My Thriller Ideas


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My Thriller Ideas

  1. 1. My thriller ideas
  2. 2. The payback... <ul><li>Amanda (an American teen) lives in a nice secluded house. Her parents are away on a business trip and she decides to invite a couple of friends over to keep her company while she is alone on her own. What started as a small gathering turns into a party and an estranged ex boyfriend turns up and tries to rape her, </li></ul><ul><li>She runs downstairs and embarrasses him, he takes his revenge by taking all the partygoers hostage and kills them one after the other until she will have sex with him. She agrees after he threatens to kill her best friend. After raping her he kills her best friend and releases the rest of the party, </li></ul><ul><li>he then takes her hostage in a dark room and tortures and rapes her until she eventually dies. </li></ul>
  3. 3. The Treatment… <ul><li>Title : The payback. </li></ul><ul><li>Logline : Everyone will get their payback . </li></ul><ul><li>Storyline : Amanda has recently broken up with her boyfriend and her parents have to go on a business trip. She invites a couple of friends over to keep her company but a couple of friends turns into a party and her ex boyfriend turns up to complicate things. </li></ul><ul><li>main character - Amanda best friend 1 - Courtney best friend 2 –Kaylah (more slutty friend) </li></ul><ul><li>Set in : a fairly quiet town in America in a very secluded nice looking house. </li></ul>
  4. 4. USP <ul><li>The unique selling point of “The Payback” is the fact that it could happen to many different people and it applies to many different people who have recently ended relationships. It also is relevant to people who have house parties and have been to a house party where things have got out of control. </li></ul>
  5. 5. LOCKED UP... <ul><li>A 10 year old girl from a very affluent family is getting beaten by her stepfather. She is very quiet at school due to her home life and is considered a bit of an outcast by her peers, unbeknown to them what is happening. Then one day the girl has her best friend back for tea, the father ends up hitting her too. </li></ul><ul><li>Then when she reaches the age of 15 she decides things have to change and fights back to her father by reporting him to the police, he goes to court and is sentenced to 10 years, </li></ul><ul><li>HE IS LET OUT 10 YEARS LATER AND IS SEEKING IMINENT REVENGE. He stalks her for a while and threatens her, she doesn’t know who it is. He then kidnaps her and takes her hostage. </li></ul>
  6. 6. BACK TO SCHOOL... <ul><li>At a posh secluded boarding school one of the houses gets invaded by someone who has escaped from a local mental institute and takes the whole house hostage. </li></ul><ul><li>The pupils are collected into a room and tied together, luckily one of the students has a phone and dials for the police. The police turn up and the man hears them coming, he then goes on a rampage and starts killing some of the students. The police then surround the building and the man gets worried and shoots himself. </li></ul>
  7. 7. The Payback-act 1 <ul><li>Opening scene of her and her high school sorority friends walking down the corridor, she says “I’m going to be so bored all weekend on my own”, her friends reply “We’ll come over and keep you company!”, she replies, “That’d be nice”. </li></ul><ul><li>Her best friend Jen catches her on the phone to her ex-boyfriend, she says “I’m done with you, leave me alone!”, HE REPLIES “You’ll regret that”. She thinks nothing of it and tells him to “go away, leave me alone”. </li></ul><ul><li>Her friends keep inviting more people to her house on the weekend and she is too nice and says yes to a few more people, but more people become more and more people and it starts to get out of control. </li></ul><ul><li>It comes to Saturday night and she leaves her door open for people to join, only expecting around 20. Around 150 people turn up and people are drinking, and some of the party are taking drugs. She is worried but just keeps thinking it will be over in a couple of hours. </li></ul><ul><li>After an hour and a half of partying her estranged ex-boyfriend turns up, Amanda's friends do their best to turn him away and he disappears, only to come back when her friends are in bedrooms with boys. </li></ul><ul><li>He tries to have sex with Amanda but she refuses and embarrasses him in front of the whole party. He runs of and is not seen for a while. </li></ul><ul><li>He then returns and gets out a gun and threatens the party, he orders them to get into the kitchen and all sit on the floor. </li></ul>
  8. 8. The Payback-act 2 <ul><li>The situation then goes from bad to worse as he asks Amanda to have sex with him again. She refuses. </li></ul><ul><li>He says if she does not have sex with him he will kill the people in her house. </li></ul><ul><li>He then shoots one of the guests who Amanda doesn’t know, although her and the rest of the party cry and beg with the killer for mercy. He then asks if she will sleep with him. This time she agrees and has sex with him. He then ties her up and continues to kill her best friends one by one. </li></ul><ul><li>He then hears police sirens and leaves the house suddenly taking tied up Amanda, he puts her in her car, puts a blanket over her head so she cannot see where they are going. </li></ul><ul><li>The blanket is taken off her head by her estranged ex-boyfriend and she finds herself in a dark, dank cellar tied to a chair. </li></ul><ul><li>Her ex-boyfriend is not there and she is confused, she then hears footsteps getting quieter. </li></ul><ul><li>She observes her surroundings trying to figure out a way to escape. She sees no way and starts to cry. </li></ul>
  9. 9. The payback-act 3 <ul><li>She then hears the footsteps getting closer and her ex-boyfriend walks into the room and sits in the corner looking nervous and worried. </li></ul><ul><li>He then sees her crying and tells her to “shut up”. </li></ul><ul><li>He then walks out of the room again shouting at her, “you stupid bitch” </li></ul><ul><li>She then remembers the bottle opener she had in her pocket from the party, and starts to cut the rope. She manages to cut through the rope and is about to break free when her ex-boyfriend walks in and grabs her by her neck and starts to clutch his hands on her neck. She kicks him between the legs and he falls on the floor, she then wiggles free from the chair and runs through the basement looking for the exit, At which point he gets up and chases after her, she looks around to find something to defend herself when she sees the cross pendant around her neck. When he reaches her she stabs him in the neck and he falls to the ground with blood dripping from his neck. </li></ul>