The Book Cover
The Castle of Doom
Author: The Bug
Illustrator: The Bug
Title page and
illustration
The Castle of Doom
Story (copy edited)
Finn was excited because he
was going on a school trip
(very large and obvious full
stop).
Everybody went inside.
Finn said (insert quotation
marks) I’m going to check if
the door is locked (end
quotation marks).
...
… door. He tried to open the
door but it was locked.
Finn’s friend Charlie put his
hand up.
… and waited and waited to
be asked.
When he was asked, “Can I
go and rescue Finn? (yay! He
remembered the question
mark!)...
So off he went and he saw a
knob, and rampaged to it, and
turned it and turned it and
found him. (I feel there should
be a...
Back cover blurb
Finn got locked in.
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My first book

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My first book

  1. 1. The Book Cover The Castle of Doom Author: The Bug Illustrator: The Bug
  2. 2. Title page and illustration The Castle of Doom
  3. 3. Story (copy edited) Finn was excited because he was going on a school trip (very large and obvious full stop).
  4. 4. Everybody went inside. Finn said (insert quotation marks) I’m going to check if the door is locked (end quotation marks). So then he ran to the …
  5. 5. … door. He tried to open the door but it was locked. Finn’s friend Charlie put his hand up.
  6. 6. … and waited and waited to be asked. When he was asked, “Can I go and rescue Finn? (yay! He remembered the question mark!), he said.
  7. 7. So off he went and he saw a knob, and rampaged to it, and turned it and turned it and found him. (I feel there should be an exclamation mark here. I’ve also added some commas to improve the flow).
  8. 8. Back cover blurb Finn got locked in.

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