idea in a proposal SHOULD be able to evaluate the effectiveness of your peers proposals COULD improve the effectiveness of your proposal by using feedback BY THE END OF TODAY, YOU
  7. 7. WHAT KIND OF PLANS DO YOU HAVE TO CREATE FOR YOUR MUSIC VIDEO?
  8. 8. IS THERE A WAY WE COULD TAKE ALL OF THIS INFORMATION…. AND EXPLAIN OUR PLANS IN ONE DOCUMENT
  9. 9.  Read it and ask yourself if you understand their video idea.  Identify 1 good thing about the proposal and 2 bad things. IN FRONT OF YOU THERE IS A PROPOSAL
  10. 10.  Which is better at explaining the videos idea, and why do you think that is? WORKING WITH A PARTNER, COMPARE YOUR PROPOSALS.
  11. 11.  How does the writer present their idea?  What different sections are there? WHOLE CLASS FEEDBACK
  12. 12.  What are the strengths of this proposal?  What are its weaknesses? WHOLE CLASS FEEDBACK
  13. 13. How has the author clearly explained their plans for this video? WHAT DO WE THINK OF THIS PROPOSAL?
  14. 14.  The proposal is your chance to sell your vision to the reader.  Your meaning can be easily lost if you don’t ensure the spelling and grammar in your written work is correct. People just won’t read badly written reports. WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS PARAGRAPH?
  15. 15. Use Word or Google Docs spell-checker Get someone you trust to read your work over HOW CAN YOU ENSURE THAT YOUR SPELLING AND GRAMMAR ARE CORRECT?
  16. 16. You will need to write a proposal which explains your creative idea for your music video, and the planning requirements you would need to consider. Log onto the research & planning section of Moodle and download the proposal proforma under week 11 – use this to help you structure your own proposal but feel free to edit or add sections to it. WORKING ALONE
  17. 17.  In pairs, swap proposals.  Read your friends work – is there idea clear? Do you understand what their plan for Florence + The Machines music video is?  Check their spelling and grammar – highlight any paragraphs or sentences which don’t make perfect sense to you in the document.  In five minutes you will need to feedback to your friend – use this opportunity to help them improve their work. PEER ASSESSMENT
  18. 18.  Feedback to each other about your proposals.  Is the idea clear?  Are there sections where the meaning isn’t clear?  Do they explain their idea, or do they just describe it?  Where could they improve their spelling and grammar? FEEDBACK
  19. 19. Begin to edit your proposal, using the feedback from your peer to help guide you. If you finish the first draft of your proposal you can continue to work on your planning documents (for example your storyboards, location recces, equipment lists) TASK 2
  20. 20.  You will need to hand in your plans for Florence + The Machines music video.  A proposal will help to explain your idea, and provides the context for the rest of your planning and pre-production portfolio.  You will need to finish writing your proposal at home – when its done get it spell checked and ask a friend to read it. BEFORE WE BREAK FOR WINTERVAL

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